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hey man the story is lit and this is the first time i see a main character this smart i hope new chapters come soon reaaaaalllllll soooooooooooon
I will be honest I hate fanfic that merge multiple world that didn't even have any connections to each other and second when I read this book it appears to me that Alex is going through 5 stage of grief
The novel is quite good by Webnovel standards so no complaints in that front. In terms of story development, it progress at a speed of a rocket with little to no dialogues. The character design also left many things to be desired but it's a novel created as a hobby so I'm not really gonna harp on that too much. Anyway, good luck on your future endeavors, good sir.
This is good MC is more like a villain than anything the multiverse thing is like a chapter per universe or something needs to be more fleshed out would make the story great if MC wasn't so arrogant and had more actual conversations with people not just steal powers and leave because it makes it kinda boring...
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MC is 1/5 Story have contradictions. The fruits logia, gives the user inmunity to pain; BUT author say that MC feels physical pain. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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the mc is good he has humor and is also willing to kill people when needed. but there is slight problem the power ranking is not proper. I mean a person from one piece is stronger than a jojo character . you know what read it yourself and find out.
This is gold only drawback is the mc is more like the final villain 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
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Where is more chapter ......................................................................................................................
beautiful 10/10 cant wait for another chapter .............................................................................................
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very good, I really liked the type of the system and the mc, it’s not that mc that kills and it’s all good he has a change in personality while interacting with hina and smoker, the only part I didn’t like so much was that the mc was very hurried in the world of one piece he could learn a little fencing while he was there but other than that ok, I wonder if there will be romance later if yes, harem or not?
Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
will you update this ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
hey man the story is lit and this is the first time i see a main character this smart i hope new chapters come soon reaaaaalllllll soooooooooooon
I will be honest I hate fanfic that merge multiple world that didn't even have any connections to each other and second when I read this book it appears to me that Alex is going through 5 stage of grief
The novel is quite good by Webnovel standards so no complaints in that front. In terms of story development, it progress at a speed of a rocket with little to no dialogues. The character design also left many things to be desired but it's a novel created as a hobby so I'm not really gonna harp on that too much. Anyway, good luck on your future endeavors, good sir.
This is good MC is more like a villain than anything the multiverse thing is like a chapter per universe or something needs to be more fleshed out would make the story great if MC wasn't so arrogant and had more actual conversations with people not just steal powers and leave because it makes it kinda boring...
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ MC is 1/5 Story have contradictions. The fruits logia, gives the user inmunity to pain; BUT author say that MC feels physical pain. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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the mc is good he has humor and is also willing to kill people when needed. but there is slight problem the power ranking is not proper. I mean a person from one piece is stronger than a jojo character . you know what read it yourself and find out.
This is gold only drawback is the mc is more like the final villain 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
update pls........ ....... ...... ...... . ... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... . . . ..... ...... ....... ..... .... .........
Where is more chapter ......................................................................................................................
beautiful 10/10 cant wait for another chapter .............................................................................................
AUTHOR. I HAVE ONE QUESTION???? OR REQUEST CAN YOU UPDATE MORE!!!! PlSssssssSssssSss PlSssssssSssssSss PlSssssssSssssSss PlSssssssSssssSss PlSssssssSssssSss PlSssssssSssssSss PlSssssssSssssSss PlSssssssSssssSss PlSssssssSssssSss
very good, I really liked the type of the system and the mc, it’s not that mc that kills and it’s all good he has a change in personality while interacting with hina and smoker, the only part I didn’t like so much was that the mc was very hurried in the world of one piece he could learn a little fencing while he was there but other than that ok, I wonder if there will be romance later if yes, harem or not?
Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
will you update this ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????