Solo Journey {Rewrite}

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LazyG0d

pls dont give up this rewrite i just finished the other one and i hope u dont the mc personality... .......................................

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ValkyrBlack

Update stability I don’t know. 4 stars The writing/spelling is good. 4 stars Story is garbage. Still don’t know what happened to his father who r*ped his mother. (And still lives with him Idk that’s what I get) Is a slave to Hinata and Ino p*ssy. Is not full of hate or ever took revenge even when was sold by Hokage to Kumo and when his life was basically thrown to save Hinata. I get it for revenge in a village full of strong ninjas you have to wait but he never mentions revenge for a few chapters and acts like everything is normal. Gives Ino and Hinata strong techniques just because and while knowing they were given to him so that he can become village slave. Made him super strong but can’t take revenge. Can you tell me why Hokage and Danzo not enslave him even though they know he is full of hate for them and let him get strong. You mean to say ninjas who kill anyone who is a threat to the village let the apparent greatest threat to them and let him get strong. I mean I hate how he acts like he wasn’t just sold and was basically killed(in a hostage situation but enemy was in genjutsu)as he had no worth and still his mentality is like how it necer happened.

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Electrum_Eli

GOOD!! BUT PLEASE KILL THE MC FATHER AND PAIR HIM WITH INO AND HINATA ( ONLY IF YOU WANT)GOOD!! BUT PLEASE KILL THE MC FATHER AND PAIR HIM WITH INO AND HIGOOD!! BUT PLEASE KILL THE MC FATHER AND PAIR HIM WITH INO AND HINATA ( ONLY IF YOU WANT)GOOD!! BUT PLEASE KILL THE MC FATHER AND PAIR HIM WITH INO AND HINATA ( ONLY IF YOU WANT)GOOD!! BUT PLEASE KILL THE MC FATHER AND PAIR HIM WITH INO AND HINATA ( ONLY IF YOU WANT)GOOD!! BUT PLEASE KILL THE MC FATHER AND PAIR HIM WITH INO AND HINATA ( ONLY IF YOU WANT)

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Brandon_Newton_4299

Overall it’s good I want the Mc to not be so overpowered tho..............?......................................... ..................................

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starking

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The_cursed_one

Wish it updated more.

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Dao_of_Melancholy

Yes yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup

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K_M24

More dude i like it and dont drop it. More dude i like it and dont drop it. More dude i like it and dont drop it. More dude i like it and dont drop it.

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Seraph

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Takeo_Shinji

Pretty good read if I say so myself. I like the character personality and his power hungry nature just don't overdo his abilities too much in the beginning

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draculemorningstar

As long as you dont drop this one like you did with its predecessor.............................................................140 characters