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After dying to save a girl Damian was offered the chance to reincarnate in a world of his choosing with wishes. Now finally free to be able to live the life of his choosing, nothing will stand in the way of Damian and his dreams.
This is an mc x Rosalie fan fiction. Emmet will be paired with another OC.This is a wish fulfillment story. MC will become OP very fast.
English is not my first language but I will try my best to publish quality works.
Please review and give your opinion on how I can improve my story. I’m a fairly new writer so I’ll be relying on your opinions. Creative Criticism is encouraged.
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well there is a novel that i am almost sure you copied some parts of, without judging i like this development, but try not to use the other novel so much in the future
Sorry but I can’t give you with good conscience a good note for copying another author story (He wrote it better by the way). If you want to write, write something on your own.
I have recently started reading your novel and fallen in love with it, hope you continue to update!!! I would love it more if you updated everyday!!!
I read a work which was really similar to yours but reading the new chapter it seems you are taking it in a new direction atleast so try not to copy the other work too much okay.
Unlike the other ones the plot is descent and is going with the flow. I hope the author does not drop this fan-fic cause I like it..........
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please don't drop it. Its so hard to find a Twilight fanfic nowadays, and yours is so good. I'll be very grateful if you won't drop it.
all the character interactions and story line is a copy of novel by Roh594 reincarnated in Twilight. Do your own hard work copying from others is despicable
Everything is 5-Stars except World Background, which is 4-Stars because there were one or two minor mistakes, that honestly doesn't matter, but I am honest with my review, so there's that. The first chapter is a bit confusing with the way the author writes it but chapter 2 goes straight to 5-Stars. If you get through chapter 1 then all the doors are open to you.
I like this fanfic, but updates are getting slower, I'm worried that it'll get dropped. I hope not. Also - Please stop nerfing the MC.. MC has the ability, skill creation with seemingly no limits. I just don't understand why he hasn't made skills like, time rewind, matter manipulation, or reality alteration. Hell, even basic abilities like super strength, super speed and invulnerablility would make him strongest in the world. So why did he just choose to remain a hybrid like Klaus in the world of Twilight.!? Isn't it just nerfing the MC.?? Vampires in Twilight are stronger than in Vampire diaries
Please update....<-ignore everything after that it said I had to hove 140 characters.. Sunpak oven Ozark is who beep pick keep oh so do DM Irenerock Ben pizza whisk Lando oddly ornithology isn't
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Now lets get this off first the author copied part of another novel BUT the other novel is basically dead so that story is up for gain honestly, 2 this novel is FAR better written good lord the other novel feels mtl'ed 3 there is difference in abilities the main character get some similar but through different means. Writing, Story and Character is 4/5, while World background and updates are 2/5 for world you can't really do much with it due to the setting and as far as updates go it could be alot better.
it's like the story is a target, and the author throws darts at it.. with no context, no development whatsoever.. it's straight up brain death.. in the fourth chapter mc had already kissed Rosalie and asked to be her boyfriend.. and that's also in the first 10 pages of the chapter.. that doesn't make any sense.. there's also the bullshit that was thrown, like, he was popular in high school, and was very social.. but at the first time that he met Rosalie, he started to stutter and got paralyzed by pure dumb love, like someone would be childish like that, mainly with 6 other vampires by the side..
Hey man I would love to read ur novel but... your past record shows That you dropped your previous novel at 10 chapters so I hope u can kinda promise me to not drop it too early so that I can assuredly Read. Trust me , I am pretty sure others also have this doubt Pinky promise me