Gamer in Game of Thrones

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Makh

I love this, I hope the author doesn't drop it. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Young_Dexter_1905

So far i am truely enjoying this novel, everything ia perfect, the only thing missing is more chapters, we need more! its hard to enjoy the story with so little chapters

LV 14

Jasonenrick

Writing Quality 4-Stars Story Development 4-Stars Character Design 3-Stars Updating Stability 2-Stars World Background 3 -Stars Reasons below ---> First of all... [Writing Quality]: It is honestly not that bad as you can understand everything. But it isn't the cream of the top and we* the community* do not expect that in the slightest because as I said in nearly all my reviews, it is Webnovel and not Fanfiction.net or any other platform, there are a lot out there! Webnovel isn't the quality platform where you can expect many Literature masterpieces. Anyway, on the next... [Story Development]: The Story pushes onward and in a direction I like, I think. To be serious, I don't know exactly where this Story is going, which is a good thing, it leaves the readers curious. He lives in Essos at the moment and could go anywhere. He could build an Empire, be a simple traveler, IDK, just read to know it! .... [Character Deisgn]: I don't know how to explain it but I'll try it. The Mc or this story/Novel has a bit of personality, even if not much, and shows that he cares about the people he loves, which isn't that good of a thing in GOT honestly....but that is my opinion. He*Mc* isn't an Intelligent one and I doubt it will change because the author is writing the Story and unlike the Mc, he doesn't have a System to raise his intelligence, no offense. Really! The Mc makes some very stupid mistakes which could bit him in his arse at a later date and It would in the real world, which I do not doubt, but as the author writes the story he just doesn't do it. Etc etc. ..... [Updating Stability]: Not much to say here, it isn't regularly and that's why the US is so low rated in my review. But nobody knows what is going on in the RL and what the author does and what his motivation is, so there's that. [World Background]: I think the author made some big mistakes and he also stated that he didn't read the books which makes a few things difficult but not to the point where we*the readers* have to despair. It isn't out of the place so far but the author made a mistake with the maesters. I think you'll see it for yourself if you have enough knowledge of the ASOIAF-universe. That's it with the review. I could write further but I am tired and want to stop writing. 😴 If the author or other people have questions about some of my points then please comment here, bye!

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Sharkman007

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Jeebies

i hope you continue writing this as it is a promising story. cant say much of it yet as it doesn't have that many chapters

LV 14

MellowFellow

I like the idea n how the story goes. Gaining system such as The Gamer is crazy OP for world that mainly fighting using cold weapon. But realising the changes that Author brought forward, i dont think it will that much OP. Looking forward to new chapters and great ending.

LV 4

Jashandeep_Sandhu

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LV 4

HerPingus

Noice book, keep going brother[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Diosazura599

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LV 10

DarthVegito

Rating may change but as of now this is how it is.... story isnt awful but its not that good and the author deleted a comment of mine which is pathetic since it wasnt even a hate comment lol so i put it back

LV 2

aszyr

Hey Gonzalo como se hacia la parte de bolt de un poco pero no quiero que sepas que me importas la casa y cuando salimos me percaté de un garage que se encontraba a mi me faltan muchas cosas pero para que te adapte a tus nuevos poderes y pienses un poco sobre lo que te amo pero no se que es eso no hay que comprar un gran edificio que me rodeaba y como un ave se realizaron a través del aire cortando

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Darktokio

Te doy 5 de 5 por ahora. Si no te gusta escribir R 18 escribe una escena que lo deje a entende lo que paso. No como en capitulos anteriores en el cual tenia que seducir a alguien en el mercado pero lo cortaste. Trata de ir despacio en el fanfic y desarrollar al prota lo que le gusta o disgusta por ejemplo sus preferencias sexuales o sus armas favoritos. Tambien intenta hacer un romance o algo por el estilo y que no sea un princeso

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KurokozZZ

Довольно интересный фан, но да глави чуток маленькие, хочется больше объёма глав, чуток живых персонажей и гг, надеюсь автор не забросит данное произведение

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twistedloops

The story so far is amazing, nice work. ------------------------------------------------------------------_-------------------------------------

LV 4

Calzones

Haber la novela no está mal, el problema es su velocidad de actualización . Bajo mi punto de vista, podría aumentar un poco la velocidad +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates+updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates +updates

LV 5

thotieslayer

it's very cool so far and I am looking forward to his crazy chaos making adventure 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀.

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dr673210

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wardog2243

Good I like the pace and how his system and magic is set up,.................................................................................................................,.........................

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ValkoWolf

made props to the author great stuff so far I've read up to the 7th chapter and it looks promising. love the direction of the story and the timeline gives the author an opportunity to maneuver around story wise