4รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Story is pretty good! Bit rough at the start, but it starts to smooth out later. Uploads frequently, a handful of times a week. Story development is pretty good, though it might be a bit of a slow burn for some. Characters are nice, and we son't know too much about the world yet, but it seems like it'll be expanded on.
A little bit of shameless self promotion here, folks! This story is great to read through with lots of content of offer and fun characters to get into the head of. It's a bit of a slower story, but the story slowly picks up steam over time! I hope you all enjoy.
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this a great story of someone not to overpowered,but someone that grows over time, to me that's what makes a story great keeping the reader interested in what comes next, It's a bit goofy with the weapon, but it's something new, at least I never seen someone write about. SO I RECOMMEND. also decently sized chapters.
Story is pretty good! Bit rough at the start, but it starts to smooth out later. Uploads frequently, a handful of times a week. Story development is pretty good, though it might be a bit of a slow burn for some. Characters are nice, and we son't know too much about the world yet, but it seems like it'll be expanded on.
A little bit of shameless self promotion here, folks! This story is great to read through with lots of content of offer and fun characters to get into the head of. It's a bit of a slower story, but the story slowly picks up steam over time! I hope you all enjoy.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
this a great story of someone not to overpowered,but someone that grows over time, to me that's what makes a story great keeping the reader interested in what comes next, It's a bit goofy with the weapon, but it's something new, at least I never seen someone write about. SO I RECOMMEND. also decently sized chapters.