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the story has great potential. don't drop ............................................................................................................................................................
There was potential but you took away everything that made Loki who he is.He should have stayed, the Jotuns are stronger than the asguardian. It's a transmigration, no need for Odin to love him, on the contrary, it will give him the opportunity to be great and better master the weapons, the magic in secret and become stronger than Thor, traveled In 1000 years he could have traveled, traveled, save the people the kree kidnapped, learn with the mystical arts, have their own ship, the celestial ship, having better weapons ect makes Thor jealous. Le façonner pour qu'il aimé par Odin et Asguard est indigne. For a Loki fan you don't understand him. In 1000 the MC could make more change than go gambling with the Avengers.
the story has great potential. don't drop ............................................................................................................................................................
There was potential but you took away everything that made Loki who he is.He should have stayed, the Jotuns are stronger than the asguardian. It's a transmigration, no need for Odin to love him, on the contrary, it will give him the opportunity to be great and better master the weapons, the magic in secret and become stronger than Thor, traveled In 1000 years he could have traveled, traveled, save the people the kree kidnapped, learn with the mystical arts, have their own ship, the celestial ship, having better weapons ect makes Thor jealous. Le façonner pour qu'il aimé par Odin et Asguard est indigne. For a Loki fan you don't understand him. In 1000 the MC could make more change than go gambling with the Avengers.