21รีวิว
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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
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Esta es una bueno historia fanfic de soul land. Haci es como debe ser el mc disfrutando de su oportunidad y no como los otros mc meneando la cola por los personajes principales buscándole y haciendo de casanova.
it is fine that it is a translation but this is actually a copy and paste of the Google translator, there is not even any effort to correct grammar errors when translating.
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story is good but you make every character other than Protoganist and beautiful girl look very bad and hypocrite. it's like i am only good guy.
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it feels like different in DOULUO: OPENING SIGN IN TO ANCESTRAL DRAGON SPIRIT you know but keep up the good work man [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A very good douluo dalu fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Even if i like romance on novels like Douluo Dalu, its too sweet for my taste. .. .. .. .. .. . . . . .
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what is the name of the original???? Does anyone knows. ...........................................................................
less, less, less focus on word count, as, grammar -2, misunderstanding due to grammar, no plot, add random names ( if A speaks to B, C jumps in and gets no screen time)
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Overall Rating: Poor beyond belief due to too many grammatical errors as well as inconsistencies. It could've a great potential if author-san took his time in correcting the said errors or by having a proof reader and slightly changing the Mac's "Young-master" type persona.
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Esta es una bueno historia fanfic de soul land. Haci es como debe ser el mc disfrutando de su oportunidad y no como los otros mc meneando la cola por los personajes principales buscándole y haciendo de casanova.
it is fine that it is a translation but this is actually a copy and paste of the Google translator, there is not even any effort to correct grammar errors when translating.
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story is good but you make every character other than Protoganist and beautiful girl look very bad and hypocrite. it's like i am only good guy.
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it feels like different in DOULUO: OPENING SIGN IN TO ANCESTRAL DRAGON SPIRIT you know but keep up the good work man [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A very good douluo dalu fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Even if i like romance on novels like Douluo Dalu, its too sweet for my taste. .. .. .. .. .. . . . . .
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what is the name of the original???? Does anyone knows. ...........................................................................
less, less, less focus on word count, as, grammar -2, misunderstanding due to grammar, no plot, add random names ( if A speaks to B, C jumps in and gets no screen time)
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Overall Rating: Poor beyond belief due to too many grammatical errors as well as inconsistencies. It could've a great potential if author-san took his time in correcting the said errors or by having a proof reader and slightly changing the Mac's "Young-master" type persona.