MY PRECIOUS.

LV 15

BaeVida

Wow, it is a nice book. Narration and description are on point. It has its own sad fate that brings out the locked emotions in someone... Little errors but can be overlooked as we all are not perfect. It doesn't change the flow of the story and the pace... Author did a good job. Nice one

LV 13

Jo_J

Nice! Interesting story! I like the action, I like the drama. So many names at the beginning... but that's fine. Please just not use the word "CEO" in your novel. So many people already have "allergy" for that :))) Besides you are doing exellent job! Keep writing! Good luck with it!

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Butterscotch_07

Intriguing plot. Two babies separated since birth, having different attitudes... Till what I've read, I found the story really interesting. There are a few grammar mistakes but I think you can work on those as they are not obvious while reading. Good luck [img=recommend]

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Joanna_Kuteesa

I loved the book. There were some errors but you still brought of the story, I can't wait for the other parts [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

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CtrlAltKnight

A solid and startling narration plus a great plot! New hidden gem get! Please keep it up, dear author. Hmnn. How can I help more... Oh, I suggest you make a better cover through Canva or any free app. I feel like your cover isn't doing your writing justice. Please keep up! May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, and even earn more^^.

LV 1

AxlesOfFate

From what I read I was quite interested and quickly. The feeling of disappointment of the baby that survived and was not taken was heart-wrenching but set the mood for the entire story perfectly.

LV 4

Yard_Min

The start is really promising and points to a great story every way, flow of thought is very good, several pages along the story the characters and story gain momentum, keeping that pace and story line is very difficult and you wouldn’t realize it unless you were to write a story. Waiting for the horror part now.

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Yard_Min

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rain_berry_

Nice stuff.!! I love the way author takes the theme. apt title and i wanna appreciate writer's ability to Express and communicate the idea through written words.

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lucifer_123

Oh!!!! What a book , i just can’t wait for the incoming chapters. It’s a interesting book with great plots and twists. It’s an excellent book, that’s worth for your time.

LV 4

Shadow_Magus

A well written story. Not too many grammatical errors and shows the plot and characters without too much or too little descriptive writing. Really good so far. Keep up the good work author!!!

LV 2

TheElisse

First of all, you made me cry in the first chapter, so that means its a great book right from the beginning. I just love your writing style. I cant say much more because its only getting started but I like it a lot so far

LV 10

lazylyn

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LV 5

sagorika_adhikari

It is really an unusual start to a story, I loved the writing, the narration as well as the character design. Loved the whole concept. So far the reading experience is really good. As the FL is introduced it is a joy to read.

LV 4

Ultimatedaywriter

I can really see a good story in the making. Horror comedy isn't my genre but some parts got a chuckle out of me and that's more than most comedy nowadays. It may need a little more editing on the dialogue but that doesn't take away from the story.

LV 13

Aella_Stormwind

Really interesting story so far! The beginning was so sad, but showed a lot of intriguing characters. Your story is well paced so far, and Dina is an interesting character as well! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Would recommend.