Paragon

LV 4

LastGod

So the direction ur going is getting boring. Hes just going around and messing with worlds. He barely has a connection with anyone. Its the reason Superman stays on earth and saves people personally rather then create a bunch of kryptonian robots to do it. He need emotional connections to people so he has some form of empathy. This make him an empathetic character. Your MC is like a mountain strong YES insurmountable YES but also. People will never love a mountain they will never know the hopes and dreams or be conforted by rock. Even the connections to his pantheon are becoming flimsy with how he is behaving.

LV 1

Just_another_guy

i give 5 stars because you have potencial, please you must not drop this fic i thik that can be some thing great

LV 4

LastGod

Okay, for those who want a powerful cool dude who is just trying to make the world safe and prevent the fractured marvel that is Marvel comics. This is a good story. He's not a goodie two shoes, but he is a compassionate man trying to protect people as best hes able. i am excited to see where this goes.

LV 4

Acsmaster007

heyyyyyyyyyyy.......update fasterrrrrrrrrrrrr........I want more........................ black widow is neededdddddd

LV 4

Acsmaster007

dont drop the fic.........and update daily uptown 5 chaps...mi will 5 rate everyday........ .......... ..

LV 2

MetalShadowF

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Paulo_Roberto

Muito boa a história, continue assim :) .................................................... ...................................................................................

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cloudy23

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LV 5

Daoist721221

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