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This is a amazing story for a pokemon book and goes into such detail and backround that leaves you wanting more. hope too see all regions and maybe even some inspiring new twists to hive us new ideas too think and dream of
i Just put ALL 5 ⭐ because i Just whanted to comenti saw some other comenta i dont like gay things but i dont have problems as long as It isnt the Focus and everything Góes around that from what they It isnt so i Will give It a chance.If this coment stay like this in the fulture It is because i liked or at least It was well made enought to deserve 5⭐ If i change well this part wont be here 👍
i absolutely love this story, one of the best Pokémon stories around 💝 ❤️ 💙 💜 💖 💗
from what ive read so far this book is just amazing and sudunly had a thought that i had to put here in a previouse fanfic ive read the champions and elite four of the reagins got to gether to descuse the the moves of what happened ro ash and by the kyurem part where ash just walks in alone to kyurem and they just say thus is probaly an averge saterday for him and this maked me think in the furere of this book i can see ash during the palkia vs dialga him just shouting for them to stop fighting like a disapointed parent and then them going to tell him of then hi justs keep saying "Shut Up" every time they try to speek then grabing them pulling them to her level and starting to scold them like a disapointed mother and arces(sorry cant spell) just wastching laufing.
The story is amazing, it's been a long time since i watched Pokemon, and i only started watching again from Pokemon Sun & Moon to Journeys. And i like the fusion of all different universes. This is the first time i'm reading a lgbt story, at first it felt weird, but i like it. the only thing that i find problematic about the story is everyone including the Pokemon considering the MC as fragile. it feels like everyone wants the mc to be locked up and stay safe. other than that, awesome job author . looking forward to the next regions. and if you feel like, try to use the 'Hisui region' the past of 'Sinnoh region' in the story, some kind of time travel. good luck
I see the synopsis says “kidnapping, r@pe” can you clarify if this is the mc that gets kidnapped and r@ped. Or is it just a passing scene about a stranger? I’d like to know before I start to read and I’m sure others would like to know to.
Hey dumb question because it’s in the title but do you plan on continuing after the jhoto region?
I love this story so much. I can't put it down once I started reading it. I love the pacing of the story, the characters, the bond, the background.. All of it, Can't wait for more updates. Keep up the good work author 👍👍👍. I'm rooting for you.
Sir im also writing a novel just for killing time like u but urs is like it will get famous soon question:1.sir how many urs old u r? 2.how many regions have u seen 3.are u indian 4.if yes then where u live just these questions only😅
Honest I wanted to read it fully but then saw the tags....its been sometime.....but still seeing it hadn't got a rating yet us sad and I really appreciate the stability of updates and the dedication of the author.....with this the rating is...👽
I have questions it says lgbt so is ash gey for guys or gey for girls since a girl became Ash?…................................hhgghggfggtff
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a really great read one of the more fun Pokemon journeys I've read on web novel I'D recommend this to anyone enjoys Pokemon it's very light hearted with occasional few dark moments I love the interaction between the trainers and the Pokemon and held of altered and used some of the fan theories to change the story
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Me gustaría darle una buena reseña y clasificación completa pero el autor ha sido bastante evasivo en cuanto la orientación del MC y y como la etiqueta LGTB actuará en esta historia. Diré de antemano que no tengo nada contra quienes se identifiquen con esta causa pero realmente no quiero leer una historia donde el MC es homosexual.... lo siento.
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solo por curiosidad, que tan lgtb es está novela?. No juzgo, pero algo se información extra podría ayudar a atraer el interés de más lectores. Y si va haber mujeres jugando a las tijeras mis piedras de poder son tuyas.
A very well made take on the pokemon universe. I highly recommend this to anyone who wants a story to read that they won’t be able to put down until they catch up to the latest release.
This is a amazing story for a pokemon book and goes into such detail and backround that leaves you wanting more. hope too see all regions and maybe even some inspiring new twists to hive us new ideas too think and dream of
i Just put ALL 5 ⭐ because i Just whanted to comenti saw some other comenta i dont like gay things but i dont have problems as long as It isnt the Focus and everything Góes around that from what they It isnt so i Will give It a chance.If this coment stay like this in the fulture It is because i liked or at least It was well made enought to deserve 5⭐ If i change well this part wont be here 👍
i absolutely love this story, one of the best Pokémon stories around 💝 ❤️ 💙 💜 💖 💗
from what ive read so far this book is just amazing and sudunly had a thought that i had to put here in a previouse fanfic ive read the champions and elite four of the reagins got to gether to descuse the the moves of what happened ro ash and by the kyurem part where ash just walks in alone to kyurem and they just say thus is probaly an averge saterday for him and this maked me think in the furere of this book i can see ash during the palkia vs dialga him just shouting for them to stop fighting like a disapointed parent and then them going to tell him of then hi justs keep saying "Shut Up" every time they try to speek then grabing them pulling them to her level and starting to scold them like a disapointed mother and arces(sorry cant spell) just wastching laufing.
The story is amazing, it's been a long time since i watched Pokemon, and i only started watching again from Pokemon Sun & Moon to Journeys. And i like the fusion of all different universes. This is the first time i'm reading a lgbt story, at first it felt weird, but i like it. the only thing that i find problematic about the story is everyone including the Pokemon considering the MC as fragile. it feels like everyone wants the mc to be locked up and stay safe. other than that, awesome job author . looking forward to the next regions. and if you feel like, try to use the 'Hisui region' the past of 'Sinnoh region' in the story, some kind of time travel. good luck
I see the synopsis says “kidnapping, r@pe” can you clarify if this is the mc that gets kidnapped and r@ped. Or is it just a passing scene about a stranger? I’d like to know before I start to read and I’m sure others would like to know to.
Hey dumb question because it’s in the title but do you plan on continuing after the jhoto region?
I love this story so much. I can't put it down once I started reading it. I love the pacing of the story, the characters, the bond, the background.. All of it, Can't wait for more updates. Keep up the good work author 👍👍👍. I'm rooting for you.
Sir im also writing a novel just for killing time like u but urs is like it will get famous soon question:1.sir how many urs old u r? 2.how many regions have u seen 3.are u indian 4.if yes then where u live just these questions only😅
Honest I wanted to read it fully but then saw the tags....its been sometime.....but still seeing it hadn't got a rating yet us sad and I really appreciate the stability of updates and the dedication of the author.....with this the rating is...👽
I have questions it says lgbt so is ash gey for guys or gey for girls since a girl became Ash?…................................hhgghggfggtff
pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon pokemon
a really great read one of the more fun Pokemon journeys I've read on web novel I'D recommend this to anyone enjoys Pokemon it's very light hearted with occasional few dark moments I love the interaction between the trainers and the Pokemon and held of altered and used some of the fan theories to change the story
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Me gustaría darle una buena reseña y clasificación completa pero el autor ha sido bastante evasivo en cuanto la orientación del MC y y como la etiqueta LGTB actuará en esta historia. Diré de antemano que no tengo nada contra quienes se identifiquen con esta causa pero realmente no quiero leer una historia donde el MC es homosexual.... lo siento.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ solo por curiosidad, que tan lgtb es está novela?. No juzgo, pero algo se información extra podría ayudar a atraer el interés de más lectores. Y si va haber mujeres jugando a las tijeras mis piedras de poder son tuyas.
A very well made take on the pokemon universe. I highly recommend this to anyone who wants a story to read that they won’t be able to put down until they catch up to the latest release.