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Your story was great but I have to tell you listen to your heart and not what people say, it will only lead to regrets. I love your book even though I hated the fact that All had *** with Rena, Camellia,etc. I wanted that to happen btw him and Elizabeth only.but it's still nice. Pls don't ever give up on writing ur novels even though it seems no one is interested in reading them. U may not notice but there were a lot of ghost reader who loved ur novel and was dieing to get an update, someone like me. I don't really like leaving comments but I love your book.l hope you read this message and try not to feel inferior.love you author!!💞💞💞💞♥️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
This story is amazing ! the characters were all very well developped, the MC and his powers are really nice, well sadly it was dropped, but who knows maybe one day the author will re-start this story or a new one with the same type of MC and change what he wants. The dark phoenix prince was an amazing story for me and i would have loved to read it until its completed (for real) but sadly such a good story ended like this when some trash become famous with the same plot and characters for millions times
The naming in this novels is too arrogants lol I mean holy something sacred ?? Great ? Dragon clan? Bro what ? 😂 then there is phonix too everything seem to have holy great grand for Mere names of small kingdoms, clans and continent😂
Summary sounded amazing until you lost me at simp, how can you ruin such an amazing idea with the addition aspect of "SIMP" dgnfgnfgnfgnfnfgnf
The hate is solely because I can not unlock any chapters for this novel, and I keep getting fast passes for it. I can't spend it since it only allows you to purchase all the chapters with coins, but I keep getting the fast passes anyway.
I really like this book a lot and im sad that we never got to see the whole story. dhdhdhebudjsgd7ehrgeudjrgu3jrurhdhrhrjrjjrj5i55ygedh
Kinda stupid. Not sure why you would want the girl who hated him for something that’s not even his fault in his harem. He was a kid, and he was forced to do something, and she hated him for it. Lame.
is mc really a simp,is tat major simp or minor... curious before reading,i ain't reading if he's a major simp.................................
Could have been a great story,,, but too bad it was short......................... ............................................................
I don't get what's happening. Though i like the back story. It could have been a short story on its own to be honest. [img=update][img=recommend]
Not really a shame the author dropped this novel considering the end was going to be quite disappointed anyway. Great while it lasted but the author clearly lost motivation way before ending the novel since the unfinished arc wasn't enjoyable to the slightest. The protagonist was great as he was, a selfish young man with mental illness but the author clearly had other plans for him which would surely just make him another protagonist just slightly more mature. Small amount of plot-armor here and there, the world building was average, the cultivation system is average aswell. What made this novel slightly unique is it's side characters which some of them have genuine personality but I always had the feeling their life revolved around protagonist despite the author saying they don't.
Really felt like I wasted my time reading this novel. It was pretty decent in the earlier stages, but continued to go downhill until it got worse, only for us to be given that horrendous ending. I initially picked this up because I saw it was complete with no many chapters, but it was such a let down to see the reasoning behind why this novel came to an ending so soon. Sure we got a summary at the end there, but that only left me more unfulfilled and disappointed because it felt like no effort was put into it. So much wasted potential.
Story was great while it lasted but I wish I looked at the authors other works before I read this. None of the others seem to be updated for a long time or flat out discontinued. I understand burn out but the story was so good it left a sense of loss when I read that it is discontinued.
Good story nothing else to say just filling word count go give it a read it ended early but its a a good read ahh nothing else to say why do i have to oh never mind reached the word count
Dear, Author why did you end this novel so early and the action is not starting by the way if it's ending it's still one of the best novels I have ever read. So you did a good job. And by the way can you please tell me if they are more novels like this that I can read.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Its a decent book, some will like it others not, i wont pay for it though. the writing quality is quite bad, but the plot is ok so if you force yourself you could read to 20 and then decide if you should drop
I just do not get it. What is wrong with people and why they always like evil MC. I hate it. I mean I understand that people do not like naive MC and I do not like MC with that kind of personality but there is a big difference between naive and nice and good guy. I discovered that during the past two years MC with evil personality are getting more popular and authors like to write this kind of story who knows what is wrong with people.
this is a fascinating novel with cold blooded mc , and an awesome world building , currently my favourite novel out there for cultivating daoist, you could gain insights while reading this novel
I wonder what will happen in the next chapter so interesting. Can't wait for the next chapters that will be upload. Love how the novel is going so far too great job.
I just love how the novel is going great job. Your writing quality is great. I really inspires me to write more. And use my imagination to do things thank you for the great inspiration.
This is so interesting,I want to know whether Eli &Alu got back together or did he find another love?!!! Pls can you update it by 3chapters, I'll be much more happy. Why I say so it's because I think it's going to be a long story. thanks.
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I like merciless mc 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈👹
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I would say give it a try it's nice to read. I like the novel it's not some cliché "system" or reincarnation novel and the protagonist seems promising. I'm curios about the character development of our protagonist and the people around him. A few flashbacks would be nice to see how he developed over the time before the story really began. To be honest I would ship him with his former childhood friend and his father did nothing wrong. overall 8.5/10
Great novel just to less updates ! jfkdiwndkdkdkskdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkddkkdkdkdkdkdjdjdjdjjdjdkdjjfjdkdkkdkdjdkkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdD
The story is interesting🥰🥰🥰 and pls when will the next chapter be out. I want to know what transpire between Elisabeth and Alu at the end
5/5 5/5 yesss baby. this is what I lived for. let's gooo..... please give this book a try! this is one of a kind not like those other book that says that the male is evil but he turns to a nice guy.! this book is the real deal! the only problem is that I can't wait for the updatesss! so far so good and I hope this remains this way, one other complain: don't let the MC be a pu**y when he is near his childhood friend. make the MC stronger! let us readers enjoy this and let's see the world burn!
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The way how you make the mc cruel is something few will do and succeed in making you did that and I like how you make it that even arrogant people have intelligence so it seems more realistic (unlike almost every other cultivation manga).
Your story was great but I have to tell you listen to your heart and not what people say, it will only lead to regrets. I love your book even though I hated the fact that All had *** with Rena, Camellia,etc. I wanted that to happen btw him and Elizabeth only.but it's still nice. Pls don't ever give up on writing ur novels even though it seems no one is interested in reading them. U may not notice but there were a lot of ghost reader who loved ur novel and was dieing to get an update, someone like me. I don't really like leaving comments but I love your book.l hope you read this message and try not to feel inferior.love you author!!💞💞💞💞♥️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
This story is amazing ! the characters were all very well developped, the MC and his powers are really nice, well sadly it was dropped, but who knows maybe one day the author will re-start this story or a new one with the same type of MC and change what he wants. The dark phoenix prince was an amazing story for me and i would have loved to read it until its completed (for real) but sadly such a good story ended like this when some trash become famous with the same plot and characters for millions times
The naming in this novels is too arrogants lol I mean holy something sacred ?? Great ? Dragon clan? Bro what ? 😂 then there is phonix too everything seem to have holy great grand for Mere names of small kingdoms, clans and continent😂
Summary sounded amazing until you lost me at simp, how can you ruin such an amazing idea with the addition aspect of "SIMP" dgnfgnfgnfgnfnfgnf
The hate is solely because I can not unlock any chapters for this novel, and I keep getting fast passes for it. I can't spend it since it only allows you to purchase all the chapters with coins, but I keep getting the fast passes anyway.
I really like this book a lot and im sad that we never got to see the whole story. dhdhdhebudjsgd7ehrgeudjrgu3jrurhdhrhrjrjjrj5i55ygedh
Kinda stupid. Not sure why you would want the girl who hated him for something that’s not even his fault in his harem. He was a kid, and he was forced to do something, and she hated him for it. Lame.
is mc really a simp,is tat major simp or minor... curious before reading,i ain't reading if he's a major simp.................................
Could have been a great story,,, but too bad it was short......................... ............................................................
I don't get what's happening. Though i like the back story. It could have been a short story on its own to be honest. [img=update][img=recommend]
Not really a shame the author dropped this novel considering the end was going to be quite disappointed anyway. Great while it lasted but the author clearly lost motivation way before ending the novel since the unfinished arc wasn't enjoyable to the slightest. The protagonist was great as he was, a selfish young man with mental illness but the author clearly had other plans for him which would surely just make him another protagonist just slightly more mature. Small amount of plot-armor here and there, the world building was average, the cultivation system is average aswell. What made this novel slightly unique is it's side characters which some of them have genuine personality but I always had the feeling their life revolved around protagonist despite the author saying they don't.
Really felt like I wasted my time reading this novel. It was pretty decent in the earlier stages, but continued to go downhill until it got worse, only for us to be given that horrendous ending. I initially picked this up because I saw it was complete with no many chapters, but it was such a let down to see the reasoning behind why this novel came to an ending so soon. Sure we got a summary at the end there, but that only left me more unfulfilled and disappointed because it felt like no effort was put into it. So much wasted potential.
Story was great while it lasted but I wish I looked at the authors other works before I read this. None of the others seem to be updated for a long time or flat out discontinued. I understand burn out but the story was so good it left a sense of loss when I read that it is discontinued.
Good story nothing else to say just filling word count go give it a read it ended early but its a a good read ahh nothing else to say why do i have to oh never mind reached the word count
Dear, Author why did you end this novel so early and the action is not starting by the way if it's ending it's still one of the best novels I have ever read. So you did a good job. And by the way can you please tell me if they are more novels like this that I can read.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Its a decent book, some will like it others not, i wont pay for it though. the writing quality is quite bad, but the plot is ok so if you force yourself you could read to 20 and then decide if you should drop
I just do not get it. What is wrong with people and why they always like evil MC. I hate it. I mean I understand that people do not like naive MC and I do not like MC with that kind of personality but there is a big difference between naive and nice and good guy. I discovered that during the past two years MC with evil personality are getting more popular and authors like to write this kind of story who knows what is wrong with people.
this is a fascinating novel with cold blooded mc , and an awesome world building , currently my favourite novel out there for cultivating daoist, you could gain insights while reading this novel
I wonder what will happen in the next chapter so interesting. Can't wait for the next chapters that will be upload. Love how the novel is going so far too great job.
I just love how the novel is going great job. Your writing quality is great. I really inspires me to write more. And use my imagination to do things thank you for the great inspiration.
This is so interesting,I want to know whether Eli &Alu got back together or did he find another love?!!! Pls can you update it by 3chapters, I'll be much more happy. Why I say so it's because I think it's going to be a long story. thanks.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I like merciless mc 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈👹
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I would say give it a try it's nice to read. I like the novel it's not some cliché "system" or reincarnation novel and the protagonist seems promising. I'm curios about the character development of our protagonist and the people around him. A few flashbacks would be nice to see how he developed over the time before the story really began. To be honest I would ship him with his former childhood friend and his father did nothing wrong. overall 8.5/10
Great novel just to less updates ! jfkdiwndkdkdkskdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkddkkdkdkdkdkdjdjdjdjjdjdkdjjfjdkdkkdkdjdkkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdD
The story is interesting🥰🥰🥰 and pls when will the next chapter be out. I want to know what transpire between Elisabeth and Alu at the end
5/5 5/5 yesss baby. this is what I lived for. let's gooo..... please give this book a try! this is one of a kind not like those other book that says that the male is evil but he turns to a nice guy.! this book is the real deal! the only problem is that I can't wait for the updatesss! so far so good and I hope this remains this way, one other complain: don't let the MC be a pu**y when he is near his childhood friend. make the MC stronger! let us readers enjoy this and let's see the world burn!
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The way how you make the mc cruel is something few will do and succeed in making you did that and I like how you make it that even arrogant people have intelligence so it seems more realistic (unlike almost every other cultivation manga).