14รีวิว
4.16
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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While I personally liked the story, I will not lie, it was rushed. The main character himself was a Gary Sue and obtained things very easily. He had no respect for others, although he was born as an Uchiha in a Naruto universe, and lived with geniuses all his life. Any who, the author themselves has acknowledged his and is making a rewrite which will probably be more realistic and slower. In the end, I only continued because I wanted to see how it would go.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is the most plotless narcissistic story I have ever read if you are a psychopath and want to be a Mary Sue this is the story for you Lazy writing Uninteresting 14 year old minded mc on a power trip Bland supporting characters No sense of direction I've wasted my time but hope this review spares yours
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hey please try to post chapters more frequently I am really enjoying it and i found it after a long time after reading those hatefull pokemon harem type where mc dont do anything but just catcatch women like pokemon its really frustrating. and please someone recommend me some fanfics like this one.
please don't drop it as it is really a great fiction and I like the character design as he is not a pervert who is seeking only women as pokemon. and please try to post chapters more frequently. thank you
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MC is bland Characters interactions feel forced If he doesn't want to change any thing in the story or save his own family even though he say that he cared about them especially his brother so why choose the uchiha in the first place he could've just some unknown village as a starter place then buy all he need from the system and get stronger (he got the sharingan by a bloodline pill then eternal mangekyo by a 30 000 from system)
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey! I’ve been reading a lot of books like this and i just had the idea to write my own. I hope you enjoy it. Please comment and tell me what i did wrong. Or what i could improve on. And I’m obviously going to give myself 5 stars😁
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While I personally liked the story, I will not lie, it was rushed. The main character himself was a Gary Sue and obtained things very easily. He had no respect for others, although he was born as an Uchiha in a Naruto universe, and lived with geniuses all his life. Any who, the author themselves has acknowledged his and is making a rewrite which will probably be more realistic and slower. In the end, I only continued because I wanted to see how it would go.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is the most plotless narcissistic story I have ever read if you are a psychopath and want to be a Mary Sue this is the story for you Lazy writing Uninteresting 14 year old minded mc on a power trip Bland supporting characters No sense of direction I've wasted my time but hope this review spares yours
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hey please try to post chapters more frequently I am really enjoying it and i found it after a long time after reading those hatefull pokemon harem type where mc dont do anything but just catcatch women like pokemon its really frustrating. and please someone recommend me some fanfics like this one.
please don't drop it as it is really a great fiction and I like the character design as he is not a pervert who is seeking only women as pokemon. and please try to post chapters more frequently. thank you
Good.....................................Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
This is really good. I recommend reading yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet yeet
MC is bland Characters interactions feel forced If he doesn't want to change any thing in the story or save his own family even though he say that he cared about them especially his brother so why choose the uchiha in the first place he could've just some unknown village as a starter place then buy all he need from the system and get stronger (he got the sharingan by a bloodline pill then eternal mangekyo by a 30 000 from system)
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ +++++140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey! I’ve been reading a lot of books like this and i just had the idea to write my own. I hope you enjoy it. Please comment and tell me what i did wrong. Or what i could improve on. And I’m obviously going to give myself 5 stars😁
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