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Why were Your stories deleated as i was going to reread them please tell us as we cant send you a direct meassage[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i cant bring myself to like the character after 50 chaps or so hes dumb, naive and gives away too much information, hes also a wastrel and i hate the fact that he just ended up looking like the goddess
I didn't even master 15 chapters. I've already started to get annoyed by the addition of a new name for the main character every time he introduces himself to someone else.
Awesome book. I was skeptical at first when i saw the tag System because most stories focus to much on it but that's not the case with this. This story has a good story line that hooks people the moment they start reading. Keep up the amazing work and hope to see more updates soon.
I just caught up, so I have no idea about updates. The story is good, most of the story is a revenge arc. The gender bender is a decent flavor to add to a yuri cultivator novel. Most of this story has to do with cultivation and fighting/power levels. All in all this is a fun story, with some good humor sprinkled in.
Real Score: 3.9/5 (Because, seriously fix your scoring system Webnovel!) The best way to describe this story is "Wish Fulfillment without the Wish Fulfillment." And before you ask that is positive conotation. And that's weird because this thing is so tropey and cliche that the story doesn't actually seem to make a big deal out of it. (spoiler warning) Heck, it's the fist act of the story and we've already found out that the protagonist isn't just a God, but they're actually two Gods! OF LIFE AND DEATH! (This is punctuation, not yelling!) And the story treats this supposedly world altering revelation as something that can be shoved onto the back-burner to be delt with later. Mostly because they seem to be more character driven than your typical cultivation story. And I am all about that. The characters seem tropey but if you read carefully you can see a lot of depth, and even deeper potential depth. There's only 60ish chapters out now but It has my attention as a realy good book so far. And I want to be clear that it only has the potential to be the next "Black Clover"-like story. But if it realizes it's potential for characterization, feel free to bump up the score by a few digits.
Loving it~! My friend Olypmu (Check out his books) recommended this book to me and I am not dissapointed. Characters are fleshed out each chapter and I really like the MC. I really recommend this. Although I haven't read much, I really hope this book keeps it's quality. -Oreo_Rules
the premise and plot is good..but the character development is trash... if you want to read this, I suggest take every characters with a grain of salt..since even the MC seems to forget to think logically
updaaaaaaaaaate pls author im begging why u always do this to us i love ur story so much bro come on im watiing lots of ppl r waiting for u to update pls its so good pls update
I NEEEEEED MOOOOORRRREEEE!!!!!! seriously I need more....quit your job and write seriously to finish this ASAP sell it on amazon and even if I finish reading it here I would still buy it.
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story is good but man it took around 70 chapters for less than 2 weeks.... I feel it should go a little faster. the updates are pretty slow but manageable I liked the concept of female cultivator without all those male lead, politics and poison skill mc which mostly all the female cultivators have, that I read in other books so far
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Honest Review I've had this novel in my library for a while now and since I caught up on what I'm currently reading, I decided to read this and I've got to say I wish I read this sooner and a nice refreshing story, the world building is great, back story of characters, lovable main character and side. I'm glad I'm reading this now and hope the author will have regular releases and I'm willing to vote with my only 2 power stones at the moment. Keep up the GREAT WORK, you got this!
i am addicted to it and this very different genre and I'm impressed with story where he finds out he actually the God of death and I never expected this twist
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The writing quality is... Poor. Not offensively so, but it's in that grey area where it's not hilariously bad or amazingly bad, it's just boringly low quality. If I could give partial stars, it'd be 2.5 on the dot. That aside, I've only read a few chapters, and I've been too distracted by the writing quality to properly notice much else.
The writing gets better as the novel progresses. Nice to see the author picking up the novel again, I have seen too many novels like this been dropped by their authors. Please keep writing.
I like the story and the character too. Are you going to have a *** part in the story . Also is she going to have more women harem too ? Great story and can't wait for more !
La historia no está mal, pero como dicerlo es demasiado cursi, se me retuerce los intestinos de leer esto🤢🤮😰, no le doy mala calificación porque es solo me gusto y la historia esta bien, pero enserio🤮🤮🤮...
Template. A template hero. Template character traits of the hero. Template plot moves and turns. Nothing new. _________________________________________
Story is good, 10/10 would recommend LOL XD.................................................................................................
this novel is great although at one part i didn't understand a chapter, This is what im looking for in female mc cultivation novels it's still great I recommend reading it
Let me start with the reason of the low score, First is the story, this is the cultivation type of world, but it feels like the author is trying to merge a isekai type of story, and a bad one, with a slow life. Conclusion, there is no bad choices for the MC just results. Second is the MC, this one is badly tought, i know i sound malicious but there is a reason. Memories. When combining the child and the male, there must be a change, minimal, but a change the same. Then there is the goddess, this is a heavy personality change, but the author doesn´t point it. Three, the cultivation realms, they sound good, but they are a miss, can´t remember, will never remember. Conclusion, author i recomend to ask someone for ideas that will make the story more linear with the intention wished, and to repair my points for the plot holes that they are.
Very good story, although I've read other stories that have the name Zeruna in it is it a common name or are you the same author? just asking out of curiosity.
an overall Nice read and good novel. Hook me from the start until i ran out of chapters. Nice job and keep going. ty for the read author. <3
Interesting story so far, but I'm not sure if English is not the author's first language or if the chapters have just not been proofread. There are several errors that can be fixed by spending a bit of time proofreading along with decent knowledge of English. Overall the writing is understandable, though not the best. To potential readers, I would recommend trying to read the novel and seeing if you like it, but keep in mind the first 2 chapters are basically the background settings of the novel.
Why did you delete it so what if your not going to be a creator anymore. I can't post this question unless I rate so a standard 3.0 should do
Why were Your stories deleated as i was going to reread them please tell us as we cant send you a direct meassage[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i cant bring myself to like the character after 50 chaps or so hes dumb, naive and gives away too much information, hes also a wastrel and i hate the fact that he just ended up looking like the goddess
I didn't even master 15 chapters. I've already started to get annoyed by the addition of a new name for the main character every time he introduces himself to someone else.
Awesome book. I was skeptical at first when i saw the tag System because most stories focus to much on it but that's not the case with this. This story has a good story line that hooks people the moment they start reading. Keep up the amazing work and hope to see more updates soon.
I just caught up, so I have no idea about updates. The story is good, most of the story is a revenge arc. The gender bender is a decent flavor to add to a yuri cultivator novel. Most of this story has to do with cultivation and fighting/power levels. All in all this is a fun story, with some good humor sprinkled in.
Real Score: 3.9/5 (Because, seriously fix your scoring system Webnovel!) The best way to describe this story is "Wish Fulfillment without the Wish Fulfillment." And before you ask that is positive conotation. And that's weird because this thing is so tropey and cliche that the story doesn't actually seem to make a big deal out of it. (spoiler warning) Heck, it's the fist act of the story and we've already found out that the protagonist isn't just a God, but they're actually two Gods! OF LIFE AND DEATH! (This is punctuation, not yelling!) And the story treats this supposedly world altering revelation as something that can be shoved onto the back-burner to be delt with later. Mostly because they seem to be more character driven than your typical cultivation story. And I am all about that. The characters seem tropey but if you read carefully you can see a lot of depth, and even deeper potential depth. There's only 60ish chapters out now but It has my attention as a realy good book so far. And I want to be clear that it only has the potential to be the next "Black Clover"-like story. But if it realizes it's potential for characterization, feel free to bump up the score by a few digits.
Loving it~! My friend Olypmu (Check out his books) recommended this book to me and I am not dissapointed. Characters are fleshed out each chapter and I really like the MC. I really recommend this. Although I haven't read much, I really hope this book keeps it's quality. -Oreo_Rules
the premise and plot is good..but the character development is trash... if you want to read this, I suggest take every characters with a grain of salt..since even the MC seems to forget to think logically
updaaaaaaaaaate pls author im begging why u always do this to us i love ur story so much bro come on im watiing lots of ppl r waiting for u to update pls its so good pls update
I NEEEEEED MOOOOORRRREEEE!!!!!! seriously I need more....quit your job and write seriously to finish this ASAP sell it on amazon and even if I finish reading it here I would still buy it.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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story is good but man it took around 70 chapters for less than 2 weeks.... I feel it should go a little faster. the updates are pretty slow but manageable I liked the concept of female cultivator without all those male lead, politics and poison skill mc which mostly all the female cultivators have, that I read in other books so far
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Honest Review I've had this novel in my library for a while now and since I caught up on what I'm currently reading, I decided to read this and I've got to say I wish I read this sooner and a nice refreshing story, the world building is great, back story of characters, lovable main character and side. I'm glad I'm reading this now and hope the author will have regular releases and I'm willing to vote with my only 2 power stones at the moment. Keep up the GREAT WORK, you got this!
i am addicted to it and this very different genre and I'm impressed with story where he finds out he actually the God of death and I never expected this twist
please do not stop writing. pretty please with a cherry on top [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The writing quality is... Poor. Not offensively so, but it's in that grey area where it's not hilariously bad or amazingly bad, it's just boringly low quality. If I could give partial stars, it'd be 2.5 on the dot. That aside, I've only read a few chapters, and I've been too distracted by the writing quality to properly notice much else.
The writing gets better as the novel progresses. Nice to see the author picking up the novel again, I have seen too many novels like this been dropped by their authors. Please keep writing.
I like the story and the character too. Are you going to have a *** part in the story . Also is she going to have more women harem too ? Great story and can't wait for more !
La historia no está mal, pero como dicerlo es demasiado cursi, se me retuerce los intestinos de leer esto🤢🤮😰, no le doy mala calificación porque es solo me gusto y la historia esta bien, pero enserio🤮🤮🤮...
Template. A template hero. Template character traits of the hero. Template plot moves and turns. Nothing new. _________________________________________
Story is good, 10/10 would recommend LOL XD.................................................................................................
this novel is great although at one part i didn't understand a chapter, This is what im looking for in female mc cultivation novels it's still great I recommend reading it
Let me start with the reason of the low score, First is the story, this is the cultivation type of world, but it feels like the author is trying to merge a isekai type of story, and a bad one, with a slow life. Conclusion, there is no bad choices for the MC just results. Second is the MC, this one is badly tought, i know i sound malicious but there is a reason. Memories. When combining the child and the male, there must be a change, minimal, but a change the same. Then there is the goddess, this is a heavy personality change, but the author doesn´t point it. Three, the cultivation realms, they sound good, but they are a miss, can´t remember, will never remember. Conclusion, author i recomend to ask someone for ideas that will make the story more linear with the intention wished, and to repair my points for the plot holes that they are.
Very good story, although I've read other stories that have the name Zeruna in it is it a common name or are you the same author? just asking out of curiosity.
an overall Nice read and good novel. Hook me from the start until i ran out of chapters. Nice job and keep going. ty for the read author. <3
Interesting story so far, but I'm not sure if English is not the author's first language or if the chapters have just not been proofread. There are several errors that can be fixed by spending a bit of time proofreading along with decent knowledge of English. Overall the writing is understandable, though not the best. To potential readers, I would recommend trying to read the novel and seeing if you like it, but keep in mind the first 2 chapters are basically the background settings of the novel.
Why did you delete it so what if your not going to be a creator anymore. I can't post this question unless I rate so a standard 3.0 should do