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First time on webnovel I assign 5 stars for writing quality. But this piece should be published officially. The beginning just grabs your gusts, and doesn't release it to the end. There's only 3 chapters at the moment, and I can still feel the stress of the battlefield. An amazing piece, wow !
Beautifully written story with sparse grammatical errors, compared to a lot of books on this site. The first chapter pulls you in with a vivid description of a battle. The World seems vast with a lot to learn about it. Small but important written details bring the characters to life and make them likable fairly quickly. The only downside, for me, is the bombardment of multiple characters right at the beginning of the story that creates a bit of mayhem at first. It takes time to get used to but once done, you're in for a good ride. I think this book seriously deserves more attention because it has the potential to surpass a lot of the generic stuff I'm getting tired of reading on this website or elsewhere. Good job and good luck with the long road ahead. Y.R.
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The grammar is great, the storyline is very good, the characters are well designed and the world setting is on point. Great work by the author. Recommended.
OMG!!! Dang what a way to start a story. I only read the first chapter and I am already hooked. Seriously, everyone should give it a try. I am definitely going to recommend it to my friends. Can't wait for more!!!
This is an amazing piece of work! The book is engaging from the very first chapter, bringing you into a completely new world. The characters and scenery are vividly depicted, making it seem as if I am watching a movie. The only downside are the first 6 chapters where a lot of characters are introduced. I persisted through them and it was worth it. Amazing work. This book deserves a lot of attention.
Awesome! Love how you drop us into an action scene first chapter. Perfectly done, this is the kind of thing that gets readers instantly hooked, love what you did with this. I expect great things from you! XD
The words used are really vivid and descriptive. The gorey style has hooked me on. Characters are very well written and each one of them have a major role to play. The story is amazingly unique. If you hang through the first 6 chapters (which, according to me, are equally amazing) you'll be definitely glued to this novel. Loving it!
Really impressive work. Liam seems to be an ordinary MC of Webnovels and animes, but that's how most stories are. but what makes me like this novel is the side characters such as those from the army and I also think the Rift is not that dangerous if you look from the perspective of someone who lived there.
I love the way the author describes the situation around the characters. It allows for me to be able to imagine the story in my mind and gets me immerse. A lot of information gets thrown in early so it took a bit of time to figure out the who and what but to me that's a plus as it allows me to grasp more on earlier on.
Wow, this is really drag me nuts. You create such a great story with the character and the world. Good job author! Keep me notified for the next chap <3
This story grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps it even after more than 10 chapters. I liked the dialogues and think the story is well written. Great work!
Daaamnnn this had me to the guts man. It's making me more and more curious. No wonder you said I'd love the first chap lol. i love this masterpiece[img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]
A very immersive novel, once you read it you won't even realize that you already at the end of the chapter and a few hours had passed, very enjoyable novel,
Even though I only read a few chapters, i can easily say that your story is very interesting and has a lot of potential in it. I find the plot intriguing and am quite curious about the characters. Anxiously waiting for what will happen in the future! Keep on writing! :D
READ THE DANG BOOK! This is a maserpiece in flow, execution, writing style, characters, and plotlines. Narrative is exceptional, and even though I ain't that far in, I can tell, this is going to be one heck of a ride.
Beautifully thought up imaginative work of art. You make literature seem so easy and description so sleek. I can't even get offended by your book being this good. A 5-star rating is what you deserve, a 10-star if it could be that much. I'm captivated truly by your story. Thank you for feeding my eyes with such delight. Keep it up author
I commend you author! This is one of those books where it definitely grips you tight on your seat as you feel the tension, action, and the different situations the characters went into. It's like I can feel myself in your world, feeling what they feel, seeing what they see with mouth hang wide open. Wow. Just wow. I'm utterly lost for words to this one. Great job with this author! Hats raised to you! Keep up the good work! Hope you keep updating for more
I like your vivid descriptions and engaging action. The story's premise is also interesting. Another good point is worldbuilding - I can see that you actually bother with it... Won't be surprised if you have twenty pages worth of lore saved somewhere. And characters!.. Actually, you know, I was skimming over this thing in the beginning, but now I feel like reading it some time later, when there are more chapters. Finishing this, my recommendation: try to use longer paragraphs? It would be better to read if they were normally about 3-4 sentences long instead of 1-2.
I've only read the first few chapters (5 to be specific). However , hats of to you because from what I read the story was really engaging. Nobody would ever know that you are a first time author unless you directly said so! Excellent use of vocabulary as well as a detailed description of the surroundings, providing an immersive read for the viewers. The characters are also well fleshed out which is nice. The only small qualm that I would have is that sometimes, too many characters are doing their thing at the same time which can sometimes be confusing. But hey that's an easy fix. Look forward to more of your works
Wow~ this story gives me the feeling like those 1k plus chaptered novels. I looks very interesting. It's well written. Please give me more chapters. (✪ ω ✪)(✪ ω ✪)(✪ ω ✪)
This review is after reading the first chapter. The writing style is great, I am fully engrossed in the story and nothing grammatically is pulling me out. If you like the tags give it a shot.
Excellent start. The first chapter really grabs the readers attention and chapter two pulls you in deeper. It’s definitely going on my reading list. World building is easy to follow and has a solid foundation. The first monster really grabbed mt attention with its different abilities and use of magic. Overall a great story and I look forward to reading more.
With flowing, crystal-clear descriptions, I found this novel to be simple to imagine yet gripping, especially the battle scenes. Not only that, but the dialogues between the characters seamlessly weaved itself into the chaos unfolding, leaving little, if any, additional alterations to the plot. Grammar— flawless, even I wish for this kind of clarity sometimes. XD While on a side note, I did feel as if there was less usage of some sensory senses, such as smell or touch, which might have improved readers’ immersions. But do take this advice with a grain of salt, these itty gritty details may not be necessary in your work at all. Overall, a splendid work, Author ! Keep it up !
A fantastic exciting battle at the beginning that will really grip the readers! The premise of the story already foretells an exciting vast world. Races and countries are mentioned giving an impression that the novel will bring us to a grand adventure. There are a lot of interesting characters who are introduced at the start. Their descriptions and impression make the characters colorful and alive. The author really did a good job in shaping this fantastic story. The author also has great writing skills! Keep up the good work!
It's a great story. I was completely immersed from the very first chapter. Well done. The world background is great, and the development of the story so far is very easy to read. The quality of the writing is fantastic and the character design is really good. You can really sympathise with the main character.
This is an amazing starting novel! Nice action start, great concept, and good potential! The writing is good, especially, when the author described the battlefield. It is very vivid! After reading for a few chapters, it has already hooked me up! Can't wait for more update. :)
The story is interesting to the core. Once you started reading it, it's like that pit that swallow you bit by bit. Vivid descriptions are on point! Keep up the good work!
Honestly a great read so far. Don't even need to read more than 3 pages to start feeling invested in the story. Only thing I would mention is that the intro chapter doesn't give any information on their surroudings. Make's it hard to understand what is going on. Also I suggest to consistently describe the scenes that the MC, or other characters, are witnessing. Helps to place the reader in the characters perspective. :)
Not gonna lie already stole some of your character names. your view on war is very refreshing. P.S stole that too. definitely sharing the link with my readers, they will love this for sure[img=update]
Love the action and opening starting with a fight with an eerie beast. Writing quality is top-notch great descriptions of the battle field. Keep it up author it's great!
Really pulsating opening. It is a sign of a great writer when they can draw the reader in with just one chapter. Hats off to the author for that. The story kicks off with a massive battle scene and protagonist and his forces are up against the odds fighting a beast. Great action, really keeps the pages flying by. Writing quality is top notch. Can't wait to see where this goes.
First time on webnovel I assign 5 stars for writing quality. But this piece should be published officially. The beginning just grabs your gusts, and doesn't release it to the end. There's only 3 chapters at the moment, and I can still feel the stress of the battlefield. An amazing piece, wow !
Beautifully written story with sparse grammatical errors, compared to a lot of books on this site. The first chapter pulls you in with a vivid description of a battle. The World seems vast with a lot to learn about it. Small but important written details bring the characters to life and make them likable fairly quickly. The only downside, for me, is the bombardment of multiple characters right at the beginning of the story that creates a bit of mayhem at first. It takes time to get used to but once done, you're in for a good ride. I think this book seriously deserves more attention because it has the potential to surpass a lot of the generic stuff I'm getting tired of reading on this website or elsewhere. Good job and good luck with the long road ahead. Y.R.
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
The grammar is great, the storyline is very good, the characters are well designed and the world setting is on point. Great work by the author. Recommended.
OMG!!! Dang what a way to start a story. I only read the first chapter and I am already hooked. Seriously, everyone should give it a try. I am definitely going to recommend it to my friends. Can't wait for more!!!
This is an amazing piece of work! The book is engaging from the very first chapter, bringing you into a completely new world. The characters and scenery are vividly depicted, making it seem as if I am watching a movie. The only downside are the first 6 chapters where a lot of characters are introduced. I persisted through them and it was worth it. Amazing work. This book deserves a lot of attention.
Awesome! Love how you drop us into an action scene first chapter. Perfectly done, this is the kind of thing that gets readers instantly hooked, love what you did with this. I expect great things from you! XD
The words used are really vivid and descriptive. The gorey style has hooked me on. Characters are very well written and each one of them have a major role to play. The story is amazingly unique. If you hang through the first 6 chapters (which, according to me, are equally amazing) you'll be definitely glued to this novel. Loving it!
Really impressive work. Liam seems to be an ordinary MC of Webnovels and animes, but that's how most stories are. but what makes me like this novel is the side characters such as those from the army and I also think the Rift is not that dangerous if you look from the perspective of someone who lived there.
I love the way the author describes the situation around the characters. It allows for me to be able to imagine the story in my mind and gets me immerse. A lot of information gets thrown in early so it took a bit of time to figure out the who and what but to me that's a plus as it allows me to grasp more on earlier on.
Wow, this is really drag me nuts. You create such a great story with the character and the world. Good job author! Keep me notified for the next chap <3
This story grabs the reader's attention from the very beginning and keeps it even after more than 10 chapters. I liked the dialogues and think the story is well written. Great work!
Daaamnnn this had me to the guts man. It's making me more and more curious. No wonder you said I'd love the first chap lol. i love this masterpiece[img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]
A very immersive novel, once you read it you won't even realize that you already at the end of the chapter and a few hours had passed, very enjoyable novel,
Even though I only read a few chapters, i can easily say that your story is very interesting and has a lot of potential in it. I find the plot intriguing and am quite curious about the characters. Anxiously waiting for what will happen in the future! Keep on writing! :D
READ THE DANG BOOK! This is a maserpiece in flow, execution, writing style, characters, and plotlines. Narrative is exceptional, and even though I ain't that far in, I can tell, this is going to be one heck of a ride.
Beautifully thought up imaginative work of art. You make literature seem so easy and description so sleek. I can't even get offended by your book being this good. A 5-star rating is what you deserve, a 10-star if it could be that much. I'm captivated truly by your story. Thank you for feeding my eyes with such delight. Keep it up author
I commend you author! This is one of those books where it definitely grips you tight on your seat as you feel the tension, action, and the different situations the characters went into. It's like I can feel myself in your world, feeling what they feel, seeing what they see with mouth hang wide open. Wow. Just wow. I'm utterly lost for words to this one. Great job with this author! Hats raised to you! Keep up the good work! Hope you keep updating for more
I like your vivid descriptions and engaging action. The story's premise is also interesting. Another good point is worldbuilding - I can see that you actually bother with it... Won't be surprised if you have twenty pages worth of lore saved somewhere. And characters!.. Actually, you know, I was skimming over this thing in the beginning, but now I feel like reading it some time later, when there are more chapters. Finishing this, my recommendation: try to use longer paragraphs? It would be better to read if they were normally about 3-4 sentences long instead of 1-2.
I've only read the first few chapters (5 to be specific). However , hats of to you because from what I read the story was really engaging. Nobody would ever know that you are a first time author unless you directly said so! Excellent use of vocabulary as well as a detailed description of the surroundings, providing an immersive read for the viewers. The characters are also well fleshed out which is nice. The only small qualm that I would have is that sometimes, too many characters are doing their thing at the same time which can sometimes be confusing. But hey that's an easy fix. Look forward to more of your works
Wow~ this story gives me the feeling like those 1k plus chaptered novels. I looks very interesting. It's well written. Please give me more chapters. (✪ ω ✪)(✪ ω ✪)(✪ ω ✪)
This review is after reading the first chapter. The writing style is great, I am fully engrossed in the story and nothing grammatically is pulling me out. If you like the tags give it a shot.
Excellent start. The first chapter really grabs the readers attention and chapter two pulls you in deeper. It’s definitely going on my reading list. World building is easy to follow and has a solid foundation. The first monster really grabbed mt attention with its different abilities and use of magic. Overall a great story and I look forward to reading more.
With flowing, crystal-clear descriptions, I found this novel to be simple to imagine yet gripping, especially the battle scenes. Not only that, but the dialogues between the characters seamlessly weaved itself into the chaos unfolding, leaving little, if any, additional alterations to the plot. Grammar— flawless, even I wish for this kind of clarity sometimes. XD While on a side note, I did feel as if there was less usage of some sensory senses, such as smell or touch, which might have improved readers’ immersions. But do take this advice with a grain of salt, these itty gritty details may not be necessary in your work at all. Overall, a splendid work, Author ! Keep it up !
A fantastic exciting battle at the beginning that will really grip the readers! The premise of the story already foretells an exciting vast world. Races and countries are mentioned giving an impression that the novel will bring us to a grand adventure. There are a lot of interesting characters who are introduced at the start. Their descriptions and impression make the characters colorful and alive. The author really did a good job in shaping this fantastic story. The author also has great writing skills! Keep up the good work!
It's a great story. I was completely immersed from the very first chapter. Well done. The world background is great, and the development of the story so far is very easy to read. The quality of the writing is fantastic and the character design is really good. You can really sympathise with the main character.
This is an amazing starting novel! Nice action start, great concept, and good potential! The writing is good, especially, when the author described the battlefield. It is very vivid! After reading for a few chapters, it has already hooked me up! Can't wait for more update. :)
The story is interesting to the core. Once you started reading it, it's like that pit that swallow you bit by bit. Vivid descriptions are on point! Keep up the good work!
Honestly a great read so far. Don't even need to read more than 3 pages to start feeling invested in the story. Only thing I would mention is that the intro chapter doesn't give any information on their surroudings. Make's it hard to understand what is going on. Also I suggest to consistently describe the scenes that the MC, or other characters, are witnessing. Helps to place the reader in the characters perspective. :)
Not gonna lie already stole some of your character names. your view on war is very refreshing. P.S stole that too. definitely sharing the link with my readers, they will love this for sure[img=update]
Love the action and opening starting with a fight with an eerie beast. Writing quality is top-notch great descriptions of the battle field. Keep it up author it's great!
Really pulsating opening. It is a sign of a great writer when they can draw the reader in with just one chapter. Hats off to the author for that. The story kicks off with a massive battle scene and protagonist and his forces are up against the odds fighting a beast. Great action, really keeps the pages flying by. Writing quality is top notch. Can't wait to see where this goes.