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นักเขียน: priya012

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What will happen-------

WHEN YOU HAVE A RIDICULOUS DREAM?

TO BECOME RULER OF THE WHOLE UNIVERSE.

But life gives you no chance ----

Born in a poor family, no bloodline, no soul beast, and a trash talent.

And a destiny to become someone slave.


Will he let his fate decide his path? or
he will control his fate and break the shackles of destiny.

Will, he ever solve the mystery of his nightmares.

Will the youngest race ever free themselves from the ancient restrain.

There was a saying in the human race since ancient times, " Supreme human will return one day, and he will take his vengeance.

A protagonist with a mysterious system.

An Antagonist who was once hailed as a hero, a myth, the god of time and space, and the progenitor of his race.


Hello guys, it is my first time writing a novel, and English is not my first language.

Initial chapters have some grammar problems, after that chapters are pretty goods.
Give it a try to chapter 20 at least.


(PS: The cover image belongs to the person who draws it)

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    priya012

    Me: "Not a shameless review this time, after all, I am a decent man!" Some readers: "Huh! Aren't you a shameless one? Again five stars." Me: "Hey, don't talk carelessly. I call this confidence!" Some readers: "Confident with your story? Meh. Just another piece of junk in the web novel." Me: "You guys are so mean... This is a good story. So don't judge me so early! *hmph!*." Some readers: "With your writing skill, that is just like that. Tsk" Me: "Hey, Why didn't you read more than 15 chapters? My talents improved afterward." Some good readers: "You're so confident about your story, huh? I'll give it a try." Me: "*sob*sob*You guys are so kind." Some good readers: "So, what's the storyline?" Me: "Let me tell you. This novel tells about the adventures of the main character with his Al( System). Finding the truth about his mysterious dream(A.K.A previous life) and changing his shitty destiny. Furthermore, there is a cold antagonist and OP loyal brother. Tsk *No spoiler*. " So overall, please read this novel up to 15 chapters before thinking about dropping:)(: Definitely, you guys will love the story afterward.

    4yr
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    Oussamama

    I give it 6* my brothers and sisters it's one of the greatest 'ideas' that readed so far it can be better story but it still one of greatest and there is many rooms to make it better but still its great 👌👌👌👌👌👌

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Natham_Wiliam

    I first picked this up to skip time but I was soon so into it I ended up spending all my coins and fast passes so I'm on ch 66 and I want to read on but sadly can't. The story is amazing and also the character development. The mc isn't op yet a least which gives a sense of realism over all amazing novel and would deff recommend

    3yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Astral464

    This novel looks good but looking at the accounts of several reviewers( who are all lvl 1) i noticed that that have only read one book this book the author could be botting or i could be overthinking, anyhow good luck Author-san. ;)

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    4yr
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
    Michael_Uzoho

    The book is fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥 I like how the MC yearns for power, cos he truly needs it at this stage. I also didn't know much about Indian Culture, I only knew about the God of Destruction, Shiva, and that was it, but with this book, I think I know a little bit more. And to add to the above point, this is the second book I read in my life that was related to Indian culture, and my first on Webnovel, and I liked how unique and different it was😁😁😁 Anyways, author, keep up the good work, this book has a lot of potential😁😁😁

    4yr
    ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
    Flaiver

    An interesting beginning of the story. Background quite interesting. Interesting idea. I recommend reading. I will wait for the continuation [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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    4yr
    ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
    Enrier
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    Okay so... With the two tags being #Reincarnation and #System, you can pretty much guess half of the story w/o actually reading it. But I digress... With 35 chapters up while I’m writing this review, I can honestly say it’s all the same cliche that you’ve read over and over in other novels of the same type. But that’s why we read it, don’t we? Nothing to write home about as of yet, but things at this stage are usually subject to change, be it for worse or better. If you’re looking for something different... Tough luck. Oh and by the way, I don’t have anything against the author YET. But it reeks of inexperience, I’d recommend cutting down the amount of chapters per week to increase the quality and then after it grows, increase the chapter amount. But it’s all just my own opinion. So take it with a grain of salt.

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    priya012

    Hello guys, shameless review from the author. Ahh, which author doesn't like his/her novel. But you guys will love the story development and the world background. Thank you in advance And last "JAI HIND"

    4yr
    ดู 7 การตอบกลับ
    TheDareDevil

    need more....more!! pls post more...I loved your novel as I enjoyed it very much [img=update].......post more so I can read.....I will be more shameless and give you whole rating to cheer you on.......pls keep up the work...

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    dekkkkku

    It’s really a good novel. Starting is really good and have won my interest completely. I am really looking for more updates and different Hindu mythology’s leading this novels world.

    4yr
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    shijin_myeon

    It is a good story and i really liked how story is developing . I highly recommend u guys to read it once or just give a try to this story For me i liked this story and ofc the all characters and character development

    4yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Sabin_Subedi_Fei

    I'll say, this novel does contain some potential only if the author tries to bring it towards a better result. The author needs to focus more on learning about the genre, and then write more. (Note: If the author is from Nepal, please join https://discord.gg/Xd7maf

    4yr
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    souless_man

    I would place this novel with some high ranking story, based on potential; the characters aren't cutouts. They make rational and irrational decisions that fit their personality. I'm not able to guess the plot or what will happen next Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is progressing with little predictable that is a familiar turn off for the system-oriented genre

    4yr
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    prashant_tiwari

    Hidden gem for me...jai hind....jai hind...jai hind...jai hind.....jai hind.....jai hind....jai hind....jai hind....jai hind....jai hind....jai hind

    4yr
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    Sumant_Singh_7720

    Just amazing , author did a great job in binding one with the stories .Eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters. This is something different and incredible at the same time. Brilliant writing sir.

    4yr
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    fswmoq80

    Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

    4yr
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    Mel_Aniv

    REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! ADVICE Edits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. There were sometimes unnecessary spacings here and there The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️ And use grammarly! It will help lessen obvious mistakes! 😉

    3yr
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    Garo_
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    4yr
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    Hender

    Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

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    Saintblack

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    Chapter 174: Chapter165 - Destiny-less Being 1 years ago

    จำนวน 1

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      Chapter 1- One day I will 4 years ago
    2. 2
      Chapter 2- My everything 4 years ago
    3. 3
      Chapter 3 - Demon invasion 4 years ago
    4. 4
      Chapter 4 : Rio death?? 4 years ago
    5. 5
      Chapter 5 - Dwivedi clan 4 years ago
    6. 6
      Chapter 6 - Awakening Ceremony 4 years ago
    7. 7
      Chapter 7 - Supreme human system 1.0 4 years ago
    8. 8
      Chapter 8 - Phoenix 4 years ago
    9. 9
      Chapter 9 - Badass chicken 4 years ago
    10. 10
      Chapter 10- Sudden gain 4 years ago
    11. 11
      Chapter 11 - Instant memorization 4 years ago
    12. 12
      Chapter 12 - Bloodline? 4 years ago
    13. 13
      Chapter 13 - Sudden enlightenment 4 years ago
    14. 14
      Chapter 14 - 1 month later 4 years ago
    15. 15
      Chapter 15 - Mysterious book 4 years ago
    16. 16
      Chapter 16 - Asura's wrath 4 years ago
    17. 17
      Chapter 17 - Mahadeva 4 years ago
    18. 18
      Chapter 18 - Blue crescent moon physique 4 years ago
    19. 19
      Chapter 19 - Horned boar 4 years ago
    20. 20
      Chapter 20 - Freya and Sasha 4 years ago
    21. 21
      Chapter 21 - Fate 4 years ago
    22. 22
      Chapter 22 - The challenger league 4 years ago
    23. 23
      Chapter 23 - Soul Beast Creation 4 years ago
    24. 24
      Chapter 24 - Destroying Saswata clan 4 years ago
    25. 25
      Chapter 25 - Space Swift 4 years ago
    26. 26
      Chapter 26 - The great god, Dreamer 4 years ago
    27. 27
      Chapter 27 - A faithful son 4 years ago
    28. 28
      Chapter 28 - Tough dilemma ( Create or Choose) 4 years ago
    29. 29
      Chapter 29 - Birth of the Star forger 4 years ago
    30. 30
      Chapter 30 - Father, I miss you 4 years ago
    31. 31
      Chapter 31 - Bow (1) 4 years ago
    32. 32
      Chapter 32 - Bow(2) 4 years ago
    33. 33
      Chapter 33 - Realm above True saint Realm 4 years ago
    34. 34
      Chapter 34 - Eagle eye 4 years ago
    35. 35
      Chapter 35 - The red Crystal 4 years ago
    36. 36
      Chapter 36 - Fake double fisher 4 years ago
    37. 37
      Chapter 37 - Human's first Astra weapon 4 years ago
    38. 38
      Chapter 38 - Ancient warrior and mage 3 years ago
    39. 39
      Chapter 39 - New mission 3 years ago
    40. 40
      Chapter 40 - Breaking rules is in my blood 3 years ago
    41. 41
      Chapter 41 - The Shadow form 3 years ago
    42. 42
      Chapter 42 - Soul Age 3 years ago
    43. 43
      Chapter 43 - Blue Transition Body 3 years ago
    44. 44
      Chapter 44 - Almighty Tongue 3 years ago
    45. 45
      Chapter 45 - Unknown Curse 3 years ago
    46. 46
      Chapter 46 - The late one 3 years ago
    47. 47
      Chapter 47 - Unpleasant memories 3 years ago
    48. 48
      Chapter 48 - An eye for an eye 3 years ago
    49. 49
      Don't open it( Mistake o~o) #Net problem 3 years ago
    50. 50
      Chapter 49 - Greater Inspection 3 years ago
    51. 51
      Chapter 50 - Lord Yakshas 3 years ago
    52. 52
      Chapter 51 - Unusual mixed bloodline 3 years ago
    53. 53
      Chapter 52 - Selecting elements 3 years ago
    54. 54
      Chapter 53 - Childhood Dream: Necromancer 3 years ago
    55. 55
      Chapter 54 - Instant Mastery 3 years ago
    56. 56
      Chapter 55 - First Element 3 years ago
    57. 57
      Chapter 56 - The day before Soul beast Creation 3 years ago
    58. 58
      Chapter 57 - Soul beast 3 years ago

    จำนวน 2 : Extraordinary cultivation journey

    1. 59
      Chapter 58 - New Race 3 years ago
    2. 60
      Chapter 59 - Race: High Human 3 years ago
    3. 61
      Chapter 60 - Cultivation techniques 3 years ago
    4. 62
      Chapter 61 - Such a bad lier 3 years ago
    5. 63
      Chapter 62 - Star Academy 3 years ago
    6. 64
      Chapter 63 - Legend 3 years ago
    7. 65
      Chapter 64 - Divine Alpha Wolf 3 years ago
    8. 66
      Chapter 65 - A soul beast who devours its host 3 years ago
    9. 67
      Chapter 66 - Eating Stone powder 3 years ago
    10. 68
      Chapter 67 - James Dilemma 3 years ago
    11. 69
      Chapter 68 - John Augusta past 3 years ago
    12. 70
      Chapter 69 - A painful night 3 years ago
    13. 71
      Chapter 70 - Breakthrough 3 years ago
    14. 72
      Chapter 71 - Short term memory loss 3 years ago
    15. 73
      Chapter 72 - Mystic Fire Sect 3 years ago
    16. 74
      Chapter 73 - Clara's Birthday Banquet 3 years ago
    17. 75
      Chapter 74 - Clara's feeling 3 years ago
    18. 76
      Chapter 75 - Ancient Pegasus bloodline 3 years ago
    19. 77
      Chapter 76 - Golden Pegasus Eye 3 years ago
    20. 78
      Chapter 77 - Troublemaker 3 years ago
    21. 79
      Chapter 78 - Basic qi Breathing Technique 3 years ago
    22. 80
      Chapter 79 - Two months later 3 years ago
    23. 81
      Side chapter - Aurelius life(1) 3 years ago
    24. 82
      Side Chapter - Aurelius life(2) 3 years ago
    25. 83
      Don't read it( Copy chapter ) Could not upload new chapter..showing error... 3 years ago
    26. 84
      Side chapter - Aurelius life(3) 3 years ago
    27. 85
      Side chapter - Aurelius Life(Final) 3 years ago
    28. 86
      Chapter 80 - Divine Extraction 3 years ago
    29. 87
      Chapter 81 - Start of Challenger League 3 years ago
    30. 88
      Chapter 82 - Win Steak 3 years ago
    31. 89
      Chapter 83 - Heavenly Glare 3 years ago
    32. 90
      Chapter 84 - Divine Blood 3 years ago
    33. 91
      Chapter 85 - Vishwa Tigreal 3 years ago
    34. 92
      Chapter 86 - High Human(Stage 3) 3 years ago
    35. 93
      Chapter 87 - Vishwa Martis 3 years ago
    36. 94
      Chapter 88 - Shocking Archery Talent 3 years ago
    37. 95
      Chapter 89 - Lightning sword intent and True sword intent 3 years ago
    38. 96
      Chapter 90 - First Form 3 years ago
    39. 97
      Chapter 91 - Winner 3 years ago
    40. 98
      Chapter 92 - Strange Dream 3 years ago
    41. 99
      Chapter 93 - Unknown soul beast 3 years ago
    42. 100
      Chapter 94 - Scheme 3 years ago
    43. 101
      Chapter 95 - Supreme Academy 3 years ago
    44. 102
      Chapter 96 - Time Chamber 3 years ago
    45. 103
      Chapter 97 - Celebration 3 years ago
    46. 104
      Chapter 98 - Ambush 3 years ago
    47. 105
      Chapter 99 - Two bats 3 years ago
    48. 106
      Don't open it( Auxiliary Chapter) Can freely see it at the Auxiliary volume 3 years ago
    49. 107
      Chapter 100 - Terrible Situation 3 years ago
    50. 108
      Chapter 101 - Counter Scheme 3 years ago
    51. 109
      Chapter 102 - Elimination of the monster 3 years ago
    52. 110
      Chapter 103 - Legendary Superstar 3 years ago
    53. 111
      Don't unlock it(CAN'T WRITE A CHAPTER DUE TO THE ELECTRICITY PROBLEM) 3 years ago
    54. 112
      Don't unlock it(CAN'T WRITE A CHAPTER DUE TO THE ELECTRICITY PROBLEM) 3 years ago
    55. 113
      Chapter 104 - Harmony skills 3 years ago
    56. 114
      Chapter 105 - Shop items 3 years ago
    57. 115
      Chapter 106 - Sudden Development 3 years ago
    58. 116
      Chapter 107 - War 3 years ago
    59. 117
      Chapter 108 - Crisis 3 years ago
    60. 118
      Chapter 109 - I'm not a Coward! 3 years ago
    61. 119
      Chapter 110 - Surrender 3 years ago
    62. 120
      Chapter 111 - Escaping from my kid! 3 years ago
    63. 121
      Chapter 112 - A huge spider 3 years ago
    64. 122
      Chapter 113 - Spider Sense 3 years ago
    65. 123
      Chapter 114 - Ability and Skill 3 years ago
    66. 124
      Chapter 115 -A Mysterious Egg 3 years ago
    67. 125
      Chapter 116 - Heavenly Bead 3 years ago
    68. 126
      Chapter 117 - Steel Blood Return 3 years ago
    69. 127
      Chapter 118 - Two Huge Red Eyes 3 years ago
    70. 128
      Chapter 119 - Continuous Breakthrough 3 years ago
    71. 129
      Chapter 120 - A strange old man 3 years ago
    72. 130
      Chapter 121 - Young Master Hen 3 years ago
    73. 131
      Chapter 122 - Coward 3 years ago
    74. 132
      Chapter 123 - Weapon Ranking 3 years ago
    75. 133
      Chapter 124 - Paradise Dealer 3 years ago
    76. 134
      Chapter 125 - A Legacy Tomb 3 years ago
    77. 135
      Chapter 126 - Kipo's Unique Ability 3 years ago
    78. 136
      Chapter 127 - Inside the Legacy Tomb 3 years ago
    79. 137
      Chapter 128 - Temptation 3 years ago
    80. 138
      Chapter 129 - Who buried my soul 3 years ago
    81. 139
      Chapter 130 - Just obey orders? 3 years ago
    82. 140
      Chapter 131 - Escape 3 years ago
    83. 141
      Chapter 132 - Four Great Royal Clan and Three Great Sect 3 years ago
    84. 142
      Chapter 133 - Supreme Human System 2.0 3 years ago
    85. 143
      Chapter 134 - Emperor Eye 3 years ago
    86. 144
      Chapter 135 - Great Harvest 3 years ago
    87. 145
      Chapter 136 - True Friendship 3 years ago
    88. 146
      Chapter 137 - Anxious Egg 3 years ago
    89. 147
      Chapter 138 - Intel Beast? 3 years ago
    90. 148
      Chapter139 - Asrasys Burning Flame 3 years ago
    91. 149
      Chapter 140 - True Flame Essence 3 years ago
    92. 150
      Chapter 141 - Sealed Suppression Pill 3 years ago
    93. 151
      Chapter 142 - Demonic Moon Leaf 3 years ago
    94. 152
      Chapter 143 - The beginning of a new event 3 years ago
    95. 153
      Chapter 144 - An ancient dream world 3 years ago
    96. 154
      Chapter 145 - Agastya Clan, A special Identity! 3 years ago

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