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I hope I never lose you

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นักเขียน: shortcke

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Lyra moves away from her home for a change. A place where the memories doesn't hunt her , or a place that finally gives her hope.

She is excited for her college but what happens when she meets her childhood crush after six years apart and falls in love with him this time.

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    San_Kyz

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    4yr
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    clydieM

    The characters was great. I love how you made this story. The narration is good.

    4yr
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
    Honeylife_

    The story is good, chapters are interesting and the characters and funny I really loved the house drama at the first chapter. keep going author!!

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Aaliyah_Stark_

    Wow, I loved the theme and genre. Its so beautifully written as I read through the first chapters. The characters are great and well written synopsis that increases the curiosity. It's amazing and you're so natural with writing. Keep going forward. you're doing great. Looking forward for more .

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    NorthStar

    Thanks Author for this story. I’m up till chapter 20 but would like to post my review still. 1. Quite a unique writing style to deliver the feelings in the begining on Mason. Conversations that internalised her thoughts and perception of others and how she felt towards cole thereafter. So the ability to draw the characters and thoughts are vividly described through conversations 2. The slow built up of the story is good in terms of how Ly and cole feels about each other and him bringing her back to his place on the first date to know his family - interesting way to let her know him better - good choice. 3. The curiosity and tension when Mason and Ly bumped into Mason in the lift or when Ly had to choose between Cole and trivia in the game leaving Cole feeling left out and him translating that into his actions for her eg holding her hands tighter is portrayed effectively All in all easy read - enjoyed the little things that happen - day in a life surrounding Ly and Cole - look foward to seeing how they will go on from here. Keep up the good work, there are some typo in spacing and punctuations in earlier chapter (small matter that can be corrected) but other than that good read! 👍

    4yr
    ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
    shortcke

    Thank you aryanastan. i have edit some of the symbols and commas in chapter 1 . Hope i won't make any mistake again. It's kinda hard writing because english is not my first language .

    4yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Aryna_Stan

    Awesome book!!! Honestly, I love the wittiness of the MC and her fun friends. A relatable and very light read, filled with angst and romantic flops, awesome work Author. Would definitely recommend.

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    shortcke

    This is shortcke .Hope you like my book , I'll be updating on daily basis. please enjoy, vote and comment .Its my first book and it means a lot to me.

    4yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Xia_Xia89

    I read the first few chapters and I have to say your way of writing is unique. I like the way u portrayed the texting style, it's kinda clean to read. It's a nice book with potential and I hope it do well in the future. Full support to u author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

    3yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    DemonsDescent

    An excellent book. The book is just fabulous. Describing it will only undermine your experience. The author is also a very responsive and good person, so this book experience will just be peerless. Love the book author san. Never give up.

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Heart59

    DEAR AUTHOR, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING! CONTINUE TO MAKE MORE BOOKS BECAUSE IT’S SO GOODD! EXCELLENT WORK![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    3yr
    ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
    swatiikakkr

    this is realy awesome.. .....absolutely fantastic......from my side its highly recommended novel.............good work by author...............

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Harry_Terran

    The plot is awesome, story's updated regularly and best of all is the character development. LOVE THIS STORY AUTHOR! Keep it up and give us more quality content.

    4yr
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    Little_Love_5727

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    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Haruma_Miura_8545

    Miss is doing great ... Keep it up ....all the best ... Really love reading your stories ...it's creative and really entertaining to read....

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Pacesetter

    First love hardly dies and the embers are still there. The female lead has been through a lot and is ready for a new beginning by leaving her past life. But she meets up with her crush that brings back past memories.

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    pboca
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    Really good, I love the romance part of the novel. keep it up as you are! Really good.

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Haruma_Miura_8545

    it's very interesting to read .... Everytime I finish reading a chapter I can't wait for the next ... The author is doing a really great job

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    shaeshang

    Firstly, hat off to the author. This is an interesting story that I've ever read. I'm not into a love story genre but yours is exceptional. It's a fun story. The characters are fun especially the MC. I'm still in chapter 10 but I can't help but write the review because it's so good. Fighting

    4yr
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
    San_Kyz

    “The writing was captivating,” “The characters were believable and I cared about them,” “The plot had so many twists and turns I couldn't put the book down.” Specific praise helps browsing readers get a better sense of why your book is so good.❤ Waitin For next Episode💓

    4yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
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    Chapter 97: Epilogue 3 years ago

    จำนวน 1

    1. 1
      1Annoying, useless ,lazy 4 years ago
    2. 2
      2 Mason 4 years ago
    3. 3
      3 Gunpoint in your head 4 years ago
    4. 4
      4 Do you like me? 4 years ago
    5. 5
      5 Yay me! 4 years ago
    6. 6
      6 Foggy grey eyes looking in mine 4 years ago
    7. 7
      7 I like your dad 4 years ago
    8. 8
      8 Why is he staring at you? 4 years ago
    9. 9
      9 Barbie and ken 4 years ago
    10. 10
      10 Happy with other guys 4 years ago
    11. 11
      11 I'll pick you up 4 years ago
    12. 12
      12 Is he your son? 4 years ago
    13. 13
      13 I am glad it's you 4 years ago
    14. 14
      14 He's your ex-boyfriend? 4 years ago
    15. 15
      15 Do you always talk to yourself? 4 years ago
    16. 16
      16 I am just lonely 4 years ago
    17. 17
      17 Get back together? 4 years ago
    18. 18
      18 Totally swoon 4 years ago
    19. 19
      19 How many times do I have to apologise? 4 years ago
    20. 20
      20 It's Liam 4 years ago
    21. 21
      21 You're just jealous 4 years ago
    22. 22
      22 I have to say this 4 years ago
    23. 23
      23 Murder Rachel? 4 years ago
    24. 24
      24 Can't lose you 4 years ago
    25. 25
      25 You're lying the whole time? 4 years ago
    26. 26
      26 The gifts not for you 4 years ago
    27. 27
      27 Stuck with me 4 years ago
    28. 28
      28 Spare the girl 4 years ago
    29. 29
      29 Too late 4 years ago
    30. 30
      30 I need you here 4 years ago
    31. 31
      31 Dare me to come up to your room 4 years ago
    32. 32
      32 you're crazy if you think I'll date her 4 years ago
    33. 33
      33 I wish I could be his forever 4 years ago
    34. 34
      34 Are you that desperate? 4 years ago
    35. 35
      35 I'll love to be your wife 4 years ago
    36. 36
      36 Don't you see? she likes you 4 years ago
    37. 37
      37 I can't do this anymore 4 years ago
    38. 38
      38 You need to come here 4 years ago
    39. 39
      39 Don't make this hard for me 4 years ago
    40. 40
      40 I'll see you soon 4 years ago
    41. 41
      41 Don't set me up for another blind date Five years later, 4 years ago
    42. 42
      42 I love you 4 years ago
    43. 43
      43 we'll buy a ring tonight 4 years ago
    44. 44
      44 It's a girl! 4 years ago
    45. 45
      45 Mr toothache 4 years ago
    46. 46
      46 Are you sure? 4 years ago
    47. 47
      47 Ex- psycho 4 years ago
    48. 48
      48 Do you like her when she was young? 4 years ago
    49. 49
      49 It's for your good 4 years ago
    50. 50
      50 Why can't you understand me? 4 years ago
    51. 51
      51 Whatever happens happen 4 years ago
    52. 52
      52 I guess we won't be visiting you then 4 years ago
    53. 53
      53 I wish I could chew her 4 years ago
    54. 54
      54 Suspicious 4 years ago
    55. 55
      55 Behold! I say unto you 4 years ago
    56. 56
      56 A stab in my heart 4 years ago
    57. 57
      57 why do you leave me? 4 years ago
    58. 58
      58 Hangover morning 4 years ago
    59. 59
      59 Suspicion confirmed 4 years ago
    60. 60
      60 Busted 4 years ago
    61. 61
      61 Wishful love 4 years ago
    62. 62
      62 Hoping He'll come running 4 years ago
    63. 63
      63 Princess with her daddy 4 years ago
    64. 64
      64 Can Cole be my husband? 4 years ago
    65. 65
      65 The unexpected daughter 3 years ago
    66. 66
      66 I hope I never lose you 3 years ago
    67. 67
      67 The discussion 3 years ago
    68. 68
      68 wildflowers 3 years ago
    69. 69
      69 The anger 3 years ago
    70. 70
      70 Cinderella on a mission 3 years ago
    71. 71
      71 Fall 3 years ago
    72. 72
      72 Indi 3 years ago
    73. 73
      73 Don't come back 3 years ago
    74. 74
      74 Catfight 3 years ago
    75. 75
      75 Fireworks 3 years ago
    76. 76
      76 Wedding bells 3 years ago
    77. 77
      77 Steps to torture 3 years ago
    78. 78
      78 Cole 3 years ago
    79. 79
      79 Heartbreak and cries 3 years ago
    80. 80
      80 Lyra 3 years ago
    81. 81
      81 argument 3 years ago
    82. 82
      82 Haunted 3 years ago
    83. 83
      83 Confession 3 years ago
    84. 84
      84 Torn 3 years ago
    85. 85
      85 Drama 3 years ago
    86. 86
      86 Jealousy 3 years ago
    87. 87
      87 Golden couple 3 years ago
    88. 88
      88 Big mouth Anthony 3 years ago
    89. 89
      89 Sexy time 3 years ago
    90. 90
      90 Sorry 3 years ago
    91. 91
      91 Dinner with Anderson 3 years ago
    92. 92
      92 House hunting 3 years ago
    93. 93
      93 The curse 3 years ago
    94. 94
      94 Missing 3 years ago
    95. 95
      95 Escape 3 years ago
    96. 96
      96 The arrival 3 years ago
    97. 97
      Epilogue 3 years ago

    นักเขียน shortcke