6รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
Well writen story, author managed to balance amount of tropes, and thanks to that as of chapter 66 there has only been one mc vs arrogant young master scene and no face slapping. Quality of writing is really good and stable, unlike most novels out there where authors/translators familiarity with proper grammar and punctuation is at "can it be eaten?" level, and mtl is a way to go. Pacing is good, multiple POVs contribute to reader being aware what is happening with other characters (and there isn't any "XYZ pov" commentary). One thing that i have on mind though is lack of significant backstory surrounding MC and his friends/lovers(not enough teases). World background is already laid out, thanks to which a situation where protagonist is akin to a carp going on a jumping spree through dozen consecutive dragon gates (*coughMGAcough*) hopefuly won't happen, as author would have to introduce another dimension(physics) for it to be a surprise. Overall story is interesting, presenting solid background, without there being typical infodump chapers. There are no greek philosophers here, so we don't see cultivation progress measured in levels or fighting prowess being put into linear equation. One thing author may wish to spend time on is expanding vocabulary beyond common purview, so as to one may gaze with glazed eyes, beholding writers splendor and ingenuity.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
A man with a great upbring for sure. No cultivator in the horizons of the many of Primoridal Voids has truly loved and integrated into their profession or craft. I’m tired of these spear wielding monkeys pretending to be Wukong. Perfect your weapon to the pinnacle to the point your intent is null where no one can see or feel it in the air. No scripture or technique? Simple keep practicing different thrusts and stabs. That is all I have to say.
Ahem! The shameless first review that is the privilege of the Author. I hope my novel can reach the quality deserving of this review. Happy reading to all!
Well writen story, author managed to balance amount of tropes, and thanks to that as of chapter 66 there has only been one mc vs arrogant young master scene and no face slapping. Quality of writing is really good and stable, unlike most novels out there where authors/translators familiarity with proper grammar and punctuation is at "can it be eaten?" level, and mtl is a way to go. Pacing is good, multiple POVs contribute to reader being aware what is happening with other characters (and there isn't any "XYZ pov" commentary). One thing that i have on mind though is lack of significant backstory surrounding MC and his friends/lovers(not enough teases). World background is already laid out, thanks to which a situation where protagonist is akin to a carp going on a jumping spree through dozen consecutive dragon gates (*coughMGAcough*) hopefuly won't happen, as author would have to introduce another dimension(physics) for it to be a surprise. Overall story is interesting, presenting solid background, without there being typical infodump chapers. There are no greek philosophers here, so we don't see cultivation progress measured in levels or fighting prowess being put into linear equation. One thing author may wish to spend time on is expanding vocabulary beyond common purview, so as to one may gaze with glazed eyes, beholding writers splendor and ingenuity.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ A man with a great upbring for sure. No cultivator in the horizons of the many of Primoridal Voids has truly loved and integrated into their profession or craft. I’m tired of these spear wielding monkeys pretending to be Wukong. Perfect your weapon to the pinnacle to the point your intent is null where no one can see or feel it in the air. No scripture or technique? Simple keep practicing different thrusts and stabs. That is all I have to say.
Ahem! The shameless first review that is the privilege of the Author. I hope my novel can reach the quality deserving of this review. Happy reading to all!
I love the story so far and I'm all cought up, but i need more