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To many books on this app incorporates false gods and demons, try looking to a book that doesn’t. I like the story but many readers will be turned of by it especially when referring to things as the Holy Spirit when you shouldn’t. There are plenty of other terminology that could be used without taking away from the story. Unfortunately, not many writers care. I’ve seen dozens of books be left to rot after thier readers couldn’t stomach blatant blasphemy, no matter what religion, be it from judism to spiritism to even pastafarian (I don’t get that one). The get that the writer wants to convey the thier story, but if you want to reach the widest range of readers possible then try not to include religion as it can be a turn off for many.
Good story. 140 chars needed hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Muito bom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img = recomendar]
I'm about to start this novel. I love books about vampires or undead types but I was just wondering how long this novel might be on break for
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Really enjoyed it, why did it get dropped? :(( ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
At first, I had high hopes for this especially seeing as people were relating it to “The Legendary Mechanic.” However, after reading around 5chapters, I came to realize that the MC is a spineless pussy as terrible as the japanese betas. He’s a vampire that refuses to feed on people, Wtf. Just, Wtf. Seriously, why make a vampire character if you wont feed on blood or conflict with Humans? That’s the central reason to have a non-human MC!
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By far one of the best stories I’ve read. It’s a Kingdom building story with elements of transmigration. The character development is interesting and holds a grand amount of promise. I definitely want this story next. 10/10
Qidian has failed us again and agaib. This one has the highest fan among its peer. Solid world building, no stupid character, no chliche development as of yet ch 60.
had quite a bit of promise with an interesting MC and supporting cast with a potentially interesting premise but seems not to have been picked up, which is a pity.[img=update]
Estou gostando da história, muito mesmo, só que ficou um pouco cansativo, nos capítulos com a criação da cidade, ficou explicando e explicando de novo e de novo a mesma coisa vários capítulos. Os melhores momentos para mim são os estudos de magia, desenvolvimento,(acho brilhante o sistema de magia) quando ele está disfarçado na cidade ou aprendendo coisas sobre os vampiros(como magia do sangue). Da pra entender que é importante a cidade, mas foram muitos capítulos explicando ela, sendo que a gente poderia está se divertindo com o protagonista em lutas ou descobrindo itens ou habilidades como alquimia que sempre foi citada as armadilhas alquímicas e que a torre de mago foi feita por alquimistas, ele faria uma na cidade, sendo que eles não tem conhecimento para isso se não, ele não teria se infiltrado lá pra aprender. Ou sobre a classe de espadachim que era inútil ao olhos do original... Eu acho o mundo incrível em que a história se passa, e eu consigo sentir a habilidade do escritor, a arte de capa da novel acho ela muito precária comparada a qualidade da obra, agora que ele voltou pra cidade melhorou bastante, só queria pontuar mesmo que quando eu estava lendo os capítulos sobre a criação da cidade estava ficando cansativo
really enjoyed this I hope that it actually gets picked up. I agree with those who have said it is a hybrid of "mages are too op" and "legendary mechanic"
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this book is amazing, the gradual growth of the progenitor vampire is outstanding. in the story you can see the difficulties of living a double life even before you reach it. I love the fact that even tho he's already op he want to continue his research and help his apprentices along the way, all to establish a future for his kind
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This is very nice, hope that it can be continued, because these kind of book within the platform is kinda uncommon. The mc is also very interesting
It's a nice new novel. Although it treads familiar ground, it is well executed. It's about a MC whose powerful, but in charge of another endangered faction, so he tries to figure out how to protect them in the face of a brutal world.
Not bad. It's worth checking out. The beginning is a little slow, but it's heading in a good direction, and I would like to see how it turns out.
Pretty interesting? Although it has some flaws, (the difference in time being the major one), it shows a lot of promise and I hope it gets picked. MC is a vampire in charge of other vampires, and players are coming to slaughter them all! It's like The Legendary Mechanic if you started as a big baddie and need to learn to survive. Check it out.
Not bad, I like it. From the beginning, the MC is strong, but shackled by responsibility. He has to look after a bunch of vampires. So he's acting to try to plan ahead for themselves, while learning how to be strong in this new world. It's worth a read. Get through the first 60 chapters and see what you think.
While not perfect, (and face it no novel is), this is the best of the new bunch by far. The premise shows promise, (MC becomes powerful head of vampire clan and needs to save them in face of impending threat), and the MC isn't an idiot. He delegates some responsibility, but what leader wouldn't? Overall I'm excited to see where this goes.
This is a lovely novel. 9/10. The world building feels a lot like Mages are Too OP and the premise is like The Legendary Mechanic, where the MC becomes an NPC in a world that's obviously not just virtual, but here he starts off very powerful, but in charge of the vampires, who are likely to self destruct in the face of immortal players. So MC has to strengthen himself and his faction. Overall the premise and execution are quite promising.
I so looooooove this book. It's basically a combination of the legendary mechanic and mages are too OP and to make it even better, the Mc is a vampire. There aren't alot of awesome books about vampires
a good novel not best out there but quite a good one try it dckndjcnlvvsevesvsfvesfvesvsfdvsvesrvesfvfdv efvfvsfevdsfvfsvfd vesfvesgvtrhtdyjatruym ar
it was a ok book a few twist but didn't keep my attention like it should.. but overall a good read...thanks for taking the time in writing it.
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Damn 8 chapter and i falling in love with this story, please dont stop brother, you are doing good with this awesome story, the earlier i underestimate your story because you are start few tersebut ago and you come back, but this is gold, and i happy you are back, i hope you lucky and more readers come to enjoy your book.
To many books on this app incorporates false gods and demons, try looking to a book that doesn’t. I like the story but many readers will be turned of by it especially when referring to things as the Holy Spirit when you shouldn’t. There are plenty of other terminology that could be used without taking away from the story. Unfortunately, not many writers care. I’ve seen dozens of books be left to rot after thier readers couldn’t stomach blatant blasphemy, no matter what religion, be it from judism to spiritism to even pastafarian (I don’t get that one). The get that the writer wants to convey the thier story, but if you want to reach the widest range of readers possible then try not to include religion as it can be a turn off for many.
Good story. 140 chars needed hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Muito bom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img = recomendar]
I'm about to start this novel. I love books about vampires or undead types but I was just wondering how long this novel might be on break for
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Really enjoyed it, why did it get dropped? :(( ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
At first, I had high hopes for this especially seeing as people were relating it to “The Legendary Mechanic.” However, after reading around 5chapters, I came to realize that the MC is a spineless pussy as terrible as the japanese betas. He’s a vampire that refuses to feed on people, Wtf. Just, Wtf. Seriously, why make a vampire character if you wont feed on blood or conflict with Humans? That’s the central reason to have a non-human MC!
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more chapters
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By far one of the best stories I’ve read. It’s a Kingdom building story with elements of transmigration. The character development is interesting and holds a grand amount of promise. I definitely want this story next. 10/10
Qidian has failed us again and agaib. This one has the highest fan among its peer. Solid world building, no stupid character, no chliche development as of yet ch 60.
had quite a bit of promise with an interesting MC and supporting cast with a potentially interesting premise but seems not to have been picked up, which is a pity.[img=update]
Estou gostando da história, muito mesmo, só que ficou um pouco cansativo, nos capítulos com a criação da cidade, ficou explicando e explicando de novo e de novo a mesma coisa vários capítulos. Os melhores momentos para mim são os estudos de magia, desenvolvimento,(acho brilhante o sistema de magia) quando ele está disfarçado na cidade ou aprendendo coisas sobre os vampiros(como magia do sangue). Da pra entender que é importante a cidade, mas foram muitos capítulos explicando ela, sendo que a gente poderia está se divertindo com o protagonista em lutas ou descobrindo itens ou habilidades como alquimia que sempre foi citada as armadilhas alquímicas e que a torre de mago foi feita por alquimistas, ele faria uma na cidade, sendo que eles não tem conhecimento para isso se não, ele não teria se infiltrado lá pra aprender. Ou sobre a classe de espadachim que era inútil ao olhos do original... Eu acho o mundo incrível em que a história se passa, e eu consigo sentir a habilidade do escritor, a arte de capa da novel acho ela muito precária comparada a qualidade da obra, agora que ele voltou pra cidade melhorou bastante, só queria pontuar mesmo que quando eu estava lendo os capítulos sobre a criação da cidade estava ficando cansativo
really enjoyed this I hope that it actually gets picked up. I agree with those who have said it is a hybrid of "mages are too op" and "legendary mechanic"
👍👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍🏽 This is very nice concept
quite a good book i reccomend it give it a try hdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdjhdjdjxnznx bd dhdbdbdbdbd dbbd d d dbdb d dbdbd d dbdb d dbdbdbd dbdbd
this book is amazing, the gradual growth of the progenitor vampire is outstanding. in the story you can see the difficulties of living a double life even before you reach it. I love the fact that even tho he's already op he want to continue his research and help his apprentices along the way, all to establish a future for his kind
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is very nice, hope that it can be continued, because these kind of book within the platform is kinda uncommon. The mc is also very interesting
It's a nice new novel. Although it treads familiar ground, it is well executed. It's about a MC whose powerful, but in charge of another endangered faction, so he tries to figure out how to protect them in the face of a brutal world.
Not bad. It's worth checking out. The beginning is a little slow, but it's heading in a good direction, and I would like to see how it turns out.
Pretty interesting? Although it has some flaws, (the difference in time being the major one), it shows a lot of promise and I hope it gets picked. MC is a vampire in charge of other vampires, and players are coming to slaughter them all! It's like The Legendary Mechanic if you started as a big baddie and need to learn to survive. Check it out.
Not bad, I like it. From the beginning, the MC is strong, but shackled by responsibility. He has to look after a bunch of vampires. So he's acting to try to plan ahead for themselves, while learning how to be strong in this new world. It's worth a read. Get through the first 60 chapters and see what you think.
While not perfect, (and face it no novel is), this is the best of the new bunch by far. The premise shows promise, (MC becomes powerful head of vampire clan and needs to save them in face of impending threat), and the MC isn't an idiot. He delegates some responsibility, but what leader wouldn't? Overall I'm excited to see where this goes.
This is a lovely novel. 9/10. The world building feels a lot like Mages are Too OP and the premise is like The Legendary Mechanic, where the MC becomes an NPC in a world that's obviously not just virtual, but here he starts off very powerful, but in charge of the vampires, who are likely to self destruct in the face of immortal players. So MC has to strengthen himself and his faction. Overall the premise and execution are quite promising.
I so looooooove this book. It's basically a combination of the legendary mechanic and mages are too OP and to make it even better, the Mc is a vampire. There aren't alot of awesome books about vampires
a good novel not best out there but quite a good one try it dckndjcnlvvsevesvsfvesfvesvsfdvsvesrvesfvfdv efvfvsfevdsfvfsvfd vesfvesgvtrhtdyjatruym ar
it was a ok book a few twist but didn't keep my attention like it should.. but overall a good read...thanks for taking the time in writing it.
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Damn 8 chapter and i falling in love with this story, please dont stop brother, you are doing good with this awesome story, the earlier i underestimate your story because you are start few tersebut ago and you come back, but this is gold, and i happy you are back, i hope you lucky and more readers come to enjoy your book.