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it's a wonderful story, but it's a shame the author chose not to grow up Vandalieu both in age and in body he has children and doesn't reach adulthood it's just something that makes any reader of this story sad another factor is that he ended the war and was continuing the story as soon as he talks about how it is outside the planet of Lambda and vandalieu as god he ends up entering the story on hiatus.
Great book altogether, but it’s stolen. Get this taken down, no reason to give a guy money for someone else’s work. Though highly recommend reading it, in my top 10 personally.
This story wad epic loved it very much cant wait for more. Loved Vandaleu's character development and growth throghout the series, cabt eait for him to get all tge fragments of the demon king and defeat Alda. I think he'll probaly ascend beyong godhood. I do hope he eats Niltark first before beating Alda. The way his power is going i expect even greater things.
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
I think it's great that you uploaded it here. To be honest I wouldn't even have started reading this if it wasn't on webnovel. I love this series and while its great that you upload some chapters here. I think you should make sure to stay quite a few chapters behind the official source. So that when people have read it here and want to get more they go to support the aouther. Im gonna be a hypocrite for a litle bit here but I think that you should have not uploaded so many chapters. It makes it so that rather than promoting the original your making an alturnative. I dont know if thats what you wanted to do. If so then im disepointed.
from a few years ago I was able to help out with the family is a little more than just an opportunity 🙏 ✨ ❤ and the MC is that he succeeded in the first
XOXO and the MC is a good thing to have a problem with it and I will be able and able to cosplay it on the matter and the fact that I am a good fit for the
it's just awesome man. it very entertaining. and actually managed to keep the balance between action , plot and character building. I realy appreciate the author for making this.
I've read a hundred chapters and finally decided to give up. The story is ok but it combines too many elements and slows down the development. I was starting to read just the first sentence or two and skip the rest of a paragraph just to speed up the story up. The writing can seem redundant as a non important idea is explained multiple times. The overall grammar is decent. There are a ton of minor characters leading to bloat.
I really love this novel. The world building and the characters are rich. I read this in lightnovelbastion and I don't know if this is plagiarized or something in this website. If this is really copied, then 5 stars for the original author and translator.
Really love web novel but it stopped updating. Ima go back to lightnovelbastion and continue reading this Ln, its really worth it! I still need to fill in the text so I can post.
Mongaloid take this down. stealing from another site is just ****ed up. Great you like the story, but why bother stealing it and putting it up here? you are taking revenue away from the translators.
He has stolen this from the real author and translator over at lightnovel bastion the story is fantastic but don't support r*tards like this guy
YUP plagiat is not cool , asshole ! the real author is DENSUKE on Syosetsu ! Stealing the work of others is scumbag'doing ![img=faceslap]
Thanks gor uploading this to this platform. I hate having to read on others. Im not a fan of stories starting the protag at such a young age, but at least hes written like a real person.
So I just wanted to share the death mage who doesn't want a fourth with everyone Original Publisher Hifumi Shobo Syosetu Author Densuke And the artist is called ban If you enjoy it you can also read it light novel bastion..
it's a wonderful story, but it's a shame the author chose not to grow up Vandalieu both in age and in body he has children and doesn't reach adulthood it's just something that makes any reader of this story sad another factor is that he ended the war and was continuing the story as soon as he talks about how it is outside the planet of Lambda and vandalieu as god he ends up entering the story on hiatus.
Great book altogether, but it’s stolen. Get this taken down, no reason to give a guy money for someone else’s work. Though highly recommend reading it, in my top 10 personally.
This story wad epic loved it very much cant wait for more. Loved Vandaleu's character development and growth throghout the series, cabt eait for him to get all tge fragments of the demon king and defeat Alda. I think he'll probaly ascend beyong godhood. I do hope he eats Niltark first before beating Alda. The way his power is going i expect even greater things.
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
I think it's great that you uploaded it here. To be honest I wouldn't even have started reading this if it wasn't on webnovel. I love this series and while its great that you upload some chapters here. I think you should make sure to stay quite a few chapters behind the official source. So that when people have read it here and want to get more they go to support the aouther. Im gonna be a hypocrite for a litle bit here but I think that you should have not uploaded so many chapters. It makes it so that rather than promoting the original your making an alturnative. I dont know if thats what you wanted to do. If so then im disepointed.
from a few years ago I was able to help out with the family is a little more than just an opportunity 🙏 ✨ ❤ and the MC is that he succeeded in the first
XOXO and the MC is a good thing to have a problem with it and I will be able and able to cosplay it on the matter and the fact that I am a good fit for the
it's just awesome man. it very entertaining. and actually managed to keep the balance between action , plot and character building. I realy appreciate the author for making this.
I've read a hundred chapters and finally decided to give up. The story is ok but it combines too many elements and slows down the development. I was starting to read just the first sentence or two and skip the rest of a paragraph just to speed up the story up. The writing can seem redundant as a non important idea is explained multiple times. The overall grammar is decent. There are a ton of minor characters leading to bloat.
I really love this novel. The world building and the characters are rich. I read this in lightnovelbastion and I don't know if this is plagiarized or something in this website. If this is really copied, then 5 stars for the original author and translator.
Really love web novel but it stopped updating. Ima go back to lightnovelbastion and continue reading this Ln, its really worth it! I still need to fill in the text so I can post.
Mongaloid take this down. stealing from another site is just ****ed up. Great you like the story, but why bother stealing it and putting it up here? you are taking revenue away from the translators.
He has stolen this from the real author and translator over at lightnovel bastion the story is fantastic but don't support r*tards like this guy
YUP plagiat is not cool , asshole ! the real author is DENSUKE on Syosetsu ! Stealing the work of others is scumbag'doing ![img=faceslap]
Thanks gor uploading this to this platform. I hate having to read on others. Im not a fan of stories starting the protag at such a young age, but at least hes written like a real person.
So I just wanted to share the death mage who doesn't want a fourth with everyone Original Publisher Hifumi Shobo Syosetu Author Densuke And the artist is called ban If you enjoy it you can also read it light novel bastion..
For me it's the best novel, though the epilogue is a little extreme