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Webnovel isn’t letting me paste the review that I had written. It won’t even let me put up the 3 pages as a photo. 😒 In summary, this is NOT the worst novel I’ve ever read, but there are many other better ones out there.
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The novel is just randomly without following any actual plot. I can't just understand how it got this high rating. I can only conclude that we are different and this novel is not to my liking.
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I dunno if it stuck with the magic or started off with cultivation itd have been up my alley but the transition so early on kinda made me lose interest both settings are cool but just not my cup of tea
i dont know why, but this story makes me really emotional. love the writing style and the story is super awesome. hoping for more updates 😊. i really recommend to read it!!!
this is my favorite webnovel that I have ever read by far the best story and plot development I hope everyone else who reads it enjoys it as much as I do and waits with bated breath for the updates just as I
This story is good but why the vote is sooo lowww... 😢. And right now the update is soooo slowww 😭😭😭. Update more please....😀😀😀. I'm waiting for the update 🤭🤭🤭
I just can't put it to words how much I love this novel. The chapters are written like I like to read, it's easy to read and understandable but at the same time detailed. It's so addictive and if I had more fast passes and would there be more chapters I could read all day. I just love this novel and will follow to the end. BTW Haru is a badass and I love him with every fiber of my being.
I first didn't have much expectations, but when I started reading it. I started getting immersed into the storyline. Good job author, I want to read it more and more.
At first, the story is very interesting. But as I read further, it becomes boring. Not really boring, but unappealing (?) to me. I also dislike how there's this girl who seems powerful but always need to rely to the mc. She acts powerful but is stupid; making the mc help her avoid danger. It's annoying. Really.
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Usually cultivation novels always have a mc that gets in trouble with a rich “young master” and they tend to make that part of the plot.😑 im just glad this book doesnt have that.😃 It is wholesome and you dont see too much unnecesary evil going on. The mc has overall good morals and social skills, and like many light novels the mc is not driven by hatred and want revenge on a major sect. 😉 Also the mc is not a petty d.i.c head.👍 He just enjoys living a “normal life” and cultivating wanting to reach the higher realm. I also like how we can see the mc mature as a “normal person” And plus the author has moments in the book where he should lowkey be a comedian😂(yea he def got the jokes, trust) Overall its a recommended read from me, i gave it 4 stars only because it has so few chapters i read it in less than 3 days🤧😂 Lol keep up the good work Author-san you have great ideas dont let anyone change you.... Unless you plan to turn the mc evil (and petty) 😂👌
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This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
nice nice nice read it, love it, good work, hoping for more chapters interesting work, seems like it can go for the long run, and hopefully far more chapters
Story so far is entertaining. There are spelling and grammar errors, but they are not bad enough to make the reading experience unenjoyable. Looking forward to see how his sisters and their demons growth happens.
Alright, I have read up until chaper 28 so far and I am liking it. Careful! 1 Spoiler incoming. The only reason I really have any troubles with what is going on, is that at one point there was a sudden and drastic change. But it is not really explained why he couldnt both use magic and cultivate right? Or did I read over it it? It seemed like it was a forced choice. But the reason why it was a choice, is not really explained. please someone enlighten me <3
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The sypnosis it good it made everyone wants to read the books. This type of modern storyline encourage people like me want to read it more. Please update more in the future.
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This is a very strong and good sypnosis. It did intrigue me to read the read trial. It have a good beginning and the story seems to be interesting i will follow this story.
The start of it's so incredible that it will draw you in quicker than any kid on Christmas, morning. Also, it's fascinating how easy it is to dive into, and how the characters are so well made that it can have an anime.
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Like I said within chapters, you should be proud of yourself. Your description is very comprehensive for me as a reader and author, it's not easy to get someone stuck into a story. But your first paragraph said a lot. I was able to see the scene in the play. I meant it when I said I wanted to read your book. Anyway, can't say much other than you are talented and keep on with the good work! Also...merci pour le block.
Better with age; just like a fine wine. I have a few books on which I am willing to spend coins to unlock chapters and this is one of them. If you're looking for a novel that has magic, cultivation with a tinge of technology—then look no further, you've found it!
there's not much depth in pretty much all of the story. everything happens so quickly with minimal dialog or even the main characters thoughts. one second he is fighting in class and one sentence later without any explanation or expanding on what happened or other people's thoughts the class is just over. I can understand time skipping over his first fifteen years even if I felt that his parents weren't really explained at all or his thoughts on the situation cuz it can be explained later but to the whole time he is in the academy the story just feels rushed. it's like "he arrives at school. he meets a friend. he arrives in class." obviously it's not that ridiculous but that's what it feels like.
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Webnovel isn’t letting me paste the review that I had written. It won’t even let me put up the 3 pages as a photo. 😒 In summary, this is NOT the worst novel I’ve ever read, but there are many other better ones out there.
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The novel is just randomly without following any actual plot. I can't just understand how it got this high rating. I can only conclude that we are different and this novel is not to my liking.
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I dunno if it stuck with the magic or started off with cultivation itd have been up my alley but the transition so early on kinda made me lose interest both settings are cool but just not my cup of tea
i dont know why, but this story makes me really emotional. love the writing style and the story is super awesome. hoping for more updates 😊. i really recommend to read it!!!
this is my favorite webnovel that I have ever read by far the best story and plot development I hope everyone else who reads it enjoys it as much as I do and waits with bated breath for the updates just as I
This story is good but why the vote is sooo lowww... 😢. And right now the update is soooo slowww 😭😭😭. Update more please....😀😀😀. I'm waiting for the update 🤭🤭🤭
I just can't put it to words how much I love this novel. The chapters are written like I like to read, it's easy to read and understandable but at the same time detailed. It's so addictive and if I had more fast passes and would there be more chapters I could read all day. I just love this novel and will follow to the end. BTW Haru is a badass and I love him with every fiber of my being.
I first didn't have much expectations, but when I started reading it. I started getting immersed into the storyline. Good job author, I want to read it more and more.
At first, the story is very interesting. But as I read further, it becomes boring. Not really boring, but unappealing (?) to me. I also dislike how there's this girl who seems powerful but always need to rely to the mc. She acts powerful but is stupid; making the mc help her avoid danger. It's annoying. Really.
THIS BOOK IS COLD!!!!! I recommend everyone Read the book please.AHhhggggggghhhggggghhjjjjjjgfffggjkjjjgcccvvvghhhhhbbvvb11111 787665((((percent was my uggv
Usually cultivation novels always have a mc that gets in trouble with a rich “young master” and they tend to make that part of the plot.😑 im just glad this book doesnt have that.😃 It is wholesome and you dont see too much unnecesary evil going on. The mc has overall good morals and social skills, and like many light novels the mc is not driven by hatred and want revenge on a major sect. 😉 Also the mc is not a petty d.i.c head.👍 He just enjoys living a “normal life” and cultivating wanting to reach the higher realm. I also like how we can see the mc mature as a “normal person” And plus the author has moments in the book where he should lowkey be a comedian😂(yea he def got the jokes, trust) Overall its a recommended read from me, i gave it 4 stars only because it has so few chapters i read it in less than 3 days🤧😂 Lol keep up the good work Author-san you have great ideas dont let anyone change you.... Unless you plan to turn the mc evil (and petty) 😂👌
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
nice nice nice read it, love it, good work, hoping for more chapters interesting work, seems like it can go for the long run, and hopefully far more chapters
Story so far is entertaining. There are spelling and grammar errors, but they are not bad enough to make the reading experience unenjoyable. Looking forward to see how his sisters and their demons growth happens.
Alright, I have read up until chaper 28 so far and I am liking it. Careful! 1 Spoiler incoming. The only reason I really have any troubles with what is going on, is that at one point there was a sudden and drastic change. But it is not really explained why he couldnt both use magic and cultivate right? Or did I read over it it? It seemed like it was a forced choice. But the reason why it was a choice, is not really explained. please someone enlighten me <3
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The sypnosis it good it made everyone wants to read the books. This type of modern storyline encourage people like me want to read it more. Please update more in the future.
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This is a very strong and good sypnosis. It did intrigue me to read the read trial. It have a good beginning and the story seems to be interesting i will follow this story.
The start of it's so incredible that it will draw you in quicker than any kid on Christmas, morning. Also, it's fascinating how easy it is to dive into, and how the characters are so well made that it can have an anime.
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Like I said within chapters, you should be proud of yourself. Your description is very comprehensive for me as a reader and author, it's not easy to get someone stuck into a story. But your first paragraph said a lot. I was able to see the scene in the play. I meant it when I said I wanted to read your book. Anyway, can't say much other than you are talented and keep on with the good work! Also...merci pour le block.
Better with age; just like a fine wine. I have a few books on which I am willing to spend coins to unlock chapters and this is one of them. If you're looking for a novel that has magic, cultivation with a tinge of technology—then look no further, you've found it!
there's not much depth in pretty much all of the story. everything happens so quickly with minimal dialog or even the main characters thoughts. one second he is fighting in class and one sentence later without any explanation or expanding on what happened or other people's thoughts the class is just over. I can understand time skipping over his first fifteen years even if I felt that his parents weren't really explained at all or his thoughts on the situation cuz it can be explained later but to the whole time he is in the academy the story just feels rushed. it's like "he arrives at school. he meets a friend. he arrives in class." obviously it's not that ridiculous but that's what it feels like.
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