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เขียนรีวิวIncredible story, with great developments, characters, and world building ironically out of this world! 100% Recommend to anyone starting here looking for a gripping narrative!
Woah! I was skeptical since I often read female leads more often, but this isn't that bad at all! The plot was interesting and detailed. The characters are well thought out. Despite not having been as interested from the synopsis, I'm rather hooked onto it!
author when will you complete this novel? or restart posting once again? (fillers to send ) dhdhcbfndjdbdbdbbddbdbdbdbdndndndndbbdbdbndjdnd
Uma ótima novel. ótima escrita. enredo maravilhoso. bons personagens, boa evolução, bom desenvolvimento. quanto mais a história se desenvolve, mais preso você fica. o único problema são os idiomas da plataforma, já que tenho que sobreviver com o Google tradutor, que me deixa na mão algumas vezes. mas mesmo assim, não perdi a oportunidade de contemplar essa novel incrível! parabéns, ótimo trabalho! ~from Brazil
Disgusting----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------But crocobloves your book- 5 star for you..
Man the title and the synopsis of this novel is fabulous. I can't stop myself from reading this wonderful novel and unlocking multiple chapter to support this author. He deserve a 5 star review.
First of all, it's an amazing story that tells about stratagem and some power cultivation. Though the story feels boring from the start eventually you will get hooked and start following the story. The character development is good. Overall a good novel to read if you want some action and strategist type MC. Keep it up, Author. Ps. I just want to criticize or suggest to the Author that to make the battle map or battlefield clearer because it's a little bit confusing to imagine where is the position of the MC, his allies, the enemies, and key points. I recommend adding distance and general direction(ex. The battle begins in the open field, the mc is facing north while the enemy facing south, the mc can't find a position to exploit other than fighting head-on because in his left is a mountain range while 3 km east of his position is a wide river that flows from northeast to southwest.)
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์i honestly believe that the author has put a lot of effort and thought into their content. The explanation of the cores and gallant power appealed with sense, and as a fan of ml novels I really do enjoy this one. it is wonderfully-crafted with good pacing, and writing quality. Thank you for a superbly created work!
An excellent story. Want more....... got me hooked up and greatly recommend it. the update stability and thre character design are all just good just that there was some problems in the word of choice, the story was very good
May thy author continue this great plot & storyline! I'm a fan! Please continue writing great chapters...
I read through some chapters, I liked the mc and his craftiness but what I genuinely like in this novel is the world background and how all the powers are introduced
I absolutely love the writing style and the story was spot on!! [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=faceslap] Give us more!!
In needs improvement in writing but the flow of the war miltiary and strategy is well written I like reading thank you Author. but still in needs improvement on the writing quality please some words are not written well.
i just skip reading, but i think you must get editor, man. i mean its little hard to read to me (i dont know anyone else) and dont have what i call story "flow". english is not my language so its bit hard to explain, but i think your punctuation need improvement
i really don't understand why this has high reviews its a novel with good potential the idea of it is really great but the writing quality is horrible the pacing is weird and some of the developments aren't explained well at all
I love this! I'm actually using it as an academic reference! I really respect people with great imagination and creativity and this author is an expert in both! The mix between realistic military structure and fantastical elements is just::Chef kiss:: I still go back to the beginning to keep track of the Gallant power specificities and not miss the hints and I keep being amazed every time by how intricate and sophisticated the world background is. Kudos!
Good characters, the MC actually seems like a person. The grammar and sentence making are just horrible though. The author uses the wrong tenses and often switches direct and indirect speech. It definitely needs an editor who can channel the story better. Overall, it seems like a nice read but a bit hard on the reader's brain cells.
nice book. pretty detailed and the sentences are developed. plot is super that made me hooked to the story. and your knowledge about social politics and level of positions in different sector is super. I read mostly fantasy webtoon and it's similar to those ones. keep up author.
It rather well balanced compared to other books which tends to fall or favor one side over the other (Philosophical PoV/ meanings that it can express and The Logical PoV /the continuity of the story) Not being too complex that it is hard to understand or too simple that it becomes boring just having the right 'feel' that makes it rather easy to visualize and interesting Overall it is something that makes it worth reading as I am not really capable of expressing more of my feelings that this is the best way that I can describe it
This is a book based on military and from the title I can guess strategies which I love the most!!
The author has a vested interest in his story, and that comes through in his writing. An original story that gets updated quite often. the chapters are of a manageable size and cover the detail succinctly.
The first few chapters was well written but stil there are some grammatical errors hope the author can improve it so that the novel can be much better. But in overall the authir did an expectacular job in making the novel alive and immersible specially the battle scenes it is pretty much alive. the author is amazing
Wow! love it it's such a toungue twister and after reading it for first 5 mins I'm already hooked and congratulations on 111k views you deserve it👍
Incredible story, with great developments, characters, and world building[img=update] I also like background '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
Nice and very descriptive. I really like this story.Excellent work.The characters are so much alive.The anger is really dreadful.A good work.I love this story.
The auxiliary chapter made everything easy to understand. Everything is flawless and Very, Very Good. I love the characters and how you portrayed them well. And how you thoroughly explain. Don't lose the motivation to write💖 I'm cheering you on💯
It's really easy to become absorbed by what is happening in the book, I can see that the author has put a lot of efforts into this. To be honest there are moments when I could really feel the setting in the book as it is written so well. Hope that you can keep up!
Hi. I know that this is a great story. The synopsis is really nice. Short but precise. I also like the use of quotations. Looking forward to joining a journey with this book
It is awesome to read this book since it is pretty much detailed and well made. The character design is good and the plot is interesting. Keep it up author and good luck.
The story was incredible and the introduction of the characters and the world around felt natural. The plot unfolded in an organized way and this work is truly worth reading.
Book was recommended to me and I had read few chapters. It is very descriptive that I could imagine myself standing side by side with the main character. The world itself is very creative, something I would imagine in anime. BUT The novel would improve if you could tweak it a bit for readers ease of flow of reading. Other than that, I enjoyed the adventure with the main character.👌🏼
i really like the background and the story development i always have interest on wars and such yet i havent really found any story that made im interested in it this is by far the first one im interested in i haven't read all the chapters but by far i love it
Incredible story, with great developments, characters, and world building ironically out of this world! 100% Recommend to anyone starting here looking for a gripping narrative!
Woah! I was skeptical since I often read female leads more often, but this isn't that bad at all! The plot was interesting and detailed. The characters are well thought out. Despite not having been as interested from the synopsis, I'm rather hooked onto it!
author when will you complete this novel? or restart posting once again? (fillers to send ) dhdhcbfndjdbdbdbbddbdbdbdbdndndndndbbdbdbndjdnd
Uma ótima novel. ótima escrita. enredo maravilhoso. bons personagens, boa evolução, bom desenvolvimento. quanto mais a história se desenvolve, mais preso você fica. o único problema são os idiomas da plataforma, já que tenho que sobreviver com o Google tradutor, que me deixa na mão algumas vezes. mas mesmo assim, não perdi a oportunidade de contemplar essa novel incrível! parabéns, ótimo trabalho! ~from Brazil
Disgusting----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------But crocobloves your book- 5 star for you..
Man the title and the synopsis of this novel is fabulous. I can't stop myself from reading this wonderful novel and unlocking multiple chapter to support this author. He deserve a 5 star review.
First of all, it's an amazing story that tells about stratagem and some power cultivation. Though the story feels boring from the start eventually you will get hooked and start following the story. The character development is good. Overall a good novel to read if you want some action and strategist type MC. Keep it up, Author. Ps. I just want to criticize or suggest to the Author that to make the battle map or battlefield clearer because it's a little bit confusing to imagine where is the position of the MC, his allies, the enemies, and key points. I recommend adding distance and general direction(ex. The battle begins in the open field, the mc is facing north while the enemy facing south, the mc can't find a position to exploit other than fighting head-on because in his left is a mountain range while 3 km east of his position is a wide river that flows from northeast to southwest.)
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์i honestly believe that the author has put a lot of effort and thought into their content. The explanation of the cores and gallant power appealed with sense, and as a fan of ml novels I really do enjoy this one. it is wonderfully-crafted with good pacing, and writing quality. Thank you for a superbly created work!
An excellent story. Want more....... got me hooked up and greatly recommend it. the update stability and thre character design are all just good just that there was some problems in the word of choice, the story was very good
May thy author continue this great plot & storyline! I'm a fan! Please continue writing great chapters...
I read through some chapters, I liked the mc and his craftiness but what I genuinely like in this novel is the world background and how all the powers are introduced
I absolutely love the writing style and the story was spot on!! [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=faceslap] Give us more!!
In needs improvement in writing but the flow of the war miltiary and strategy is well written I like reading thank you Author. but still in needs improvement on the writing quality please some words are not written well.
i just skip reading, but i think you must get editor, man. i mean its little hard to read to me (i dont know anyone else) and dont have what i call story "flow". english is not my language so its bit hard to explain, but i think your punctuation need improvement
i really don't understand why this has high reviews its a novel with good potential the idea of it is really great but the writing quality is horrible the pacing is weird and some of the developments aren't explained well at all
I love this! I'm actually using it as an academic reference! I really respect people with great imagination and creativity and this author is an expert in both! The mix between realistic military structure and fantastical elements is just::Chef kiss:: I still go back to the beginning to keep track of the Gallant power specificities and not miss the hints and I keep being amazed every time by how intricate and sophisticated the world background is. Kudos!
Good characters, the MC actually seems like a person. The grammar and sentence making are just horrible though. The author uses the wrong tenses and often switches direct and indirect speech. It definitely needs an editor who can channel the story better. Overall, it seems like a nice read but a bit hard on the reader's brain cells.
nice book. pretty detailed and the sentences are developed. plot is super that made me hooked to the story. and your knowledge about social politics and level of positions in different sector is super. I read mostly fantasy webtoon and it's similar to those ones. keep up author.
It rather well balanced compared to other books which tends to fall or favor one side over the other (Philosophical PoV/ meanings that it can express and The Logical PoV /the continuity of the story) Not being too complex that it is hard to understand or too simple that it becomes boring just having the right 'feel' that makes it rather easy to visualize and interesting Overall it is something that makes it worth reading as I am not really capable of expressing more of my feelings that this is the best way that I can describe it
This is a book based on military and from the title I can guess strategies which I love the most!!
The author has a vested interest in his story, and that comes through in his writing. An original story that gets updated quite often. the chapters are of a manageable size and cover the detail succinctly.
The first few chapters was well written but stil there are some grammatical errors hope the author can improve it so that the novel can be much better. But in overall the authir did an expectacular job in making the novel alive and immersible specially the battle scenes it is pretty much alive. the author is amazing
Wow! love it it's such a toungue twister and after reading it for first 5 mins I'm already hooked and congratulations on 111k views you deserve it👍
Incredible story, with great developments, characters, and world building[img=update] I also like background '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
Nice and very descriptive. I really like this story.Excellent work.The characters are so much alive.The anger is really dreadful.A good work.I love this story.
The auxiliary chapter made everything easy to understand. Everything is flawless and Very, Very Good. I love the characters and how you portrayed them well. And how you thoroughly explain. Don't lose the motivation to write💖 I'm cheering you on💯
It's really easy to become absorbed by what is happening in the book, I can see that the author has put a lot of efforts into this. To be honest there are moments when I could really feel the setting in the book as it is written so well. Hope that you can keep up!
Hi. I know that this is a great story. The synopsis is really nice. Short but precise. I also like the use of quotations. Looking forward to joining a journey with this book
It is awesome to read this book since it is pretty much detailed and well made. The character design is good and the plot is interesting. Keep it up author and good luck.
The story was incredible and the introduction of the characters and the world around felt natural. The plot unfolded in an organized way and this work is truly worth reading.
Book was recommended to me and I had read few chapters. It is very descriptive that I could imagine myself standing side by side with the main character. The world itself is very creative, something I would imagine in anime. BUT The novel would improve if you could tweak it a bit for readers ease of flow of reading. Other than that, I enjoyed the adventure with the main character.👌🏼
i really like the background and the story development i always have interest on wars and such yet i havent really found any story that made im interested in it this is by far the first one im interested in i haven't read all the chapters but by far i love it