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Our grandfather got sent an amazon package for literally no reason at all. We don't know how he got it, but it is your story as an amazon book called Peter Bouchard's Discover by Peter Bouchard. I don't know how this landed in our hands because we have never heard of this story before (cool beans btw), but I'm literally holding this story in my hands. So sorry someone is selling your fic if you are indeed not Peter Bouchard, also super stoked about having your book in physical copy because I don't know if anyone else does. We tried to join the discord but the link has expired since it must've been years since it was posted.
esto es basura,,,,,................................................................................................................................................
Honestly one of my top 10 fanfics of MHA. A shame no new update come out, but it was good. I liked how Nejire was the gf, never seen a fanfic with her before. Wish it went on a little longer, at least till the scene when the big 3 are introduced to the class.
As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all daY As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all daY As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all daY As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all daY As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day
I really liked it 😊 it was on track with the og Story and the merge of the mc in that world is smooth but it is kinda rough as well but overall 👌
Without a doubt one of the best fanfics of MHA that I've encountered. I loved that Nejire is the waifu here and not the usual 1-A students. I can't wait to see more.
writing is good story development is aceptable character is too bland and no personality Updates sometimes world already exists ............
Top tier-------------------------and jojo references???--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
In the twenty chapters I've read there was never a use of plus ultra Disappointing 1/10 The rest of the story is magnificent but I still think it deserves a 1/10[img=recommend]
Easily one of if not the best MHA. The only lacking aspect is the update speed. The MC has a very interresting personality and the story is well paced.
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I like it. More updates would be nice--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I support my fellow french comrade I really like this story but it would have been intersting to see a story where kotei doesn´t have a personality change.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 this is sick.. please update more chapter..it like a combine power of pain and fujitora
J’aime bien comment tu écris, je crois que tu es aussi français ? Si possible si il y a une prochaine fan fic serait-il possible que le mc soit du côté des méchants ? Svp
not bad... ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎
Good......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Good
(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~
Such a good story. .... Damn it I need more updates. . Your ope ope no mi story was also one of my favourites.. ... Whatever dude just don't abandon this one
****************************************************Me parecio increible hasta ahora comparado con tus otras historias creo que esta es la mejor**************************************
Noice story. All your stories have a consistency that is admirable, like DarkWolfShiro's stories, and in my opinion, that's what makes it all that much better. I would prefer a lone wolf type of character, tho, it'll be unique for once.
few cringe worthy moment (like very little) but very well written and 5 star worthy fan-fic. It better than the trashes i wasted my eye upon, so please don't drop it, very good job author and keep up the good work.
This book is awesome, the characters are done well, the mc is op but done the right way, the romance is adorable and his personality is pretty cool too just wish we could force the author to write 12 chapters a day...😌
Honestly, being an OP with a transmigration/reincarnation start without a family, having great power but actually starting as a midfielder could be a better concept.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Our grandfather got sent an amazon package for literally no reason at all. We don't know how he got it, but it is your story as an amazon book called Peter Bouchard's Discover by Peter Bouchard. I don't know how this landed in our hands because we have never heard of this story before (cool beans btw), but I'm literally holding this story in my hands. So sorry someone is selling your fic if you are indeed not Peter Bouchard, also super stoked about having your book in physical copy because I don't know if anyone else does. We tried to join the discord but the link has expired since it must've been years since it was posted.
esto es basura,,,,,................................................................................................................................................
Honestly one of my top 10 fanfics of MHA. A shame no new update come out, but it was good. I liked how Nejire was the gf, never seen a fanfic with her before. Wish it went on a little longer, at least till the scene when the big 3 are introduced to the class.
As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all daY As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all daY As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all daY As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all daY As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day As loNg as he dates Uraraka then id read gravity babe all day
I really liked it 😊 it was on track with the og Story and the merge of the mc in that world is smooth but it is kinda rough as well but overall 👌
Without a doubt one of the best fanfics of MHA that I've encountered. I loved that Nejire is the waifu here and not the usual 1-A students. I can't wait to see more.
writing is good story development is aceptable character is too bland and no personality Updates sometimes world already exists ............
Top tier-------------------------and jojo references???--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
In the twenty chapters I've read there was never a use of plus ultra Disappointing 1/10 The rest of the story is magnificent but I still think it deserves a 1/10[img=recommend]
Easily one of if not the best MHA. The only lacking aspect is the update speed. The MC has a very interresting personality and the story is well paced.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I like it. More updates would be nice--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I support my fellow french comrade I really like this story but it would have been intersting to see a story where kotei doesn´t have a personality change.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 this is sick.. please update more chapter..it like a combine power of pain and fujitora
J’aime bien comment tu écris, je crois que tu es aussi français ? Si possible si il y a une prochaine fan fic serait-il possible que le mc soit du côté des méchants ? Svp
not bad... ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎
Good......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Good
(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~(~‾▿‾)~
Such a good story. .... Damn it I need more updates. . Your ope ope no mi story was also one of my favourites.. ... Whatever dude just don't abandon this one
****************************************************Me parecio increible hasta ahora comparado con tus otras historias creo que esta es la mejor**************************************
Noice story. All your stories have a consistency that is admirable, like DarkWolfShiro's stories, and in my opinion, that's what makes it all that much better. I would prefer a lone wolf type of character, tho, it'll be unique for once.
few cringe worthy moment (like very little) but very well written and 5 star worthy fan-fic. It better than the trashes i wasted my eye upon, so please don't drop it, very good job author and keep up the good work.
This book is awesome, the characters are done well, the mc is op but done the right way, the romance is adorable and his personality is pretty cool too just wish we could force the author to write 12 chapters a day...😌
Honestly, being an OP with a transmigration/reincarnation start without a family, having great power but actually starting as a midfielder could be a better concept.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์