26รีวิว
3.97
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
NO POTENTIAL JUST RUBBISH PATHETIC MC POOR PLOT TRASH SYSTEM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .
Thanks to the author for putting in the effort. It just so happens that it's not a cop of tea that would suit majority's taste.i think the stars covered all that I could think of rating this novel in.
I have read this book more than once and would love you to carry on with the chapters as I love this book. and if you do come with more chapters I will start to vote all of my power stones that I have every day. I hope you see this author but please 🙏carry on with the chapters
I have read this more than once and I really like it so fare 👌. I would love for more chapters and I have also voted for more please relece more ❤
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Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email bishop_white@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
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why is this novel being dropped? please update as soon as possible. liked the story very much but the content is too less .hopefully waiting for the new releases
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
so far, good. I haven't read far but hay reading takes time.🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚
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Has potential, more character depth is really all that I could ask for from a novel like this. The world building is acceptable for this novel, but it it isn't great. Keep up the good work man.
A good ero novel... The mc acts how'd you think a mind controlling pervert to act so it's actually rather fun to read I hope the author continues to write
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Do not read some dumb novel written by a dumb ero fanatic all em novels of the 70's are way better...plus he sure jokes with he eyes a lot .. the name z sure cliche buh the novel z dumb...it's just hypnotize and bang his sis, his boss, mum😶😶😶 the story has no damn depth do u hear me... . ... ..Author or translator...you darn messed up
Keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going Keep going keep going keep going keep going Keep going keep going keep going keep going
So far the story is pretty good, and I hope author don't abandon this. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Pretty good, I'd like to see where this goes. As of writing this the story is on chapter 10 and it's going pretty well so far!
Don't drop pleasss ... More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Harem is God realm
sigh, really disappointing, he is one of those mc that helps other characters getting a harem, read the title and connect the dot, yes, he helps his friend and im not into reading a mc that goes around helping other get harem so im out
Is it netorare or netori???. Is it netorare or netori???. Is it netorare or netori???. Is it netorare or netori???. Is it netorare or netori???.
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NO POTENTIAL JUST RUBBISH PATHETIC MC POOR PLOT TRASH SYSTEM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .
Thanks to the author for putting in the effort. It just so happens that it's not a cop of tea that would suit majority's taste.i think the stars covered all that I could think of rating this novel in.
I have read this book more than once and would love you to carry on with the chapters as I love this book. and if you do come with more chapters I will start to vote all of my power stones that I have every day. I hope you see this author but please 🙏carry on with the chapters
I have read this more than once and I really like it so fare 👌. I would love for more chapters and I have also voted for more please relece more ❤
________ __________ _________________ __________ _____________________________ fihfjfhdgdhxhxhdhcjfydydhcydydhfudufhcjf
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email bishop_white@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Just a review.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
why is this novel being dropped? please update as soon as possible. liked the story very much but the content is too less .hopefully waiting for the new releases
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
so far, good. I haven't read far but hay reading takes time.🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚
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Has potential, more character depth is really all that I could ask for from a novel like this. The world building is acceptable for this novel, but it it isn't great. Keep up the good work man.
A good ero novel... The mc acts how'd you think a mind controlling pervert to act so it's actually rather fun to read I hope the author continues to write
Nice ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do not read some dumb novel written by a dumb ero fanatic all em novels of the 70's are way better...plus he sure jokes with he eyes a lot .. the name z sure cliche buh the novel z dumb...it's just hypnotize and bang his sis, his boss, mum😶😶😶 the story has no damn depth do u hear me... . ... ..Author or translator...you darn messed up
Keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going Keep going keep going keep going keep going Keep going keep going keep going keep going
So far the story is pretty good, and I hope author don't abandon this. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Pretty good, I'd like to see where this goes. As of writing this the story is on chapter 10 and it's going pretty well so far!
Don't drop pleasss ... More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Harem is God realm
sigh, really disappointing, he is one of those mc that helps other characters getting a harem, read the title and connect the dot, yes, he helps his friend and im not into reading a mc that goes around helping other get harem so im out
Is it netorare or netori???. Is it netorare or netori???. Is it netorare or netori???. Is it netorare or netori???. Is it netorare or netori???.
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