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it was fine but Saiyan was used too much in different fanfic that it numb the quality of the story but overall good English is not my first language
its allaround pretty meh. The grammar is quite good, Story Development is really boring, consistenyc are also kind of bad.So I'm quite confused why this book is rated 4+
honestly love this but please dont drop man im a big rwby fan especially the reincarnated fan fics and want to see more of this one especially when he goes to dbz if he does at all[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
same original RWBY except here the mc follows the rwby team even the monologue is the same as the original with some self insert by the author and gets some change around chapter 80 or something but he made the mc too strong and he had to make a clone out of him so... if u like an extremely op guy that turns other characters into side characters with a large harem then read this not a good story but good enough to pass the time i guess
Binged 60 of the 190 chapters and gosh I wish this had atleast 1000 chaps that way I could put more days into this. I recommend this fanfic to anyone who loves rwby and enjoys saiyan type power
all I can say is GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
mc is weak for saiyan and power levels are weak compared to canon DBZ but that's fine since this is a fanic au, one complaint I have is the story seems very slowgoing
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this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will go on. please keep up the good work that is this story.
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It is readable but not that amazing. They're at least five better RWBY fanfics on this site that I know of and update regularly. Writing Quality is amazing, so there is no problem there. Stability of updates, I just gave it a four because... Story Development is shitty because there is no change from cannon, exactly the same. The Author is probably a first-time author that watch the show and wrote everything word for word since all first-time fanfic authors do that. The Author will eventually grow, but as of now, no development. Character Design is irritating but bearable. He is supposed to be a reincarnated Sayan but takes the RWBY world as a joke. No seriousness whatsoever. Just a normal dude, who became a Sayan for two seconds, got transported to the RWBY UNiverse, and suddenly has all his shit figured out because he is just 'miraculously' better than everyone else in his head. World Background - none, because everything is the same as cannon. I can change this review if the novel improves.
Beautiful, if we put aside the notes that he wrote in the notebook and the distribution of powers and that the Mc likes to use a Scythe sickle lmao is a pleasant read, grateful to the author who does not visit the Yuri a well done harem and I can't wait for him to get the ice queen hahahaha come on Rubi! make her fall, so if you like harem but not yuri this is your novel
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he is weak for an ancient Saiyan. his flirting is kind of cringy sometimes and he wrote down everything he knows about the world in a notebook unencrypted that he basically keeps under his pillow. so other than that I like the story so far
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This is awesome! please continue. looking forward to it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is good so so so give me more oh give more oh give me more pls i beg to give more i cry out Loud to stares to get my chapters just give me more oh oh ohosodjoeoewiejrjrj give me give me..... more..
The novel is simply amazing!!! I absolutely love the story so far and can't wait for more!!! I mean the character interaction is so good!!! Long live Ruby, Blake, and Velvet~~
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Writing quality is good. Update stability I have no remarks as some authurs can update twice a day and some once a week. Story development is okay. It just feels so because of the slow release rate. I like his charachter. And world is obviously Rwby. It's in the title. 5/5
it was fine but Saiyan was used too much in different fanfic that it numb the quality of the story but overall good English is not my first language
its allaround pretty meh. The grammar is quite good, Story Development is really boring, consistenyc are also kind of bad.So I'm quite confused why this book is rated 4+
honestly love this but please dont drop man im a big rwby fan especially the reincarnated fan fics and want to see more of this one especially when he goes to dbz if he does at all[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
same original RWBY except here the mc follows the rwby team even the monologue is the same as the original with some self insert by the author and gets some change around chapter 80 or something but he made the mc too strong and he had to make a clone out of him so... if u like an extremely op guy that turns other characters into side characters with a large harem then read this not a good story but good enough to pass the time i guess
Binged 60 of the 190 chapters and gosh I wish this had atleast 1000 chaps that way I could put more days into this. I recommend this fanfic to anyone who loves rwby and enjoys saiyan type power
all I can say is GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
mc is weak for saiyan and power levels are weak compared to canon DBZ but that's fine since this is a fanic au, one complaint I have is the story seems very slowgoing
Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? huge harem?
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will go on. please keep up the good work that is this story.
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It is readable but not that amazing. They're at least five better RWBY fanfics on this site that I know of and update regularly. Writing Quality is amazing, so there is no problem there. Stability of updates, I just gave it a four because... Story Development is shitty because there is no change from cannon, exactly the same. The Author is probably a first-time author that watch the show and wrote everything word for word since all first-time fanfic authors do that. The Author will eventually grow, but as of now, no development. Character Design is irritating but bearable. He is supposed to be a reincarnated Sayan but takes the RWBY world as a joke. No seriousness whatsoever. Just a normal dude, who became a Sayan for two seconds, got transported to the RWBY UNiverse, and suddenly has all his shit figured out because he is just 'miraculously' better than everyone else in his head. World Background - none, because everything is the same as cannon. I can change this review if the novel improves.
Beautiful, if we put aside the notes that he wrote in the notebook and the distribution of powers and that the Mc likes to use a Scythe sickle lmao is a pleasant read, grateful to the author who does not visit the Yuri a well done harem and I can't wait for him to get the ice queen hahahaha come on Rubi! make her fall, so if you like harem but not yuri this is your novel
awesome story man 😋🤗🤑😚😚🤗🤗🤗🤭🥲😋😋🤫🤫🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤫🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🥲😋😋😋😛😛😋😋😋😋🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫😝😝😝😑😪😏😏🤭🤭🤫🤫🤫🤫
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he is weak for an ancient Saiyan. his flirting is kind of cringy sometimes and he wrote down everything he knows about the world in a notebook unencrypted that he basically keeps under his pillow. so other than that I like the story so far
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This is awesome! please continue. looking forward to it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is good so so so give me more oh give more oh give me more pls i beg to give more i cry out Loud to stares to get my chapters just give me more oh oh ohosodjoeoewiejrjrj give me give me..... more..
The novel is simply amazing!!! I absolutely love the story so far and can't wait for more!!! I mean the character interaction is so good!!! Long live Ruby, Blake, and Velvet~~
just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review, just for exp so I will give a nice review.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Writing quality is good. Update stability I have no remarks as some authurs can update twice a day and some once a week. Story development is okay. It just feels so because of the slow release rate. I like his charachter. And world is obviously Rwby. It's in the title. 5/5
Pls post the world hopping Yuyvv giving high