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This romance is pure nonsense. The fights are extremely repetitive, since apparently the author only makes the iconic "tita attack" ---------- as z z z z da z z z z z z z z z z z
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Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo
Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo
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Writing is really bad. Escanor was decent until he decided he would try to become less prideful... which defeats the purpose of putting Escanor into the story.
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Man i think u should fix the mc, his pride is less than i expected and its starting to get worse hope u fix that Btw thanks for writing this fic
I personally couldnt get past chapter 3, and I didnt even finish it. Which I know to many will automatically invalidate my review, but hear me out if you have the spare time. [ Skip to Bottom to See all Stars ] The Writing Quality is at most a 3, I never really knew what was going on, it all seemed like gibberish to me, I knew who the main character was suppost to be, and I knew what he was doing, but if I try and even remember what actually went on, it comes out blank. The story is entirely un-interesting and honestly numbs the brain. Stability of Updates is 5, sense while I really dont like this story, the author is keeping his updates stable and its a satisfactory ammount for the fan-base it has. Story Development I can't really review sense by the time of chapter 3, I couldn't even understand if there was a story or if it was just a self-insert where the author wanted to be Escanor but also Todoroki's twin at the same time because he practically abandons him family, worse than Todoroki's father in the regard he even feels like his family owes him. ( Which is not 'The Sin of Pride' its the sin of a idiot who wants everything hand given to him like the apple given upon to eve ), but from the direction I guess this story will go in past chapter 3, I'm going to give it a 3 star, simply because I as the reviewer don't enjoy it and don't see much prospects, the author may improve in a short time span and suddenly write the next scripture. Character Design, if I could I would give it 0, but I must give it 1 star simply because the system requires it, and also he atleast made a character of some sort. The MC is honestly just atrocious in behavior, personality, he's not even atrocious as in he's 'Evil' he's just a bad human being who's actions dont represent his thoughts, and his thoughts hopefully never get turned into action sense he's a self-entitled prick. World Background, straight 1 because its just MHA, the MC litteraly lets his entirely family suffer the same fate as in MHA, nothing special about the world, it's your classic self-insert that will most likely be dropped and is majority enjoyed by Power-Fantasy crazed people. Writing Quality: 3 Stars Stability of Updates: 5 Stars Story Development: 2 Stars Character Design: 1 Star World Background: 1 Star ^ [0 If not required by the site, its utterly atrocious]
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I actually like Escanor's character, it is enjoyable to read. Escanor is op, so his interactions with others is making this novel fun to read. So good author continue what you are doing.
great story so far, i especially enjoy the variation of abilities the mc has based on sunshine, that eye of the sun and sunstrike was awsome and clearly strategic bombing type of powers something not seen in majority of bnha fanfics
Hello there LovableBerry. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release more chapters per day if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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This romance is pure nonsense. The fights are extremely repetitive, since apparently the author only makes the iconic "tita attack" ---------- as z z z z da z z z z z z z z z z z
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Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo
Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Indosat Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Polinema Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo Ooredoo
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Writing is really bad. Escanor was decent until he decided he would try to become less prideful... which defeats the purpose of putting Escanor into the story.
It's just not good. H H Hh H Hg H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H H Hh H H Hh H H H H H H H H H Hh H Hh Hh H H H H H H Hh H H H
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Very good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Man i think u should fix the mc, his pride is less than i expected and its starting to get worse hope u fix that Btw thanks for writing this fic
I personally couldnt get past chapter 3, and I didnt even finish it. Which I know to many will automatically invalidate my review, but hear me out if you have the spare time. [ Skip to Bottom to See all Stars ] The Writing Quality is at most a 3, I never really knew what was going on, it all seemed like gibberish to me, I knew who the main character was suppost to be, and I knew what he was doing, but if I try and even remember what actually went on, it comes out blank. The story is entirely un-interesting and honestly numbs the brain. Stability of Updates is 5, sense while I really dont like this story, the author is keeping his updates stable and its a satisfactory ammount for the fan-base it has. Story Development I can't really review sense by the time of chapter 3, I couldn't even understand if there was a story or if it was just a self-insert where the author wanted to be Escanor but also Todoroki's twin at the same time because he practically abandons him family, worse than Todoroki's father in the regard he even feels like his family owes him. ( Which is not 'The Sin of Pride' its the sin of a idiot who wants everything hand given to him like the apple given upon to eve ), but from the direction I guess this story will go in past chapter 3, I'm going to give it a 3 star, simply because I as the reviewer don't enjoy it and don't see much prospects, the author may improve in a short time span and suddenly write the next scripture. Character Design, if I could I would give it 0, but I must give it 1 star simply because the system requires it, and also he atleast made a character of some sort. The MC is honestly just atrocious in behavior, personality, he's not even atrocious as in he's 'Evil' he's just a bad human being who's actions dont represent his thoughts, and his thoughts hopefully never get turned into action sense he's a self-entitled prick. World Background, straight 1 because its just MHA, the MC litteraly lets his entirely family suffer the same fate as in MHA, nothing special about the world, it's your classic self-insert that will most likely be dropped and is majority enjoyed by Power-Fantasy crazed people. Writing Quality: 3 Stars Stability of Updates: 5 Stars Story Development: 2 Stars Character Design: 1 Star World Background: 1 Star ^ [0 If not required by the site, its utterly atrocious]
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I actually like Escanor's character, it is enjoyable to read. Escanor is op, so his interactions with others is making this novel fun to read. So good author continue what you are doing.
great story so far, i especially enjoy the variation of abilities the mc has based on sunshine, that eye of the sun and sunstrike was awsome and clearly strategic bombing type of powers something not seen in majority of bnha fanfics
Hello there LovableBerry. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release more chapters per day if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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