I apologize to anyone who is interested in the story but I realized that I was far too ambitious for my first fanfiction. First of all, I don't want to go through dealing with growing up. Second, I really hate Issei Hyoudou too much to deal with making him the main character's brother. And thirdly I really don't know enough about the Type-Moon Universe to utilize features of it as main parts of my character.
I'm going to try again writing more of a self insert fanfiction starting just before Cannon and I believe I will either use a sacred gear subspecies or powers from a Comic Book Universe such as Captain Marvel's Shazam abilities or something like that.
If anyone would like to comment and give me their opinions I welcome input before I try again.