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บท 9: 9 .Phoenix Awakens

[Voting results

1 . MC will sleep with gwen and Jean

2. X men 3 will be solo and not merged

3. X men 1 and 2 will not happen but i will make is fast situation like you guys suggested

[Half of you voted on chapter while half of you voted on comments. it almost came 50/50 )

4. He will tell jean , Gwen and his parents how strong he is (not reincarnation)]

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Shield Headquarters

Alarms are ringing , Nick fury is shocked. He looked at his second in command Maria Hill.

Nick: What Happened

Hill : An enormous power was detected just outside New York city.

Nick frowns : How powerful is the energy .

Hill : Threat level 10.

Nick frowns: Is it a mutant

Hill zooms from the satellite. And the culprit is identified.

Nick : Norman Osborn , Gwen Stacy and Jean grey. Each identity is not simple.

Nick had a headache. He cant afford to mess with anyone out of 3 . Norman Osborn well he can still afford to be tough with him since he knows he is green devil. he can even get the technology of skateboard and armor.

But when he looks at the girls he frowns. Spider woman he had known the identity of the girl . But he decided not to approach her since she was doing good job as a hero. Well that was 1 reason other was because of her special identity. She was probably 1 of the future wife of the Heir of Cerejo.

As for jean he had never paid attention to her but now he understood how wrong he was. This girl was releasing so much power that he is feeling it all the way to shield headquarters.

Nick: Block the area quickly . Make a perimeter no one is allowed to enter. I want every details of the situation.

Nick looks at the screen . He feels that if this girl is a bad person than they might be in trouble. His hand goes on the pager and squeezes it . He feels some relief. He still has a final trump card up his sleeves.

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Destroyed warehouse

Jean is surrounded by Phoenix energy which is increasing by the minute. Gwen and Norman are shocked. But are thinking different thinks

Gwen who's cuts are healing at the speed visible to eyes (because jean tried to heal her before phoenix took over )was shocked she always though that jean was weak girl who needed protection . But the scene in front of her made her open her eyes. Within a moment notice entire warehouse was disintegrated. How powerful you need to destroy a big warehouse like this in seconds

Norman on other hand has pissed his pants . He did not think that he would awaken a demon in jean . He thought after becoming green goblin he can do whatever he wants but today he realized . How stupid he was to think that no body can stop him.

Jean was struggling to keep her consciousness . As another force was trying to take over her consciousness.

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Jeans mind

Jean saw another jean in front of her. Exactly the same just she was surrounded by flames . This was Phoenix.

Phoenix : give up jean ,you do not deserve to have him . Weak woman like you who cannot protect what she wants and cries every time she meets a problem.

You do not deserve to be with Emi, you do not deserve to become his Woman. Even after possessing my power you let a mortal woman get to your man.

Jean- She is my sister my family.

Phoenix : hahahahahahah Phoenix doesn't shares her man with anyone I take what I want .

Jean: stay away from him

Phoenix just waves and a cage traps jean inside it

Phoenix: hahahaahahahaah you have trapped me in this damn place for so long . I am going to first kill that woman you call sister and then I will take Emi for myself. I will be the jean that he deserves

Jean crying: open the cage

Phoenix vanishes before jean

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Real World

Jean or should I say Black Phoenix opens her eyes.

Phoenix looks at Gwen . She smiles disdainfully then looks at Norman.

Norman : please let me ...

Phoenix waves her hand and Norman disintegrated.

(Her power is just awakened so she can not control her entire power yet)

Gwen goes pale: Jean what are doing

Phoenix : so you are the other woman. How pathetic are you jean to let mortal take your man

Gwen : Jean what are you saying

Phoenix shakes her finger : I am not jean , I am Phoenix

Gwen frowns she couldn't grasp the situation

Phoenix : Although I would like to kill you but Emi would not like it . so i want you to personally separate from him. In this way he will not force you and i will not be blamed.

(She thinks Emi is also Phoneix like her )

Gwen : Never , Jean wake up we decided we will be his wife's .

Phoenix : jean she is gone she will never come back . Now I am giving you last chance . I'll let you live but you have stay away from Emi

Gwen : No

Phoenix eyes turn ice cold and she raises her hand and makes a fist. Gwen's arm is crushed and her bones became powder.

Gwen : Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Phoenix smiles sadistically : Now what is your answer.

Gwen doesn't say anything but you can see the determination

Jean makes another fist another arm is crushed

Gwen : Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Gwen is in pain but still calls out: Jean I know you are in there come back.

Phoenix : It seem You don't wanna live

Phoenix was about to go for killing blow when suddenly. A blue human with tail appears and takes Gwen and vanishes with her

Phoenix becomes angry ,she uses her mind to find out his location . Near 5 miles in a deserted land a plane is waiting with few people.

Phoenix flies towards the plane. Suddenly she feels someone is invading her mind. She smiles cruelly and sends a mind shock .

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Near X men plane

Gwen was lying near a rock with Storm trying to use some painkillers.

Just then professor x in wheel chair cuffs blood.

Cyclops who is apparently leader of X men came to professor quickly.

Cyclops : Professor are you OK

Professor x wipes the blood from his mouth. And looked pale . For the first time in his life except for Emma frost in her diamond form someone has blocked his mind invasion. No it was different with Emma he knows if he really tries he can still win her . But if this girl he feels that she would kill him in moments notice.

Professor X : I am OK but it's going to be trouble. We are dealing with an omega level mutant.

Every one was shocked.

Cyclops : What should we do

Professor x : Although I couldn't enter her mind I know that before awakening her power she was a kind lady. We have to suppress her power and then take her to school so that we can train her to use her powers.

Storm : professor you do know her identity is not simple .

Professor: I know that but she killed Norman Osborn . She also did this to miss Gwen . You still think he will accept her. It's best for her to come with us and learn to use her powers. Right now the relationship between human and mutants is fragile we cannot allow this incident to start a war. She is one of us after all.

Just then a golden meteor fell from the sky

Boom …

Everybody was shocked and readied themselves for fight.

Jean comes out of dust: well we'll well entire Circus is hear with your joker costumes how interesting.

X men became angry and were going to attack but . Professor stopped them.

Professor : Miss jean you know what you have done here and what the consequences are.

Phoenix : killed an ant who thought himself invincible.

Professor x : Miss jean please calm down and listen to me

Phoenix didn't bother: give me that woman or die

Seeing that jean wasn't going to listen.

Professor X : it seem there really is no way. Cyclops try to knock her out.

Cyclops was first to Fire his laser . Jean smiles disdainfully . And extends her arm slowly the laser goes back to his eyes. She then tries to crush his head

Cyclops : Ahhhhhhhhh

Storm : Scottttttt , Everyone stop her

Storm rises in air summoning lightning. Steel man starts running to her , iceman and Fireman fires elemental attack. Night crawler teleport around trying knock her out.

(Cyclops has fainted)

Jean just smiled disdainful. She decided to mess with them . She uses telekinesis and used their own powers against their friends.

She throws storms lightning attack on Ice man and Fireman who blocks it with ice wall and Fire wall . But the attack power was to much and they are knocked on ground.

She then throws ice attack on steel man he is frozen on spot.

She then directs fire which was boosted to storm which she counter with wind but is still thrown by the impact and is knocked out.

This is done is seconds

Night crawler is scared and appears behind professor X . Ready to teleport away with him.

Professor X sees his x men being man handled like this and shocked .

Professor x mutters while looking at jean ,"this is the power of omega mutant."

Jean ignores x men and is moving to Gwen who is watching this is pain . If it was anyone they would definitely died or fainted . She is barely awake because of her spider powers

Jean : time to die.

Gwen closes her eyes . She is waiting for her death but nothing happens . She opens he eyes and in front of her is crouching the man she loves the most. He is looking at her with gentle eyes. But she can see the anger hidden inside them.

Emi : I am sorry I should have come earlier . You were hurt because of of negligence..

Gwen manages to mutter : Emi run something is wrong with jean.

Emi feels sad and happy . Sad that he underestimated the marvel world . He is invincible but what about his family. Although he can go back in time or even resurrect with Phoenix Nirvana flame. But does he want Family to suffer such pain again. He will have to do something about it

Emi looks at Gwen .Her both hands were loose on her stomach. There was no bone left. Seeing Gwen like this . Emi became angry . For the first time in marvel world Emi has truly became angry.

Emi waves his hand and a nirvana flames surrounded to Gwen she is healed at visible rate her shattered bones are rebuild .Her entire body feels like it's going through rebirth.

Gwen is shocked. She always though that she was strongest among the three. She thought it was here responsibility to protect her family. But today she gone one surprise after another.

Gwen: Emi are you .....

Emi : We will talk when we go home.

He then picks her up in princess states and makes her sit at a nearby rock

Gwen : Emi Jean ….

Emi : I know everything.

He plants a kiss on her forehead. Then he turns around . He looks at jean , no Phoenix with ice cold expression .

For the first time he is releasing his powers.


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Voting

1. So professor x saved gwen . So do you want mc to heal his legs as thanks

a. Yes

B .No

2. I did not think this descision will come this fast but

a. Black cat ( Take over osborn)

b. Black widow ( Shield will send her has his moms secretary)

Also i dont know how to do R18 Chapters between EMI , gwen and jean. so i will just be fast track . ill try but dont expect anything wow in that department.

if any of you want to write it for us then write it and email it at primordialphoenix91@gmail.com

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