The Bona Fide Fraud

LV 1

thedragon_killer89

It's a nice piece of work, I like the characters personalities and can relate to them. The dialogue is interesting and I found funny some parts. Please work on the writing part so no words are missing. Please keep up the good work.

LV 14

enthu_reader

Gemma's character is interesting and strong. First chapter was a little confusing with the change in scene but that can be rectified. The narration is also nicely done. I'm curious to see more interaction between the 2 women. Synopsis is also well written. 😁 Keep it up Author 👍

LV 13

prada_murthy

The story is weirdly fascinating. Though it is confusing at times, that does not hinder the background story. The character introduction and development is nicely done. Though the dialogues are different from the usual ones, I would recommend you keep it simple and straight. Overall, the story is good. Keep up the good work author.

LV 3

_Daulla

The story is pretty confusing in the start but after a few chapters you get it. The fml character is pretty nice and soft and i like that. There is not much to comment on grammar as it is good. Just a reminder keep the story plot a bit simple and straight . Personally i like the story.

LV 4

MikXL_23

Well. Don't expect a great review since those type of stories aren't my specialty. What can I say... I honestly found this story to be quite bland, I didn't really got interested in any of the characters there. The pacing is too fast and the first few chapters felt like some "info" dump for the characters. You just kept introducing them non-stop and I couldn't understand nothing of the worldbuilding. The dialogues felt... "weird" would be the best word of choice. Other than that, the theme of your story isn't of my preferences so I didn't get hooked up in it tbh, that's probably why my review is so crappy. Sorry for being so harsh.

LV 2

yiyuehua

The female lead is so likeable, and you've got an incredible way with dialogue. It keeps me involved in every aspect of it. I'm interested in what will happen next. Can't wait to read more! :)

LV 10

Zelkolak

Ok this a fun read. And i think this is among the few female mc i actually enjoyed reading about. First chapters got some hiccups, but those were fun too, despite all that. Hope you'll continue soon the story. Too fun for me to let it go. Added to my library

LV 14

vinayraj

The intro is good Background story is good Can't wait to read more chapters. Please upload more. Keep up the good work author 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

LV 11

Vera_Anne_Wolf

I read up to chapter 3. I’m still not sure where the plot is going or when it will connect to the theme of the title “the bona fide fraud” makes me think someone is hiding who they are, or faking their wealth, or something along that nature. So far we have an 18 years old protagonist named Gemma who recently dropped out of college, lost her scholarship, but has now been staying at a resort for 5 weeks. If she is already working some sort of scam (this is me going out on a limb based on the context of the story title here) I would appreciate the details of this early on so the reader can enjoy the thrill of that scam with her. A bartender named Larry, and as yet unnamed woman were the only other characters introduced. The back story was interesting, and certainly showed Gemma as a strong independent young woman. The dialogue was creative, and unexpected in a way I found refreshing and engaging. But if I’m being honest it felt like the overall plot was lost a bit.

LV 2

Senzai

First of all, I noticed a few grammatical errors but none of which is bad enough to affect the novel. The consistency of the chapters are just a bit bland but I've seen worse. I don't have much experience reading novels on this genre so I may be wrong, but regardless of the negatives, the positives are shown better. The details of their actions, even up to the point of each character's accent is definitely part of this novel's strong points, in other words, this novel has a personality.

LV 3

cheesewheeze

I love how she described the characters, and how bad-ass they are, it's very detailed. The author has executed the narration beautifully, and I'll give you a total of 5.0 for that. However, since it has only 5 chapters, I hope the author will keep up the updates going. Great book!