Harry Potter's Natural Villain-DROPPED!

LV 13

Slesk

I tried for a bit, I truly did. But the translation to English seems to be so-so and I just can't get into it despite really wanting to like it. I wish someone would edit and clean up the fic so that I didn't have to read stuff like: "The bad is not broken enough. The net price reduction is against Harry Potter. Father is also a good looking wall." What even is this? What does it mean? Just reading the first chapter left me with a bitter taste from such nonsensical sentences. Anyways either fix up the confusing sentences or get an editor to do it for you.

LV 4

Alexandroo

Villain? Really? The boy looks more like a babysitter. The guy has no malice to be a villain, he is not smart, he accepts tantrums of a child who deserves a Crucio for 3 days of being so spoiled and irritating that she is. As if that were not enough, he treats her as if she were his goddess, always doing what she wants. The name of this story should be 'a natural babysitter' and not a natural villain. The guy has more QE for dealing with the girl than QI. Take away your eidetic memory and you have no further advantage. I stopped in the first chapters. I was very excited thinking that I was going to find a villain / anti-hero, just to hit the wall with my face. A complete waste for those who read.

LV 3

Hikik0m0ri

This is the most common and not remarkable story, it is not too good but not bad, but this fucking protagonist ruined everything, he’s complete ****, I won’t even explain why, just see for yourself. P.S. This is my personal opinion, I do not want to offend anyone, so nothing personal.

LV 5

DivinDragonEmperor

as is tradition, this shameless one will reward hi fanfic with a whooping 5.0 star score. anyway, it's interesting fanfic in my opinion. lets just hope that my motivation to write will last

LV 5

genit

So far the story is good and well written apart from some grammatical errors. If you really intend togo the harem route, l hope to see some growing pains which all teenagers suffer from ( even if he is an ***** inside, he can't escape hormones or a women's frightening intuition). Would be nice to see him blackmailing his father for more siblings and meeting his cool cousin Tonks. Keep up the good work and updates.

LV 4

Radripper5

People rate these story 5 stars just for the exp. The grammar is terrible, story mediocre and the characters are unlikeable. The mc isnt a "villain" just a book worm that moonlights as a beta-male

LV 12

Shadow_Kil

Not a villain kinda annoying to read I tried I really did but I expected a villain so big noool for me I need to have more words so I am still writing

LV 13

WikiLover

My honest opinion, this novel is trash. Basically someone from China heard about the plot of Harry Potter and decided to make some weird xianxia face slapping, cultivation world esque Harry Potter world that’s honestly the most unholy amalgamation or different cultures I’ve ever seen. Don’t read this seriously. It takes the worst aspects and most uninteresting characters from Harry Potter and tied them together with the worst tropes of the xianxia and wuxia genres.

LV 3

Lestrange_

this was horrible the mc is a complete simp who runs a round babysitting everyone the tittle should be changed to harry potters natural simp

LV 4

Levianeus

I give some props to the translator for the effort of translating the worst fanfiction of all time. The characters are oc and it reads like a Wuxia novel. [0/10] Would never recommend.

LV 6

DarkKnight32

The novel is solid the grammar mistakes are at minimum at this moment and the author almost immediately fixes issues that people find and comment on it. I found 2 reviews that make no sense there is no cultivation in this novel like wtf there is no face slapping im not sure im reading the same novel as those guys are. Anyways mc is not a villainous guy i have no idea why the title is like that maybe he will later be one he is learning dark magic as we speak mc not OP and his progress is slow but way ahead from people his ages. For love intrest i only see one member who definitely will be his wife but on the last chapter she is avoiding him nkt sure why mc is also not sure Harmonie seems like she could be a love intrest but not sure if author will do harem and his current childhood sweet heart and probably future wife doesn't like muggle born at all and it will tske time for her to accept if she becomes one character development in this story is quite good hopefully this continues and we wont be seeing any romance untill he is older like 3rd year minimum but they can still hold hands and doo **** like that but romance like dating and kissing and more please at year 3 or upper. Thats all try the story not sure why the novel rating is this bad you should delete fake reviews like that cultivation bull**** that doesn't exist the story for me is a 4 star but i put 5 star to increase the ratings.

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Daoist721221

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Im_Groot

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LV 4

Pascoe

I liked the premise of the novel but I just couldn’t ignore the terrible translation and grammar. It just ruined the experience of reading Harry Potter by giving it the same feeling as a wuxia novel

LV 14

Kabuk5

The SI!Draco sounds too much like a cliche xianxia character. Grammar could use some work, but overall what little I've read so far looks interesting.

LV 10

DarthVegito

Great so far!