Gate of Immortality

LV 3

Everton_Mason

It's a normal story, if you're looking for the difference, and quality, it's not for you. Like all MC stories that come out of the land to enter the world of cultivation, our MC has the same aspects of any novel, unique physique, his own cultivation path, prevented from cultivating like everyone else, clearly the most time-consuming and cliché of cultivation. difficult that overcomes several kingdoms above exists. Emotionally unstable, a little cowardly and ungrateful, but sometimes intelligent, that is, not to a definite aspect of personality and depth. In a story you either surpass it by quality or differential, because if it's more of the same, there are many out there with more elaborate and long chapters that show more depth. Investing in cliché and maintaining average quality does not attract the desired attention.

LV 15

noBiggie

wtf, why is this sh.t rated 4+? I never called anything sh.t. but this is one, and explaining why I did so would be describing sh.t and deducting why this is worse that real life sh.t as it may be used as biofuel. Author gathered some curated cliches. then did a speed run with it. so it's now a gushing diarrhea.

LV 2

Jewama_Baby

I am curious to learn more about this world and the samsara emperor. Good job author, I support your work..More hearts and love from me ehehehe🥰🥰🥰

LV 12

MysticAmy

Putting the grammatical errors and the mechanics aside, THIS IS A PRETTY GOOD PLOT! It made me realize that we indeed as writers, have different fortes! I couldn’t do anything like this! Keep it up, Shadow! I could really see potential!

LV 10

ArchbishopOfSloth

Probably one of the most disappointing Main characters in WN's history. I read until the end but I can't understand MC's character. Sometimes I wondered I read different stories. Too much cockblocking. Author's writing style very difficult to read at first . I am not telling about Grammar but about his style. He used a lot of ' jokes that are not funny '. Most of the tags are misleading and I am going to drop them because this is not my cup of tea.

LV 14

LucasMYeet

The ****? The prologue was VERY confusing, couldn't understand anything at all though the writing and grammar was decent..... UNTIL THE NEXT DAMN CHAPTER. Just what? Random characters, random brackets and randomly switching between " and ' for no reason at all, the grammar of even one chapter has been worse than 80% of the other novels i've read, couldn't even take it seriously. The premise of the story is good and initially was very excited, but the grammar ruined everything. Im not even exaggerating, usually when I see people complaining about grammar I roll my eyes so hard im gonna go blind since it's usually decent. So yes, grammar sensitive readers, just forget it.

LV 4

Mattigician

Good novel depending on the circumstances you most likely didn't have a background check on cultivation. which I will do my best to summarize for you. rule No. 1 all cultivation is baseless without a weak body one of the fundamentals separating it from magic leaving me disatisfyed your realm list started with qi condensation making me wonder whether his sealed talents play the roll in helping him house something mystical like qi. No. 2 true cultivation is all about transcending limits on ONE'S OWN PATH anything other than this can rather be classified as a hobby so help in cultivation is meant to be minimal only pointing to the right way. Also making bloodlines a chortcut with an insurmountable dead end No. 3 Cultivation is truly based on the Dao heart if there is no elaborate passion towards the Dao then there should at least be a fetter for someone or something driving the devotion for the pursuit of the peak. I hope you have a look at my review to see if it helps to truly give this book more meaning a foundation if you will.

LV 14

ProfessorofCulture

it's a bit cliche but it grows on you, mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 1

Rhealyn_Lardizabal_6975

Im inlove with the story. I love how the story works and it was the best story I've read I LOVE IT SO MUCHHH HOPE THE THERE'S MORE STORIES LIKE THIS

LV 15

xDaoistChaos

Please can we get day updates even if you go premium of 5 coin per chapter will still read updates..........................................

LV 3

love_kakie

I am not ino fantasy buttttt.... the word choice, the descriptive writing.... it has inspired me and yeesss, the suffering has inspired me too. Let the haters be damned and dab on they. I luv this book, ur creativity has sparked inspiration in this lil kake. U rock!!!

LV 4

M1s3ry

It has a good starting point and might even have a chance to explode in the future, but there are too many grammatical errors, etc. Of course, I am not good at it too but it would've been better if it was good enough, at least where you don't find it hard to read. I hope the author will find an editor but you can also use this to hone your writing skills. Good luck!

LV 15

AzuraNight

Fantastic book even if some grammar issues BUT it has been discontinued right in the middle of it. It’s really a shame because I was enjoying this book.

LV 4

Monarch6712

This novel was good,, ,I don't knw why the author left it incomplete

LV 13

xYunchex

I'm old, so my patience is thin for this confusing and poor novel, like i always say:Author go and take any other job to survive, writing is not for you. Laalalaslslalz Laalalaslslalz

LV 3

Suppa_Readah

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LV 14

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This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................

LV 10

SkeletonWarrior

This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................

it great I love it cuz of the astonishing characters and most importantly it has good quality English and has sense of reasoning and a good ending good beginning no mistakes if you read it you will know you're reading a novel something written by someone intelligent not just anybody just a great number and inspirational novel it has all the things you are looking for a interpreting support things done and the boy is a good boy