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I love the story , if you could write more or show me where to find stories of the equality , I'll realy appreciate it[img=update][img=recommend]
Poor grammar, lots of summaries, and time skips. Its a hard read, the grammar makes it hard, the story development is meh as well, most important aspects of his childhood are simply summarized. This is also one of those stories where the only smart ppl are mc and his women, he gives obvious advice to the faunus and they treat him like a genius, they also somehow listen to anything a 5-8 yo tells them without question so im not even going to bother reading further
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Buen libro que satisface todas mis fantasías sexuales, pero desafortunadamente este soldado ahora comenzó su viaje en nofap y ya no puede disfrutar de este libro. Le deseo lo mejor al autor y espero que en un año o dos pueda regresar y leer una gran ficción sin impulsos hasta entonces, mantente a salvo y fuerte. ¡Soldado fuera!
Your writing is great!! Everything flows perfectly and doesn't miss q beat. Your lemons are so graphic and full of actions. Love it!!!!! 😍😍😍
good story, what a pity that I no longer upload new chapters EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
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Good book that satiates all my **** fantasies but unfortunately this trooper has now started his journey on nofap and cannot enjoy this book any longer. I wish the author all the best and hope in a year or two I can comeback and read a great fiction with no urges till then stay safe and stay strong. Trooper Out!
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Hello. Thanks you for adding in your description that this story didn't belong to you. It isn't about being a white knight wannabe. Just that as a reader and an ******* author. Seeing people copy a work without at least mentioning that they aren't the original author is like having someone spit at your face. Now that you added this. I have absolutely nothing against you an instead glad to find a fellow fan.
This **** has a legal loli, MILF, Onee san. What else could you ask for dammit.
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I read this for the plot and not for scientific research *cough cough* obviously.
This is a great novel, and it deserves to be called that. The writing quality is amazing, though it does have some misspellings here and there, but the grammar is great, so no problems there. The stability of updates is rather surprising, but seeing that you have multiple novels, it's understandable, however the chapters make up for it, around a 42 average. Then the story development is quite exciting, definitely a 10/10 there. Character designs are a bit off, but they are really kinky. And lastly, the novel doesn't actually mention much about the world in general, as it mostly focuses on the characters, but the backgrounds are okay.
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amazing 👏,a whole new experience this is my first time in this app and you welcomed me with warm hug 🤗 thankyou soo much
I love the story , if you could write more or show me where to find stories of the equality , I'll realy appreciate it[img=update][img=recommend]
Poor grammar, lots of summaries, and time skips. Its a hard read, the grammar makes it hard, the story development is meh as well, most important aspects of his childhood are simply summarized. This is also one of those stories where the only smart ppl are mc and his women, he gives obvious advice to the faunus and they treat him like a genius, they also somehow listen to anything a 5-8 yo tells them without question so im not even going to bother reading further
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Buen libro que satisface todas mis fantasías sexuales, pero desafortunadamente este soldado ahora comenzó su viaje en nofap y ya no puede disfrutar de este libro. Le deseo lo mejor al autor y espero que en un año o dos pueda regresar y leer una gran ficción sin impulsos hasta entonces, mantente a salvo y fuerte. ¡Soldado fuera!
Your writing is great!! Everything flows perfectly and doesn't miss q beat. Your lemons are so graphic and full of actions. Love it!!!!! 😍😍😍
good story, what a pity that I no longer upload new chapters EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
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Fanfic???????????????[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ W A R N I N G A R N [THERE IS NTR! ONE OF THE PROTAGONISTS I SISTERS IS A STRIPPER! WARNING! NTR!] N G
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P. E X P.
Good book that satiates all my **** fantasies but unfortunately this trooper has now started his journey on nofap and cannot enjoy this book any longer. I wish the author all the best and hope in a year or two I can comeback and read a great fiction with no urges till then stay safe and stay strong. Trooper Out!
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Hello. Thanks you for adding in your description that this story didn't belong to you. It isn't about being a white knight wannabe. Just that as a reader and an ******* author. Seeing people copy a work without at least mentioning that they aren't the original author is like having someone spit at your face. Now that you added this. I have absolutely nothing against you an instead glad to find a fellow fan.
This **** has a legal loli, MILF, Onee san. What else could you ask for dammit.
NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE
I read this for the plot and not for scientific research *cough cough* obviously.
This is a great novel, and it deserves to be called that. The writing quality is amazing, though it does have some misspellings here and there, but the grammar is great, so no problems there. The stability of updates is rather surprising, but seeing that you have multiple novels, it's understandable, however the chapters make up for it, around a 42 average. Then the story development is quite exciting, definitely a 10/10 there. Character designs are a bit off, but they are really kinky. And lastly, the novel doesn't actually mention much about the world in general, as it mostly focuses on the characters, but the backgrounds are okay.
Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great
The wrath of a rod has been invoked🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆
amazing 👏,a whole new experience this is my first time in this app and you welcomed me with warm hug 🤗 thankyou soo much