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Likewise both John and Zinu is a amazing romantic couple they love each others....totally to be disteny.....even though they are separated a long time ago but their love affair is a strong and conquered each other....
Though the mystery about their identity has already been revealed and they are now a family, the mystery about their past is yet to unfold. Along the way, love stories are sweet and heart touching till everything comes in place and their lives finally could say 'everything is well'. The story is so good
writing is very cursory, like a summary of someone else's story. I liked the story idea but the writing style was just too condensed and ugly
The story was so sweet ., ! I began having fantasies through my head ., It was one of my fav one 💗Really Hope that the author could make /write such stories so we can get more butterflies !!
I liked it so much... one of my favourite comic,the character are amazing and story is awesome..I loved it[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good job author...i like this kind of story well done... john smith is a golden person same with zuni..and also their friends each has lovely stories..
Pretty nice to read and entertaining[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update] thank you for the story.
I really love this book, i like how it is very detailed and the character are awesome kudos to the author. Zinu john ronnie dolly charlie tonnyheck david karl unique names love it
This is an interesting story. I must say book starts off a bit too simplistic and lots of grammar issues but if you can overlook it , gets better over time. Author has done a great job and keeps the story moving and it gets complex and writing improves. Great work. Recommend it to anyone deciding to read this book.
As you have read in the synopsis this is one night stand book and is not my type(no offense) like this is a novel in which they will become an official couple just in first 50 chapters so yeah if this book is your type then must go for it
I enjoyed the story. But am sorry to say it does not have good ending. I hope we will be able to get another chapter as an happy ending. Thanks we love you.
I just completed this within 5 days and must say that the storyline is good with so many actions and happenings. There were quite a number of characters beside the main leads and each of them have their own short story. Well done author thus 5-stars.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]. Look forward for your next book. Stay healthy and stay safe.
Just loved this novel and just waiting for the locked chspters to get unlock any how.Ansd iam in love with the character of John and zinu.And you have written the story very very beautifully.I just loved loved this story of yours.
I just started reading your story.and iam addicted to it i just loved your tjis story.And i just loved the character of john and zinu and iam eagerly waiting to read more chapters after unlicking it.
I love how the storyline shows that family and friends work together to keep the family whole. This family is well suited for each other for example how friends became biological family members and friends are no different than their biological family members. I love the willpower of love that exultate from everyone.
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I love this webnovel it give us a lot of exciting and very interesting things to read . Im so happy of the author work.on this webnovel. Keep up the good work. Hope we can read more of your work author Zionii
An Incredible story,filled with joy, happiness and most especially Love. You are amazing author, keep it up,can't wait for the ending chapters.
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Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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The story has a good story line and it is fantastic one at that but releasing new chapter is always delayed. Please, do try to release it on time. Sometimes there are errors in the spelling, try to work on that as well.
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One of my favorite story on this webnovel that i so much love and appreciate,😍💞 especially the character of Zinu, John and small john the two characters are always giving me a reason to want to read more and more and the way the Author presents all the characters, is a good,amazing,and Awesome work Keep it up dear i really appreciate💋💞💖💕🥂😍
Likewise both John and Zinu is a amazing romantic couple they love each others....totally to be disteny.....even though they are separated a long time ago but their love affair is a strong and conquered each other....
Though the mystery about their identity has already been revealed and they are now a family, the mystery about their past is yet to unfold. Along the way, love stories are sweet and heart touching till everything comes in place and their lives finally could say 'everything is well'. The story is so good
writing is very cursory, like a summary of someone else's story. I liked the story idea but the writing style was just too condensed and ugly
The story was so sweet ., ! I began having fantasies through my head ., It was one of my fav one 💗Really Hope that the author could make /write such stories so we can get more butterflies !!
I liked it so much... one of my favourite comic,the character are amazing and story is awesome..I loved it[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good job author...i like this kind of story well done... john smith is a golden person same with zuni..and also their friends each has lovely stories..
Pretty nice to read and entertaining[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update] thank you for the story.
I really love this book, i like how it is very detailed and the character are awesome kudos to the author. Zinu john ronnie dolly charlie tonnyheck david karl unique names love it
This is an interesting story. I must say book starts off a bit too simplistic and lots of grammar issues but if you can overlook it , gets better over time. Author has done a great job and keeps the story moving and it gets complex and writing improves. Great work. Recommend it to anyone deciding to read this book.
As you have read in the synopsis this is one night stand book and is not my type(no offense) like this is a novel in which they will become an official couple just in first 50 chapters so yeah if this book is your type then must go for it
I enjoyed the story. But am sorry to say it does not have good ending. I hope we will be able to get another chapter as an happy ending. Thanks we love you.
I just completed this within 5 days and must say that the storyline is good with so many actions and happenings. There were quite a number of characters beside the main leads and each of them have their own short story. Well done author thus 5-stars.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]. Look forward for your next book. Stay healthy and stay safe.
Just loved this novel and just waiting for the locked chspters to get unlock any how.Ansd iam in love with the character of John and zinu.And you have written the story very very beautifully.I just loved loved this story of yours.
I just started reading your story.and iam addicted to it i just loved your tjis story.And i just loved the character of john and zinu and iam eagerly waiting to read more chapters after unlicking it.
I love how the storyline shows that family and friends work together to keep the family whole. This family is well suited for each other for example how friends became biological family members and friends are no different than their biological family members. I love the willpower of love that exultate from everyone.
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I love this webnovel it give us a lot of exciting and very interesting things to read . Im so happy of the author work.on this webnovel. Keep up the good work. Hope we can read more of your work author Zionii
An Incredible story,filled with joy, happiness and most especially Love. You are amazing author, keep it up,can't wait for the ending chapters.
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Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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The story has a good story line and it is fantastic one at that but releasing new chapter is always delayed. Please, do try to release it on time. Sometimes there are errors in the spelling, try to work on that as well.
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One of my favorite story on this webnovel that i so much love and appreciate,😍💞 especially the character of Zinu, John and small john the two characters are always giving me a reason to want to read more and more and the way the Author presents all the characters, is a good,amazing,and Awesome work Keep it up dear i really appreciate💋💞💖💕🥂😍