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Despite the amount of psychology in this novel, I love it. This novel is a great masterpiece that educates us about the importance of mental health, especially the effect of depression, and how people could help those who suffer from such illness. Honestly, I came here for the smut and romance, but I am now focused on just how the characters will help the females regain the self-love that they have long lost due to the years of torture on their emotional soul.
Such a painfully beautiful story novel. Don't worry guys it doesn't have cheating & all . It was really about 2nd chance in love which made tis book painful as it wasn't their 1st love & also the suffering Fls have to go through 😓😭. But amazingly beautiful the way MCs trust & support each other. Especially both the MLs are just ❤ warmingly sweet which can make anyone cry the way they love their girls. The show stopper is our mom-in-law most sweetest award goes to her of course after her son. B/c he is one the MLs u'll surely fall in love with. I know there are many wife slaves Mls on webnovels but I think he has got his own charms that's why he's the exception 😘. I have read your novels 1st time dear author & u've done an absolute fantastic job. I may exaggerate it but I really loved your novel as I can't read novels with cheating on spouses. Guys if you want to read romcom with hot stuff & garnish of mystery then plz read this novel. Also u'll cry and laugh as author put feelings in it as u can feel it. Her novel will make u feel warm in heart & hot..... u know where guys😅😉 ❤❤ for the author. Of course for Lei Zhao, Liam & Yan mei
l really really really love dis novel more Dan anything too much love 🥰🥰 for u author 🤭🤭
It's good 👍🏻👍🏻. But So Boring And Author Keeps Dragging The Story. I Hate Leaving The Book Midway Otherwise I Don't Read Like This Story 😡😡. FL Is Too Weak😒 But Love ML ❤️😘.
I gave this rating due to not very clear on the path the story was leading to. Then the last chapters I regret them.. not worthy. The story of main chara cters were ok.
the book is really good. the characters are entertaining, but the grammar is really bad. the chapters need to be edited, but other than that, it's a good read.
this author doesn't even know how to right the book in a better way. i mean once it says this and that you should learn how do things in a right way. it doesn't matter if you have imagination
I read until vol. 5. It was indeed a rollercoaster of emotions. As a person who is a mental health advocate, there are a lot of parts that are triggering. I feel like the author has been through a lot for her to be able to write about it. Regardless if this is an outlet or a hobby, I hope that the author can find time to take care of herself. On an objective note, as an avid reader, I noticed a lot of inconsistencies in the story. The characters' personality were not firmly portrayed, some of them got even mixed up. The ML suddenly started calling the FL "Hermosa" before it was introduced and then it was gone as if it never happened. Also, the nickname "Little Kitten" was portrayed to be used only by the villain Gu Zhi but Liam suddenly called Ying with it. I understand that Mystic Amy sometimes writes the chapter but the writing style of the side stories and other characters were also inconsistent. There were so many loopholes and elements that were not properly elaborated. The plot was already strong even without it being a fantasy book that including the fantasy in it made the story rather weird. Nonetheless, the author has potential. Probably shorter novels would suit her better so as not to exhaust herself. Please do not take this negatively as my intent is not to criticize but to give an honest feedback. Kudos!
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I love the ml and fl lead so much,it's such a good novel,and a great comfort novel,I'm expecting another masterpiece from the author,Cute couples🥰
A beautiful novel I love the second part MORE Red and Mr Wu definitely made a pair to read . Story development amazing character design EXCELLENT Thank you so much author kudos to you for a fantastic Story
I've only read 12 chapters so far.. It felt too fake to be true. I understand those who like it, but it's definitely not real to love a woman so fast and be her slave. It's hard to read this super fantastic story.
I want to preface that I did not read the special volume. Characters: Yan Mei and Lei Zhao are average as a couple. They are very loving, supportive, and energetic. Their dynamic was fine. There was nothing particularly amazing or terrible. 7/10 As individuals, it’s only slightly different. Yan Mei after experiencing lots of trauma did a lot of healing during the course of the story (with lots of help from Lei Zhao). That’s great. Something that bothered me was she kind of didn’t really do anything. It never really seem like she had an active part in conflicts and problems besides being the target. Even when she dealt the ‘final’ blow, she never really felt part of the solution. She never investigated or thought about investigating which was weird considering all that was happening. Though I suppose she never needed to since Lei Zhao took care of everything all the time. Lei Zhao is everything Yan Mei wants and needs plus more. Outside of that he is a brother, a son, and a friend. Unlike other female-lead-serving male leads, he actually seems to have a personality, problems, and conflicts that don’t relate to the female lead, not that their ever really explored in the story. His main source of conflict at the beginning is his desire to find out what happen with his brother. However, we barely ever see him thinking about or learn of his progress and road blocks in his investigation. In the end, that conflict is waved away by Yan Mei radial plot armor. Liam and Ying Sheng are the second couple and are more balanced. First off, as a side couple they are written well. They aren’t too intrusive in the story (as side couples can be) and aren’t practically non existent. I like them individually and together. The two feel like they compliment each other without one person seeming to do more. Even with Liam helping Ying Sheng with her mental health, Ying Sheng never feels like she doesn’t have to do anything. I don’t have much to say about them individually. 7.5/10 Plot: The reveal of who was behind Yan Mei misfortunes is so-so. It was okay twist reveal. My biggest gripe is with the supernatural elements of the novel. At best, these elements are forgettable, insignificant information that doesn’t do anything to the plot. At worst, it shoved in the world so forcefully it creates plot holes. The supernatural stuff does not fit this world or the characters. When it was first reveal, it felt like a random character trait to make the female lead special and to revive the male lead. Oh wait never mind, because the male lead and his mother are special too. Where did that come from you ask? From absolutely nowhere. It was hinted at or suggested or built up too in any case. The shoehorning in of the supernatural elements of this story weaken it. Also, the main story is stretched out for 40 additional chapter. First Yue Yan, LZ’s ex girlfriend shows up with partial amnesia after waking up from a coma. Yan Mei wants to take her in and Lei Zhao is thrilled. Both of them are chewed out for this decision, with Lei Zhao being unfairly ganged up on. While it’s true that this is because he has more people who can do this to him, it is very annoying to read since in actuality Yan Mei is the reason why Yue Yan is there. She’s the one who insisted and was firm in letting her stay. So seeing everyone gang up on Lei Zhao like he force Yan Mei to house Yue Yan is unpleasant. Anyway, Yue Yan is actually a demoness who want to kill Yan Mei. Through these 40 chapter, it’s hard not feel as if the main leads are being stupid. The demon isn’t really good at hiding her negative emotions with the writing point out how obvious she’s being. But YM and LZ don’t notice. At all. It’s ridiculous. Yan Mei does say during the confrontation with the demoness that she felt the energy and thought it was demonic possession, probably to show that she’s not stupid but this does the opposite. If she thought Yue Yan, who she treated like a sister was under demonic possession, why would she leave her alone? She should have approached her and help remove the demon and in the process discovering that Yue Yan is a demon. That would make 40 chapters into 15-20 chapter and make too much sense. Then there was the confrontation. This confrontation was supposed to show have a fight. There was no action dialogue at all. This makes it look like Yan Mei put up no fight before being choked. After that ends, Lei Zhao mother is reveal to be a witch (random). Then Lei Zhang, Lei Zhao dead brother is revealed to be alive. This would be more impactful if we saw Lei Zhao really trying to find him but oh well. Though, it real convenient that he was Yan Mei bodyguard all along and that she never saw pictures of him until the end. Overall Flash Marriage: The Domineering Wife is an average read. Could be worse , could be better. 6.5/10
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this story is just wonderful! really ! all the stories of this author are too good. if you want to have a good time I recommend his books . I love the development of the characters, the universe of the book (it's its strong point) and the twists
This is my initial review after just reading 10Chapters. 1. I love the synopsis and indicated upfront there's no siblings qualms or third party greed. it's a breath of fresh air to read something about people overcoming their own trauma and finding love. .. again. And as they are married - I'm happy that whatever intimate scenes coming up are in the sanctity of marriage. like grandpa Yan, I too believe in love after marriage is more beautiful.
I love this story very much I was shocked when I first saw that the paid chapter starts in chapter 60 compared to other story that I read. I recommend this to those who want to read about a dangerous, lovely and funny couple.
I love this book so much! The plot and everything is perfect. I would totally recommend. This book is just truly beautiful...(╥﹏╥)..........
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This is a wonderful and beautiful novel to have in one's library. Couple one- Lei Zhao and Yan Mei are a set of couple that gave their ALL into their marriage despite external evil forces. coupled with her shameless mother in-law that love endlessly. Those disgusting evil family of hers deserves the karma that befell them and the idiotic follow that allow his butler to manipulate him, too bad. Couple two- I felt so bad for what Ying Sheng had to go through in the hands of her ANNOYING and disgusting parents,It wasn't her fault for what happened between her parents and she was made to suffer to that extent. Thank heavens for Liam that showed her the true meaning of LOVE despite her doubt in it. Each character were designed exceptionally. Kudos to the author
much better...Now I can go on to another book and feel good about it...Thank you very much..I cant wait for the next part of the book.I will gladly read
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Oh my God I love it!!! All the characters are so life-like, the reader feels like a part of them. thank you, for writing such a beautiful story!
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This is a great story and I enjoyed readily. I have finished the extra volume but overall found it entertaining. Here is the good part - well written with a fun story line and plenty of suspense. Here are my gripes - there is plenty of supernatural stuff. I am not against fantasy novels. It’s just nit my cup of tea. I started thinking it was regular contemporary book but half way through came supernatural stuff so was a bit disappointed it. Better to know that upfront. Also quite a bit emotional and psychological stuff. It’s definitely needed and author is doing a great service by bringing attention to it. It’s just that when dealt with heavy hand it can get draggy but overall great work.
I really love and adore this book 🤩😍🤩 It flips genres on itself and makes something interest out of it. I might be a little bias but I liked the wife and the husband was an interesting enough character to make their dynamic together wonderful. Overall, a a great read. 👌
I was hesitant to start this because of the little chapters/views, but this is absolutely underrated gold nugget!! ML is wife slave, ML family is loving and accepting. FL has a bad past but learns to love ML. No major disagreements (at least 70 ch in) and no unnecessary jealousy because they *communicate*! Both ML and FL are strong, dominant personalities who won't tolerate sh*t from others and will hunt down their enemies. They're only sweet to each other and loved ones. Overall, I really love this. Good job author!
Despite the amount of psychology in this novel, I love it. This novel is a great masterpiece that educates us about the importance of mental health, especially the effect of depression, and how people could help those who suffer from such illness. Honestly, I came here for the smut and romance, but I am now focused on just how the characters will help the females regain the self-love that they have long lost due to the years of torture on their emotional soul.
Such a painfully beautiful story novel. Don't worry guys it doesn't have cheating & all . It was really about 2nd chance in love which made tis book painful as it wasn't their 1st love & also the suffering Fls have to go through 😓😭. But amazingly beautiful the way MCs trust & support each other. Especially both the MLs are just ❤ warmingly sweet which can make anyone cry the way they love their girls. The show stopper is our mom-in-law most sweetest award goes to her of course after her son. B/c he is one the MLs u'll surely fall in love with. I know there are many wife slaves Mls on webnovels but I think he has got his own charms that's why he's the exception 😘. I have read your novels 1st time dear author & u've done an absolute fantastic job. I may exaggerate it but I really loved your novel as I can't read novels with cheating on spouses. Guys if you want to read romcom with hot stuff & garnish of mystery then plz read this novel. Also u'll cry and laugh as author put feelings in it as u can feel it. Her novel will make u feel warm in heart & hot..... u know where guys😅😉 ❤❤ for the author. Of course for Lei Zhao, Liam & Yan mei
l really really really love dis novel more Dan anything too much love 🥰🥰 for u author 🤭🤭
It's good 👍🏻👍🏻. But So Boring And Author Keeps Dragging The Story. I Hate Leaving The Book Midway Otherwise I Don't Read Like This Story 😡😡. FL Is Too Weak😒 But Love ML ❤️😘.
I gave this rating due to not very clear on the path the story was leading to. Then the last chapters I regret them.. not worthy. The story of main chara cters were ok.
the book is really good. the characters are entertaining, but the grammar is really bad. the chapters need to be edited, but other than that, it's a good read.
this author doesn't even know how to right the book in a better way. i mean once it says this and that you should learn how do things in a right way. it doesn't matter if you have imagination
I read until vol. 5. It was indeed a rollercoaster of emotions. As a person who is a mental health advocate, there are a lot of parts that are triggering. I feel like the author has been through a lot for her to be able to write about it. Regardless if this is an outlet or a hobby, I hope that the author can find time to take care of herself. On an objective note, as an avid reader, I noticed a lot of inconsistencies in the story. The characters' personality were not firmly portrayed, some of them got even mixed up. The ML suddenly started calling the FL "Hermosa" before it was introduced and then it was gone as if it never happened. Also, the nickname "Little Kitten" was portrayed to be used only by the villain Gu Zhi but Liam suddenly called Ying with it. I understand that Mystic Amy sometimes writes the chapter but the writing style of the side stories and other characters were also inconsistent. There were so many loopholes and elements that were not properly elaborated. The plot was already strong even without it being a fantasy book that including the fantasy in it made the story rather weird. Nonetheless, the author has potential. Probably shorter novels would suit her better so as not to exhaust herself. Please do not take this negatively as my intent is not to criticize but to give an honest feedback. Kudos!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I love the ml and fl lead so much,it's such a good novel,and a great comfort novel,I'm expecting another masterpiece from the author,Cute couples🥰
A beautiful novel I love the second part MORE Red and Mr Wu definitely made a pair to read . Story development amazing character design EXCELLENT Thank you so much author kudos to you for a fantastic Story
I've only read 12 chapters so far.. It felt too fake to be true. I understand those who like it, but it's definitely not real to love a woman so fast and be her slave. It's hard to read this super fantastic story.
I want to preface that I did not read the special volume. Characters: Yan Mei and Lei Zhao are average as a couple. They are very loving, supportive, and energetic. Their dynamic was fine. There was nothing particularly amazing or terrible. 7/10 As individuals, it’s only slightly different. Yan Mei after experiencing lots of trauma did a lot of healing during the course of the story (with lots of help from Lei Zhao). That’s great. Something that bothered me was she kind of didn’t really do anything. It never really seem like she had an active part in conflicts and problems besides being the target. Even when she dealt the ‘final’ blow, she never really felt part of the solution. She never investigated or thought about investigating which was weird considering all that was happening. Though I suppose she never needed to since Lei Zhao took care of everything all the time. Lei Zhao is everything Yan Mei wants and needs plus more. Outside of that he is a brother, a son, and a friend. Unlike other female-lead-serving male leads, he actually seems to have a personality, problems, and conflicts that don’t relate to the female lead, not that their ever really explored in the story. His main source of conflict at the beginning is his desire to find out what happen with his brother. However, we barely ever see him thinking about or learn of his progress and road blocks in his investigation. In the end, that conflict is waved away by Yan Mei radial plot armor. Liam and Ying Sheng are the second couple and are more balanced. First off, as a side couple they are written well. They aren’t too intrusive in the story (as side couples can be) and aren’t practically non existent. I like them individually and together. The two feel like they compliment each other without one person seeming to do more. Even with Liam helping Ying Sheng with her mental health, Ying Sheng never feels like she doesn’t have to do anything. I don’t have much to say about them individually. 7.5/10 Plot: The reveal of who was behind Yan Mei misfortunes is so-so. It was okay twist reveal. My biggest gripe is with the supernatural elements of the novel. At best, these elements are forgettable, insignificant information that doesn’t do anything to the plot. At worst, it shoved in the world so forcefully it creates plot holes. The supernatural stuff does not fit this world or the characters. When it was first reveal, it felt like a random character trait to make the female lead special and to revive the male lead. Oh wait never mind, because the male lead and his mother are special too. Where did that come from you ask? From absolutely nowhere. It was hinted at or suggested or built up too in any case. The shoehorning in of the supernatural elements of this story weaken it. Also, the main story is stretched out for 40 additional chapter. First Yue Yan, LZ’s ex girlfriend shows up with partial amnesia after waking up from a coma. Yan Mei wants to take her in and Lei Zhao is thrilled. Both of them are chewed out for this decision, with Lei Zhao being unfairly ganged up on. While it’s true that this is because he has more people who can do this to him, it is very annoying to read since in actuality Yan Mei is the reason why Yue Yan is there. She’s the one who insisted and was firm in letting her stay. So seeing everyone gang up on Lei Zhao like he force Yan Mei to house Yue Yan is unpleasant. Anyway, Yue Yan is actually a demoness who want to kill Yan Mei. Through these 40 chapter, it’s hard not feel as if the main leads are being stupid. The demon isn’t really good at hiding her negative emotions with the writing point out how obvious she’s being. But YM and LZ don’t notice. At all. It’s ridiculous. Yan Mei does say during the confrontation with the demoness that she felt the energy and thought it was demonic possession, probably to show that she’s not stupid but this does the opposite. If she thought Yue Yan, who she treated like a sister was under demonic possession, why would she leave her alone? She should have approached her and help remove the demon and in the process discovering that Yue Yan is a demon. That would make 40 chapters into 15-20 chapter and make too much sense. Then there was the confrontation. This confrontation was supposed to show have a fight. There was no action dialogue at all. This makes it look like Yan Mei put up no fight before being choked. After that ends, Lei Zhao mother is reveal to be a witch (random). Then Lei Zhang, Lei Zhao dead brother is revealed to be alive. This would be more impactful if we saw Lei Zhao really trying to find him but oh well. Though, it real convenient that he was Yan Mei bodyguard all along and that she never saw pictures of him until the end. Overall Flash Marriage: The Domineering Wife is an average read. Could be worse , could be better. 6.5/10
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this story is just wonderful! really ! all the stories of this author are too good. if you want to have a good time I recommend his books . I love the development of the characters, the universe of the book (it's its strong point) and the twists
This is my initial review after just reading 10Chapters. 1. I love the synopsis and indicated upfront there's no siblings qualms or third party greed. it's a breath of fresh air to read something about people overcoming their own trauma and finding love. .. again. And as they are married - I'm happy that whatever intimate scenes coming up are in the sanctity of marriage. like grandpa Yan, I too believe in love after marriage is more beautiful.
I love this story very much I was shocked when I first saw that the paid chapter starts in chapter 60 compared to other story that I read. I recommend this to those who want to read about a dangerous, lovely and funny couple.
I love this book so much! The plot and everything is perfect. I would totally recommend. This book is just truly beautiful...(╥﹏╥)..........
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This is a wonderful and beautiful novel to have in one's library. Couple one- Lei Zhao and Yan Mei are a set of couple that gave their ALL into their marriage despite external evil forces. coupled with her shameless mother in-law that love endlessly. Those disgusting evil family of hers deserves the karma that befell them and the idiotic follow that allow his butler to manipulate him, too bad. Couple two- I felt so bad for what Ying Sheng had to go through in the hands of her ANNOYING and disgusting parents,It wasn't her fault for what happened between her parents and she was made to suffer to that extent. Thank heavens for Liam that showed her the true meaning of LOVE despite her doubt in it. Each character were designed exceptionally. Kudos to the author
much better...Now I can go on to another book and feel good about it...Thank you very much..I cant wait for the next part of the book.I will gladly read
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Oh my God I love it!!! All the characters are so life-like, the reader feels like a part of them. thank you, for writing such a beautiful story!
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I truly love this group its full of romance and the story is just awesome i hope it will win i😌😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
This is a great story and I enjoyed readily. I have finished the extra volume but overall found it entertaining. Here is the good part - well written with a fun story line and plenty of suspense. Here are my gripes - there is plenty of supernatural stuff. I am not against fantasy novels. It’s just nit my cup of tea. I started thinking it was regular contemporary book but half way through came supernatural stuff so was a bit disappointed it. Better to know that upfront. Also quite a bit emotional and psychological stuff. It’s definitely needed and author is doing a great service by bringing attention to it. It’s just that when dealt with heavy hand it can get draggy but overall great work.
I really love and adore this book 🤩😍🤩 It flips genres on itself and makes something interest out of it. I might be a little bias but I liked the wife and the husband was an interesting enough character to make their dynamic together wonderful. Overall, a a great read. 👌
I was hesitant to start this because of the little chapters/views, but this is absolutely underrated gold nugget!! ML is wife slave, ML family is loving and accepting. FL has a bad past but learns to love ML. No major disagreements (at least 70 ch in) and no unnecessary jealousy because they *communicate*! Both ML and FL are strong, dominant personalities who won't tolerate sh*t from others and will hunt down their enemies. They're only sweet to each other and loved ones. Overall, I really love this. Good job author!