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I really enjoyed this. Not all young people are mentally prepared to slaughter people left and right and most youngsters have troubles with understanding where their place in live is. So I think that the MC feels more real than the average MC of this kind of fanfics.
Don't read................................. It is the best Skyrim novel but bc droped it suddenly so you will be greatly disappointed.......
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Its a story that follows the base idea of the game you are thrown into a world that's unfamiliar to you and a tremendous burden is placed on you. The story explores the if situation wherein what if a person from our time who'se ideals, common sense and what they're used to is different from where they will go. That is the concept that is used for our MC. Watch him adapt to the world and people around him.
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It seems the author wanted to show us how would a random person act if he was put in the Dragonborn shoes. However, the mc acts like a huge pathetic coward, most dramatically as possible. Firstly if he was so scared for his life why is he monologuing in his mind while he could have argued and tried to fight for his life? He behaves like an autistic child locked in his room who doesn't know how to interact with other people at all, and the author wants us to believe that he is supposed to be a 19year Olympic athlete.
For the Worldbuilding, there is not so much to say, we are talking about the TES series. The writing quality and the story development is really good, the character design is steady and encouraging, extremely realistic to the average modern man like us, but growing to adapt in this new world. The only thing I don't know, is the stability of update, wait and see as we say !
I enjoy the story so far as it shows a weak, innocent person being dragged into a violent world with death everywhere. he is dropped into a **** place and to make matters worse he freezes when everything starts and survives by luck and the help of others. I look forward to watching the MC grow and adapted as best he can with the worst that life can and will violently and with much force, throw at him.
Good writing, many words to read, and a character building of the MC extremely realistic ! Don't wait, go read this diamond, you will not regret it.
Love your story and way you are dealing with power levels in skyrim, there is always this problem how to put others on the scale, but I think is little to much to werewolf pull a mammoth like this, anyway thanks you and I am looking for more!
I like ... and that's it ... .......................................................................... .................................................................................................................... ....................................................................................................................
A gem in the making. A slow start, but completely believeable MC. A whole lot of potential for overall development and hope the author continues and doesn't go AWOL. Anyone expecting an otaku king with god level knowledge and rememberance skills who becomes insanely OP and mindless psychopath killing machine without any heeby jeebies the minute he reincarnates, take a hike. We got a normal clueless human, living in modern peaceful earth who got reincarnated. Gradual mind shift and powerup's the way this story rolls. Good Job Author San. Keep up the good work.
ITS A MAGNIFICENT STORY !! EVERYTHINGS IS GODLY !! I LOVE THE PROGRESSION AND THE SHIVERS THE STORIE THE EMOTION THE FEELINGS IT GIVE ME !! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH THAT I FOUND IT HARD TO WAIT FOR EACH CHAPTER TOO MUCH HYPE !! THE CHAPTER A LONG TOO !! BUT ITS NEVER ENOUGH FOR MY THIRST !!! MOAR !!! LOVE YOU AUTHOR-SAMA GUYS STAY SAFE HEALTHY GOD BLESS YOU ALL !!
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Good story, it was kinda hard to deal with the fact the MC IS A LITTERAL PU**Y. Other than that, I can tell that the MC will show growth and probably start to become a little less of a pu**y.
I want to like this I really do but I cant read it. The MC is far to much of a bi***. The joy of reading is putting yourself in their shoes and diving into the story. Most people cant put themselves into the MC's shoes because he is far to exaggerated in his cowardice. All that said author put it best in his description. This is not for me.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa***waa******aaaa******************************************wwssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a story about someone who had a good life and was looking forward to his future. This isn't a story about someone who sits on his ass, reading or writing fantasy stories day and night. This is a story about someone who is transported to another foreign world filled with danger without have any information on it. This isn't a story of someone who wished day and night to get transported to another world. This is a story where the main character starts of week and scared of the situation he is in. This isn't a story about someone who starts of strong or having incredible intelligence. This is a story about someone who adapts to the world he is in and learns to overcome his weaknesses. Now, with that being said, DO NOT READ THIS STORY! I already have more than enough readers, and I do not want any more.
Author, you really impress me, well, I can't say that I love the story, because I prefer mcs villains and anti heroes, your MC looks like he starts out weak and keeps growing until he becomes strong, but a strong "hero". However, so far the story has captivated me, although I don't care about honor, I respect those who have it, your MC may become more attractive to me in the future, starting with a weak guy is no problem, but starting with a guy focused on moral norms is kind of tedious to me. Strangely, I can say that I'm not bored, I really want to know what will happen next, despite not seeing myself in the protagonist, even because I've played skyrim for so long that everything ends up being a little strange when I see it from the angle of those who don't know. Finally I want to say that it is a great story, don't demoralize because some people criticize something rudely, although they use an offensive language it is still useful to find out what their readers think and for people like them to get away when they see something they dislike . Its chapters focus a lot on the criteria for evaluating the webnovel, a very coherent story, a well-done character (even if they don't like it, his personality is well defined and his actions are consistent with it), his writing is quality (at least for me), quick updates and a well-done global background (although you don't need it, it's Skyrim kk). Good luck, don't drop!
I really hate how the character is such a pussy. All that stuttering and **** is so annoying like grow a pair. I hate these types of characters so much there so fucking stupid and retarded. They should just curl up and die. What a fucking loser mc. When I read fanfiction I expect the mc to be at least slightly competent but what do I find reading this stupid ass fan-fic. A stupid, retarded pussy ass character. Fuck this ****ty story. I love skyrim but you just ruined that **** for me.
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I really enjoyed this. Not all young people are mentally prepared to slaughter people left and right and most youngsters have troubles with understanding where their place in live is. So I think that the MC feels more real than the average MC of this kind of fanfics.
Don't read................................. It is the best Skyrim novel but bc droped it suddenly so you will be greatly disappointed.......
exp............................................... exp............................................... exp............................................... exp...............................................
Its a story that follows the base idea of the game you are thrown into a world that's unfamiliar to you and a tremendous burden is placed on you. The story explores the if situation wherein what if a person from our time who'se ideals, common sense and what they're used to is different from where they will go. That is the concept that is used for our MC. Watch him adapt to the world and people around him.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It seems the author wanted to show us how would a random person act if he was put in the Dragonborn shoes. However, the mc acts like a huge pathetic coward, most dramatically as possible. Firstly if he was so scared for his life why is he monologuing in his mind while he could have argued and tried to fight for his life? He behaves like an autistic child locked in his room who doesn't know how to interact with other people at all, and the author wants us to believe that he is supposed to be a 19year Olympic athlete.
For the Worldbuilding, there is not so much to say, we are talking about the TES series. The writing quality and the story development is really good, the character design is steady and encouraging, extremely realistic to the average modern man like us, but growing to adapt in this new world. The only thing I don't know, is the stability of update, wait and see as we say !
I enjoy the story so far as it shows a weak, innocent person being dragged into a violent world with death everywhere. he is dropped into a **** place and to make matters worse he freezes when everything starts and survives by luck and the help of others. I look forward to watching the MC grow and adapted as best he can with the worst that life can and will violently and with much force, throw at him.
Good writing, many words to read, and a character building of the MC extremely realistic ! Don't wait, go read this diamond, you will not regret it.
Love your story and way you are dealing with power levels in skyrim, there is always this problem how to put others on the scale, but I think is little to much to werewolf pull a mammoth like this, anyway thanks you and I am looking for more!
I like ... and that's it ... .......................................................................... .................................................................................................................... ....................................................................................................................
A gem in the making. A slow start, but completely believeable MC. A whole lot of potential for overall development and hope the author continues and doesn't go AWOL. Anyone expecting an otaku king with god level knowledge and rememberance skills who becomes insanely OP and mindless psychopath killing machine without any heeby jeebies the minute he reincarnates, take a hike. We got a normal clueless human, living in modern peaceful earth who got reincarnated. Gradual mind shift and powerup's the way this story rolls. Good Job Author San. Keep up the good work.
ITS A MAGNIFICENT STORY !! EVERYTHINGS IS GODLY !! I LOVE THE PROGRESSION AND THE SHIVERS THE STORIE THE EMOTION THE FEELINGS IT GIVE ME !! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH THAT I FOUND IT HARD TO WAIT FOR EACH CHAPTER TOO MUCH HYPE !! THE CHAPTER A LONG TOO !! BUT ITS NEVER ENOUGH FOR MY THIRST !!! MOAR !!! LOVE YOU AUTHOR-SAMA GUYS STAY SAFE HEALTHY GOD BLESS YOU ALL !!
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
Good story, it was kinda hard to deal with the fact the MC IS A LITTERAL PU**Y. Other than that, I can tell that the MC will show growth and probably start to become a little less of a pu**y.
I want to like this I really do but I cant read it. The MC is far to much of a bi***. The joy of reading is putting yourself in their shoes and diving into the story. Most people cant put themselves into the MC's shoes because he is far to exaggerated in his cowardice. All that said author put it best in his description. This is not for me.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa***waa******aaaa******************************************wwssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a story about someone who had a good life and was looking forward to his future. This isn't a story about someone who sits on his ass, reading or writing fantasy stories day and night. This is a story about someone who is transported to another foreign world filled with danger without have any information on it. This isn't a story of someone who wished day and night to get transported to another world. This is a story where the main character starts of week and scared of the situation he is in. This isn't a story about someone who starts of strong or having incredible intelligence. This is a story about someone who adapts to the world he is in and learns to overcome his weaknesses. Now, with that being said, DO NOT READ THIS STORY! I already have more than enough readers, and I do not want any more.
Author, you really impress me, well, I can't say that I love the story, because I prefer mcs villains and anti heroes, your MC looks like he starts out weak and keeps growing until he becomes strong, but a strong "hero". However, so far the story has captivated me, although I don't care about honor, I respect those who have it, your MC may become more attractive to me in the future, starting with a weak guy is no problem, but starting with a guy focused on moral norms is kind of tedious to me. Strangely, I can say that I'm not bored, I really want to know what will happen next, despite not seeing myself in the protagonist, even because I've played skyrim for so long that everything ends up being a little strange when I see it from the angle of those who don't know. Finally I want to say that it is a great story, don't demoralize because some people criticize something rudely, although they use an offensive language it is still useful to find out what their readers think and for people like them to get away when they see something they dislike . Its chapters focus a lot on the criteria for evaluating the webnovel, a very coherent story, a well-done character (even if they don't like it, his personality is well defined and his actions are consistent with it), his writing is quality (at least for me), quick updates and a well-done global background (although you don't need it, it's Skyrim kk). Good luck, don't drop!
I really hate how the character is such a pussy. All that stuttering and **** is so annoying like grow a pair. I hate these types of characters so much there so fucking stupid and retarded. They should just curl up and die. What a fucking loser mc. When I read fanfiction I expect the mc to be at least slightly competent but what do I find reading this stupid ass fan-fic. A stupid, retarded pussy ass character. Fuck this ****ty story. I love skyrim but you just ruined that **** for me.
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