Godsmithing Otaku

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Norah_Koch

I liked the beginning. Totally interesting stories. I have never heard of a god smith before. That's more than cool enough. There's humour in the story. The world background needs to be explored more. I didn't find any annoying grammar problem. The content is readable and dialogues are engaging. The gods are cute and the author did a good job on their skills. It's a good read overall. Looking forward to more~

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CuteReaper69

I like it. The story is interesting the characters are not bland. Rail is adorable. I'm glad I found this book. It takes away the boredom during this quarenten.

LV 4

Moron

Seems like a pretty legit novel, I hope you win that WPC. So Good luck I'll be sticking to your story cause I got some spare time, I recommend since due to school closure you should do daily releases to win in that WPC I'll send some of my readers over here too cause I'm gonna be doing daily releases this week.

LV 10

IWANTMYDINNER

Most novels featuring gods don't handle them too well, either making them too op or not likeable or what have you, but the author here is actually able to pull it off really well. All of the characters are unique and likeable, and the mc isn't annoying so that's a plus. The world is really interesting, um ya. Also, the author's writing style is pretty nice, their english is better than the vast majority of novels on this site. Um ya, thanks for listening to my Ted Talk

LV 5

dumdum007

I kinda like the plot though I don't usually read gaming stories. but I am hooked by this one. It has a unique plot along with good descriptions of the background world. The author has done a good job so far and I look forward to reading more, Just a little suggestion for you... try not using a lot of ellipses and be more descriptive about the MC. Instead of just telling things, try to elaborate things more. I look forward to new chapters ❤❤❤

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ligaro7511

The cover of the book is JP from black survival lol.. But after reading a few chapters it looks interesting and has a good grammar so i will give it a 5 for now..

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Henrique_Paiao

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LV 10

Jin_Daoran

Leaps the starting gate and races into the distance so fast you can't appreciate the scenery, is what I'm going to say about this. This reader was anticipating the story to be about a godly blacksmith and got smacked down irreparably on the first chapter. This reader was so happy about it that in hindsight I have to say this: no I'm not a masochist. I'm just disillusioned with blacksmith novels that's all. Godsmithing Otaku is about an otaku that can create gods using a computer app. Excellent idea! Creating gods, making them fight other gods, RL shenanigans with gods, infinite power and mystery! The execution is a bit haphazard however. This is being written for a WPC so I'm not going to go that much into the writing quality. I should say... it needs more baking time? Still, with nine chapters, good start, author! Keep on writing and good luck!

LV 4

Her_Shadow

What the hell is this story about anyway? I'm just giving this story that one mandatory review, so if you expect to be wowed about how awesome this story is, then you might as well try reading it. It's a story about a guy who happened to get a special application that allows him to create any type of god he wants, man, beautiful woman, Lolita, or child with a click of a button. If you have any questions about the story, please ask below and remember the rule, treat the author like you'd treat a nice woman, or man... Don't kill me with your words please, and hope you enjoy!

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JRT02

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LV 13

RachelRuth

There is much to praise about the author's concept. ^_^ The idea of a god creation software is both interesting and amusing. The characters created have enough distinct personalities while the protagonist is our typical, everyday Japanese young man. It's probably an intention to put one's shoes easily in with the main character and make them easy to relate to. The execution itself is decent and there's always room for improvement. Overall, an entertaining piece of work. I think I've been seeing references to other books lol, though I'm not entirely sure? Also man, I got to hand it to the author for writing a large amount of chapters per week! This is certainly an enjoyment for the readers who like binge reading :)

LV 13

KingBiBiK

Very very interesting concept. It's written in a very slice of lifestyle with a lot of fun and engaging characters. Rail is my personal fav...MC is kinda meh to me. If you are into perverted cowardly type MC then you will enjoy this novel. As for release rate and character design, this author is a machine pumping out chapter after chapter...character after character. Lovesome characters...and honestly too many characters to keep track of. The worldbuilding was slow at first then improves later on. Each god and characters have their own uniqueness. The author didn't take time to develop them, but they distinguish their characters in a very short time... I feel that the novel has great potential...would love it a more grounded version of this. Like what I read so far.

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Shadow_Knight_5814

Seems like a good novel. =================================================================================================================================

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SaintLovely

I think when a man and a women come together and create a child it's a beautiful thing. Author came together and created a beautiful thing too. Good thing he updates all his stories every day. I decided to click on his name, found this story, and told myself I'd read it Then I saw he had nine reviews, and since I like the authors work gave him the tenth. I feel honored to be the tenth. Hope he nurtures this baby.

LV 10

Mellize

Interesting. Reminds me of all the Japanese Light Novels I've read. It's got good plot, good characterization, and nicely put dialogues. I like that the MC has a goal rather than going with the flow and such. Tho, I did get distracted a bit with some grammatical errors and the eclipses but other than that, this novel was definitely enjoyable to read.