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4.3
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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Damn! I've been looking to a novel that could bring me to the sky just by its mere sentences and words. Welp, it was hard to find one. But I know this is the one that I've been looking for. Great writing skills no bad grammars so far. I love the novel and I'm itching for more chapters.
If you want a dumb, ignorant, annoying, idiot mc trying to become a Pokemon master through sheer luck and the great " plot armor " then this pokemon fanfic is for you..... I'm out i can't bear to watch the training he gives to his pokemon without even learning basics of pokemon.. all the pokemon potential is wasted due to MC's training with determination and some sparkels of luck to even learn a new move . Seriously he gave up training his riolu for 2 years because he was afraid it will leave him,then why did he even dream of becoming a pokemon master ,so to keep them as stuff toys , no pokemon will ever listen to weak and coward trainer...
Haven't really read any of it yet. Sounds like a good novel through other reviews as well as the summary and chapter titles, but I am a little irritated due to a similarity to Harry Potter. That similarity is a headmaster with a prophesy. That, however, is the only downside I can tell so far, so good job!
Just started reading the Synopsis and I think the story is Good,I've been a Pokemon Fan since I was a kid❤, really Love the story, Continue the Good Work!!!👌
Chapter 33-Chapter 50 Review So I basically write reviews per gaps in case my opinions change. So Far, the story flow is great. The plot is excellent, and I can also see improvements the further I read this book. There is a great character development between Kalem and Camellia, and I see that probably Glade and Zhery could fall in love too. The chapters are out of this world. Who could have thought to add lion king references? Talking Pokemon? And many much more. That's why I love this book. So far my opinion has not changed. I'll add a new review around chapter 100 or if my opinion changes. Thank you, author, for a captivating book.
I love this novel! It is very captivating and great. The story development is great, Kalem is not immediately strong, he focuses on the bond rather than the strength of his Pokemons. The battle description was amazing! You described every scene profoundly. His friends are supportive, especially Camellia cause she admires the champ in the making, the evil teams seem like team Rocket so far. So far so good. Great work author: DZSC! I really love your novel and I hope you finish it until the end! It's time to continue reading later!😍😍😍
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Don't mind me, just getting some EXP. .................................................................................................................
Nice story ........................................................................👍👍👍 Want more update .............................👍👍👍
.......................................................................................................This book has determined characters..
Kalem's determination deserves five stars! 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃
I love the story development, I love Kalem's determination and I love how the characters develop. He sounds like Ash though, while Zhery sounds like Iris from BW, Camellia is like Serena, while Glade is like Brock, except that he doesn't know how to cook. Kalem's Pokemon team is good. So I give 5 stars!!!
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Does the MC stop being an idiot further into the novel? I’m just wondering because if his dream is to be a Pokémon master you think he would have done some research about his Riolu’s move set that he could possibly learn. Sorry. I’m just kinda hitting a wall with how he is acting. I understand he is 10 but his dream is to become a Pokémon master...
I like the way the story is progressing and the story you got going for the parents I hope you keep the chapters coming.
This would be a good fan fic if mc's friend (female) is not so bratty. His male friend is okay, supportive, but the female one acts like a spoiled brat.
This story is just wired first of all Pokemons Use clothes, (at least that's what I understood when he said his dad always bought riolu clothes)then the MC doesn't need to go to the orphanage but he does for some reason (looker told him he could stay home) he also makes annoying friends and if u want riolu to to u don't need a translation device because u can make him talk telepathically with ora Sorry bro, I just got I little trigger because his parents die yet he still acts like a little *****
Great story Zed! ^^ so far the story smooth though.I like the characters how they interact to each other how the pokemon and their owner care gor each other tho.Lastly I thought myself that kinda like to draw some of characters tho🤔 hehehehehe
I really like the layout of this book and how it discusses things like abandonment and loss. The author brings out deep meaningful emotion with the scripture of his book. And the way the characters communicate is beautiful. He also does an amazing job describing the battles that the Pokémon have in the chapters he writes. This author is accurate in the research he must’ve done to learn about the Pokémon world. If something new occurs that he thinks the readers may not know about, he describes it for us. Even if you don’t know much about Pokémon when you start this fanfic, you won’t be left behind from confusion. That’s how good this author really is!
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The final title of the book will be called "Pokemon Shadow Veils" and not "Pokemon Judgement" anymore. Thank you for those who read my book, more chapters are coming😉
Nice story and nice characters very fun to read for everyone who loves Pokemon! So far it has 10 chapters and im waiting for more chapters to come.
Cool characters! Still waiting for more chapters and stories. AWSOME AND FUN TO READ!!! THE SETTING IS GREAT AS WELL. ALSO THE PLOT IS GOOD! MAKE MORE!!!
FUN AND NICE BOOK ABOUT POKEMON!!! WAITING FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! THE CHARACTER NAMES IN THE STORY IS WELL MADE AND WELL THOUGHT! CONTINUE THE GOODWORK
honest review from me is that it is well written but I feel that the mc remains dumb in the 1st chp when you start he seemed really small as the novel progression happened our mc get stupider
Damn! I've been looking to a novel that could bring me to the sky just by its mere sentences and words. Welp, it was hard to find one. But I know this is the one that I've been looking for. Great writing skills no bad grammars so far. I love the novel and I'm itching for more chapters.
If you want a dumb, ignorant, annoying, idiot mc trying to become a Pokemon master through sheer luck and the great " plot armor " then this pokemon fanfic is for you..... I'm out i can't bear to watch the training he gives to his pokemon without even learning basics of pokemon.. all the pokemon potential is wasted due to MC's training with determination and some sparkels of luck to even learn a new move . Seriously he gave up training his riolu for 2 years because he was afraid it will leave him,then why did he even dream of becoming a pokemon master ,so to keep them as stuff toys , no pokemon will ever listen to weak and coward trainer...
Haven't really read any of it yet. Sounds like a good novel through other reviews as well as the summary and chapter titles, but I am a little irritated due to a similarity to Harry Potter. That similarity is a headmaster with a prophesy. That, however, is the only downside I can tell so far, so good job!
Just started reading the Synopsis and I think the story is Good,I've been a Pokemon Fan since I was a kid❤, really Love the story, Continue the Good Work!!!👌
Chapter 33-Chapter 50 Review So I basically write reviews per gaps in case my opinions change. So Far, the story flow is great. The plot is excellent, and I can also see improvements the further I read this book. There is a great character development between Kalem and Camellia, and I see that probably Glade and Zhery could fall in love too. The chapters are out of this world. Who could have thought to add lion king references? Talking Pokemon? And many much more. That's why I love this book. So far my opinion has not changed. I'll add a new review around chapter 100 or if my opinion changes. Thank you, author, for a captivating book.
I love this novel! It is very captivating and great. The story development is great, Kalem is not immediately strong, he focuses on the bond rather than the strength of his Pokemons. The battle description was amazing! You described every scene profoundly. His friends are supportive, especially Camellia cause she admires the champ in the making, the evil teams seem like team Rocket so far. So far so good. Great work author: DZSC! I really love your novel and I hope you finish it until the end! It's time to continue reading later!😍😍😍
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Don't mind me, just getting some EXP. .................................................................................................................
Nice story ........................................................................👍👍👍 Want more update .............................👍👍👍
.......................................................................................................This book has determined characters..
Kalem's determination deserves five stars! 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃
I love the story development, I love Kalem's determination and I love how the characters develop. He sounds like Ash though, while Zhery sounds like Iris from BW, Camellia is like Serena, while Glade is like Brock, except that he doesn't know how to cook. Kalem's Pokemon team is good. So I give 5 stars!!!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Does the MC stop being an idiot further into the novel? I’m just wondering because if his dream is to be a Pokémon master you think he would have done some research about his Riolu’s move set that he could possibly learn. Sorry. I’m just kinda hitting a wall with how he is acting. I understand he is 10 but his dream is to become a Pokémon master...
I like the way the story is progressing and the story you got going for the parents I hope you keep the chapters coming.
This would be a good fan fic if mc's friend (female) is not so bratty. His male friend is okay, supportive, but the female one acts like a spoiled brat.
This story is just wired first of all Pokemons Use clothes, (at least that's what I understood when he said his dad always bought riolu clothes)then the MC doesn't need to go to the orphanage but he does for some reason (looker told him he could stay home) he also makes annoying friends and if u want riolu to to u don't need a translation device because u can make him talk telepathically with ora Sorry bro, I just got I little trigger because his parents die yet he still acts like a little *****
Great story Zed! ^^ so far the story smooth though.I like the characters how they interact to each other how the pokemon and their owner care gor each other tho.Lastly I thought myself that kinda like to draw some of characters tho🤔 hehehehehe
I really like the layout of this book and how it discusses things like abandonment and loss. The author brings out deep meaningful emotion with the scripture of his book. And the way the characters communicate is beautiful. He also does an amazing job describing the battles that the Pokémon have in the chapters he writes. This author is accurate in the research he must’ve done to learn about the Pokémon world. If something new occurs that he thinks the readers may not know about, he describes it for us. Even if you don’t know much about Pokémon when you start this fanfic, you won’t be left behind from confusion. That’s how good this author really is!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The final title of the book will be called "Pokemon Shadow Veils" and not "Pokemon Judgement" anymore. Thank you for those who read my book, more chapters are coming😉
Nice story and nice characters very fun to read for everyone who loves Pokemon! So far it has 10 chapters and im waiting for more chapters to come.
Cool characters! Still waiting for more chapters and stories. AWSOME AND FUN TO READ!!! THE SETTING IS GREAT AS WELL. ALSO THE PLOT IS GOOD! MAKE MORE!!!
FUN AND NICE BOOK ABOUT POKEMON!!! WAITING FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! THE CHARACTER NAMES IN THE STORY IS WELL MADE AND WELL THOUGHT! CONTINUE THE GOODWORK
honest review from me is that it is well written but I feel that the mc remains dumb in the 1st chp when you start he seemed really small as the novel progression happened our mc get stupider