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The idea for the story is very good. Poor grammar and sections missing lead me to think a lot of it was caused by auto correct and missed cut and paste. some spots seemed like they weren't finished before the next paragraph jumps to a different time and place. It's been 3 months since the last update so I think this may be dropped anyway.
Please update more author. One of the more interesting concept. The story is good. Cant wait for more.Please update more author. One of the more interesting concept. The story is good. Cant wait for more.
Cant wait for more. This is becoming one of my favourite story. The chapters are good. And the story is good. The world building is awesome. Please update more.
This is looking so much good. All the characters are good. The main character is awesome. The world and world building is great. Can not wait for more. Please update more.
Need more please. Such a good story. So cute. Good worldbuiling. Please update more.Need more please. Such a good story. So cute. Good worldbuiling. Please update more.
Hello, my other fanfics have not been dropped I am just busy with life, thank you for your support, and the criticism has been very helpful .
Cant wait for more. This is a good chapter. And a good story. Please update more. Cant wait for more. This is a good chapter. And a good story. Please update more.
Don't drop! don't drop don't drop don't drop!Don't drop! don't drop don't drop don't dropDon't drop! don't drop don't drop don't dropDon't drop! don't drop don't drop don't drop
really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.
I just found this by chance lol, the story itself was pretty interesting, nice long chapters, ok quality, and the grammar is not bad, I am quite curious to see how this story goes, I'm gonna read your others.
I like it. Very much, excellent Idea and execllebt Idea as the dude is a kid who gets reincarnated as another kid, with an op weapon, but dude You modified the chapter it now sounds like you copied some of the sentences, try to change the paragraphs before raging comes.
Read the first chapter and realized that this is already a story :/ almost identical so didn’t even bother to continue reading
I plead to the fitith, I worked hard on this fanfic and I'll be damned if Its ruined by people proclaiming it to be plagerisim, I had seen other people's stories, read my other stories, and my new one on my new account,
I really like the story how it is going. Waiting for Harem elements and hare list. If it contains Rose,Daphne,Susan,Fleur from HP world will be awesome. Looking forward how the story goes
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The idea for the story is very good. Poor grammar and sections missing lead me to think a lot of it was caused by auto correct and missed cut and paste. some spots seemed like they weren't finished before the next paragraph jumps to a different time and place. It's been 3 months since the last update so I think this may be dropped anyway.
Please update more author. One of the more interesting concept. The story is good. Cant wait for more.Please update more author. One of the more interesting concept. The story is good. Cant wait for more.
Cant wait for more. This is becoming one of my favourite story. The chapters are good. And the story is good. The world building is awesome. Please update more.
This is looking so much good. All the characters are good. The main character is awesome. The world and world building is great. Can not wait for more. Please update more.
Need more please. Such a good story. So cute. Good worldbuiling. Please update more.Need more please. Such a good story. So cute. Good worldbuiling. Please update more.
Hello, my other fanfics have not been dropped I am just busy with life, thank you for your support, and the criticism has been very helpful .
Cant wait for more. This is a good chapter. And a good story. Please update more. Cant wait for more. This is a good chapter. And a good story. Please update more.
Don't drop! don't drop don't drop don't drop!Don't drop! don't drop don't drop don't dropDon't drop! don't drop don't drop don't dropDon't drop! don't drop don't drop don't drop
really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.really good chapter And really good story. Please update more.
I just found this by chance lol, the story itself was pretty interesting, nice long chapters, ok quality, and the grammar is not bad, I am quite curious to see how this story goes, I'm gonna read your others.
I like it. Very much, excellent Idea and execllebt Idea as the dude is a kid who gets reincarnated as another kid, with an op weapon, but dude You modified the chapter it now sounds like you copied some of the sentences, try to change the paragraphs before raging comes.
Read the first chapter and realized that this is already a story :/ almost identical so didn’t even bother to continue reading
I plead to the fitith, I worked hard on this fanfic and I'll be damned if Its ruined by people proclaiming it to be plagerisim, I had seen other people's stories, read my other stories, and my new one on my new account,
I really like the story how it is going. Waiting for Harem elements and hare list. If it contains Rose,Daphne,Susan,Fleur from HP world will be awesome. Looking forward how the story goes
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