บท 24: Rewriting Time!
I am going to rewrite everything!
From Chapter 1 all the way to now since I think even for a gag fanfic it is worse then horse shit!
Basically means more verbose descriptions, better explaining, filling in a few plotholes, and changing some major and minor plot points
Also Grammerly is a thing so I will be using in rewriting and writing new chapters.
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