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Post 75+ chapter binge review. First, I don't think I've made as many intra chapter comments for one story as I have today. I've been thinking about this and I think that's a reflection of my engagement with a story. And some of these elements which elicit commentary include humor, interesting plot points, and relatable characters. Which is to say that although yes, this is a sports-themed novel with some pretty standard elements (physical/skills growth, tournaments, etc.), and less than perfect editing notwithstanding, this story really has a way of drawing you in as a reader and engaging you. This is self-published work and the author doesn't appear to be a professional. But he has taken one important storytelling tip to heart and that is "Write about what you know". It's so obvious that the author not only has a very passionate and knowledgeable perspective on basketball, but it is clear that many things he is able to write about comes from personal experience. But at the end of the day all of it just comes together with good storytelling - there are interesting characters, moments of levity balanced against thoughtfulness, adequate ******* and release, and a pretty good pace to story development. Either way, I'm engaged and looking forward to following this story for a long time. Mad respect to the author for his efforts.
10/10 sports novel, well balanced system in realistic terms, characters are well potrayed MC is blunt and to the point with high IQ and low EQ female love interest is good and it doesn’t affect the story and his obsession for improving at Basketball, system gives rewards and demerits, and social life is well thought out and makes for a comfortable read, the conversations flow. P.S. cant wait for 700+ chapters like Hitting Zone so I can compare and contrast but currently even with only 200 chapters so far I think this was more enjoyable to read
Author idk if you dropped this but I’m assuming you’ve been busy, but I hope yk that this novel is really great, in fact this is actually my first time commenting on any book, so I hope everything is good on your side and that you’re doing well (plz don’t drop this novel) thanks!!
Overall this is really well written, I like how it feels like no characters are left behind. They aren’t introduced & then left as after thoughts. The slice of life elements are actually really nice to read and can be heart warming. We could do with a bit more epic basketball moments sprinkled in but that aspect is ramping up as I read. Really impressed with this, highly recommend!
Is the author still writing? I saw this novel about 3 years ago, it was one of the first ones I read, and without a doubt, it was my favorite. And look, I don't even know much about basketball, but the author managed to create such a well-made novel that it got me interested. I was upset at the time when I reached episode 328 and there were no more updates. I saw that there are still a few new chapters, but I'm afraid to start reading them and get attached again since the last update was 5 months ago... If the author were more active, this novel would undoubtedly get a lot of attention here, because after this one, I tried to find others about sports, and I can say that none were as good as this one. If the author is reading the review, I ask him to start updating again! You have a lot of talent, brother. Best wishes.
The author needs to be consistently updating this story! I mean we’ve only just got to high school so it should only g we better from here but he isn’t uploading at all so very disappointing
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From the books about sports that I read this one had the best development with world background, story and characters, it deepens your immersion in this world and the writing is beautiful, the only downside of this books is the late uptades soo i pray that this year the author gets back on track with this masterpiece!!! Sending positivity to you bro GD LCK
This is one of my favorite sports novels it’s anbsolute gem. I just wish their were more chapters. Note to author: I will read every chapter you post of this book and you have done a great job, keep up the great work.
Praise the lord that you have continued this story you beautiful human! Genuinely the best thing I've read on here, and that's saying a lot. Hopefully you continue to find the motivation to carry this story on because it's honestly one of a kind. I love you bro.
Is this story dropped because it’s good and I like that he isn’t rushing the progress but there’s no updates for a year now and would love for it to continue
I love this novel so much! Its honestly the thing that brought me to this app and one of if not THE BEST sports novels of all time.this novel is exiting, well written, and even some times suspenseful. But above all else this novel is a love letter to basketball on all levels of the sport from the action packed games that will make you feel like your watching a finals game 7, the training arcs where you will see jaya push himself and his team further and further in the pursuit for greatness, or even the small stuff like the tv show that almost reminds me of night watching shaq and chuck on TNT . drop all that off with a amazing cast of characters and you've a hidden gem of a novel. The only thing that's holds this novel back is the release schedule being poor to say the least but. All in all congratulations to those that are just finding this novel cause you have found a true Rolex on Mott street. a diamond in the rough. a hidden gem!
this is good and all but the system is forcing him to do missions or he'll get punished, he's a slave with benefits
this book is really good bro, please update some more. This is genuinely the only good basketball online novel I have ever read. You got some serious talent.
the only reason its not all 5 is the update love this book i read a lot almost never rate and this wasn't even in the range of my novel i don't understand basketballs but i love this novel
Автор — буквально террорист. В альтернативную реальность он примешивает аниме-реальность. Тренировки в стиле "тренируйся на духе, физически твое тело сейчас сломается, но ты ДОЛЖЕН, ведь это ТРЕНИРОВКА, и насрать, что ему двенадцать, а требуют от него как от 18-летнего. Не просто 18-летнего, но 18-летнего чемпиона. Фу , бля. В Америке их бы всех по судам затаскали за издевательства над несовершеннолетними, а в России просто кокнули бы.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I'm in love with this book. As an avid basketball fan and player, when I first read this I was addicted immediately. This is the only basketball novel that I've read which is actually good and uses correct basketball terms (which is amazing). I've been reading it on and off for nearing a year now, and it pains me to see the lack of updates. I thank the author for this book, and hope he is doing fine. (please update this novel, im sure theres loads of people like me who love this book)
Bruh. Over 300 chapters n story has barely progressed this story is really just a complete letdown wouldn’t rec ommend. Author really needs to understand.
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I so much love this novel. It is by far my favorite sports and system novel on this app. It's really painful that the author hasn't updated in a long while. I hope he hasn't dropped it and that he'd update it in the near future. Giving this the 5 stars it deserves.
Rating may change but so far I dont think that it will.... The “Basketball System” becomes a “Justice System” out of nowhere and it also gives out Penalties lol trash idea. Next, the system gives the MC a mission to tell off his teacher on his first day lol he didnt do it so he got penalized. This had potential but this trash system ruined this system fic lol out of nowhere it became trash. Maybe it will change and the author wont have the system change from a ”Basketball System” and it will be good again but we can only read and find out. If the system stops being trash then I will change this rating.
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free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
i love this story, absolutely amazing in my opinion. unfortunately, i don't know what's happening, I don't know if it's dropped/hiatus/completed. I love sports+system novels so I got attracted to this, especially since it's basketball. Only thing that I don't really like but don't mind too much, is samantha, at first I didn't find her annoying like every1 else practically did, but eventually i understood how they felt and i started disliking her as well. In terms of girls I definitely prefer Jasmine, shania (maybe-iffy), etc.
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Excellent story, one of the best ive read on this app, but it hasnt been updated in quite a while. I hope that the author comes back to this because its a great story and sport novels need more content.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I absolutely love this story. All the characters are extremely fleshed out, and the story is written really well. The theme of teamwork is threaded perfectly. The character development is insane. The last
I absolutely love this story. All the characters are extremely fleshed out, and the story is written really well. The theme of teamwork is threaded perfectly. The character development is insane. The last reason is a bit more personal and that's that I really connect with the character because I'm mixed, black and Latino, and have went through some of the things that they have gone through.
Post 75+ chapter binge review. First, I don't think I've made as many intra chapter comments for one story as I have today. I've been thinking about this and I think that's a reflection of my engagement with a story. And some of these elements which elicit commentary include humor, interesting plot points, and relatable characters. Which is to say that although yes, this is a sports-themed novel with some pretty standard elements (physical/skills growth, tournaments, etc.), and less than perfect editing notwithstanding, this story really has a way of drawing you in as a reader and engaging you. This is self-published work and the author doesn't appear to be a professional. But he has taken one important storytelling tip to heart and that is "Write about what you know". It's so obvious that the author not only has a very passionate and knowledgeable perspective on basketball, but it is clear that many things he is able to write about comes from personal experience. But at the end of the day all of it just comes together with good storytelling - there are interesting characters, moments of levity balanced against thoughtfulness, adequate ******* and release, and a pretty good pace to story development. Either way, I'm engaged and looking forward to following this story for a long time. Mad respect to the author for his efforts.
10/10 sports novel, well balanced system in realistic terms, characters are well potrayed MC is blunt and to the point with high IQ and low EQ female love interest is good and it doesn’t affect the story and his obsession for improving at Basketball, system gives rewards and demerits, and social life is well thought out and makes for a comfortable read, the conversations flow. P.S. cant wait for 700+ chapters like Hitting Zone so I can compare and contrast but currently even with only 200 chapters so far I think this was more enjoyable to read
Author idk if you dropped this but I’m assuming you’ve been busy, but I hope yk that this novel is really great, in fact this is actually my first time commenting on any book, so I hope everything is good on your side and that you’re doing well (plz don’t drop this novel) thanks!!
Overall this is really well written, I like how it feels like no characters are left behind. They aren’t introduced & then left as after thoughts. The slice of life elements are actually really nice to read and can be heart warming. We could do with a bit more epic basketball moments sprinkled in but that aspect is ramping up as I read. Really impressed with this, highly recommend!
Is the author still writing? I saw this novel about 3 years ago, it was one of the first ones I read, and without a doubt, it was my favorite. And look, I don't even know much about basketball, but the author managed to create such a well-made novel that it got me interested. I was upset at the time when I reached episode 328 and there were no more updates. I saw that there are still a few new chapters, but I'm afraid to start reading them and get attached again since the last update was 5 months ago... If the author were more active, this novel would undoubtedly get a lot of attention here, because after this one, I tried to find others about sports, and I can say that none were as good as this one. If the author is reading the review, I ask him to start updating again! You have a lot of talent, brother. Best wishes.
The author needs to be consistently updating this story! I mean we’ve only just got to high school so it should only g we better from here but he isn’t uploading at all so very disappointing
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From the books about sports that I read this one had the best development with world background, story and characters, it deepens your immersion in this world and the writing is beautiful, the only downside of this books is the late uptades soo i pray that this year the author gets back on track with this masterpiece!!! Sending positivity to you bro GD LCK
This is one of my favorite sports novels it’s anbsolute gem. I just wish their were more chapters. Note to author: I will read every chapter you post of this book and you have done a great job, keep up the great work.
Praise the lord that you have continued this story you beautiful human! Genuinely the best thing I've read on here, and that's saying a lot. Hopefully you continue to find the motivation to carry this story on because it's honestly one of a kind. I love you bro.
Is this story dropped because it’s good and I like that he isn’t rushing the progress but there’s no updates for a year now and would love for it to continue
I love this novel so much! Its honestly the thing that brought me to this app and one of if not THE BEST sports novels of all time.this novel is exiting, well written, and even some times suspenseful. But above all else this novel is a love letter to basketball on all levels of the sport from the action packed games that will make you feel like your watching a finals game 7, the training arcs where you will see jaya push himself and his team further and further in the pursuit for greatness, or even the small stuff like the tv show that almost reminds me of night watching shaq and chuck on TNT . drop all that off with a amazing cast of characters and you've a hidden gem of a novel. The only thing that's holds this novel back is the release schedule being poor to say the least but. All in all congratulations to those that are just finding this novel cause you have found a true Rolex on Mott street. a diamond in the rough. a hidden gem!
this is good and all but the system is forcing him to do missions or he'll get punished, he's a slave with benefits
this book is really good bro, please update some more. This is genuinely the only good basketball online novel I have ever read. You got some serious talent.
the only reason its not all 5 is the update love this book i read a lot almost never rate and this wasn't even in the range of my novel i don't understand basketballs but i love this novel
Автор — буквально террорист. В альтернативную реальность он примешивает аниме-реальность. Тренировки в стиле "тренируйся на духе, физически твое тело сейчас сломается, но ты ДОЛЖЕН, ведь это ТРЕНИРОВКА, и насрать, что ему двенадцать, а требуют от него как от 18-летнего. Не просто 18-летнего, но 18-летнего чемпиона. Фу , бля. В Америке их бы всех по судам затаскали за издевательства над несовершеннолетними, а в России просто кокнули бы.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I'm in love with this book. As an avid basketball fan and player, when I first read this I was addicted immediately. This is the only basketball novel that I've read which is actually good and uses correct basketball terms (which is amazing). I've been reading it on and off for nearing a year now, and it pains me to see the lack of updates. I thank the author for this book, and hope he is doing fine. (please update this novel, im sure theres loads of people like me who love this book)
Bruh. Over 300 chapters n story has barely progressed this story is really just a complete letdown wouldn’t rec ommend. Author really needs to understand.
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I so much love this novel. It is by far my favorite sports and system novel on this app. It's really painful that the author hasn't updated in a long while. I hope he hasn't dropped it and that he'd update it in the near future. Giving this the 5 stars it deserves.
Rating may change but so far I dont think that it will.... The “Basketball System” becomes a “Justice System” out of nowhere and it also gives out Penalties lol trash idea. Next, the system gives the MC a mission to tell off his teacher on his first day lol he didnt do it so he got penalized. This had potential but this trash system ruined this system fic lol out of nowhere it became trash. Maybe it will change and the author wont have the system change from a ”Basketball System” and it will be good again but we can only read and find out. If the system stops being trash then I will change this rating.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
i love this story, absolutely amazing in my opinion. unfortunately, i don't know what's happening, I don't know if it's dropped/hiatus/completed. I love sports+system novels so I got attracted to this, especially since it's basketball. Only thing that I don't really like but don't mind too much, is samantha, at first I didn't find her annoying like every1 else practically did, but eventually i understood how they felt and i started disliking her as well. In terms of girls I definitely prefer Jasmine, shania (maybe-iffy), etc.
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Excellent story, one of the best ive read on this app, but it hasnt been updated in quite a while. I hope that the author comes back to this because its a great story and sport novels need more content.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I absolutely love this story. All the characters are extremely fleshed out, and the story is written really well. The theme of teamwork is threaded perfectly. The character development is insane. The last
I absolutely love this story. All the characters are extremely fleshed out, and the story is written really well. The theme of teamwork is threaded perfectly. The character development is insane. The last reason is a bit more personal and that's that I really connect with the character because I'm mixed, black and Latino, and have went through some of the things that they have gone through.