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5 stars because I want to know what happens next!!!? Where's my chapters????!!!! 😤😤😤.
Hello author are you continuing this or dropping?💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
Mc at 6 years is already stronger than a satan, unless he finds a way to add character development this novel will become a generic dxd skirt chasing harem cliche
Hello is this still going on?🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴
chapters . please?. ...............................................................................................................................................
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Just another dxd fanfic with a generic and overused plotline. The most common being the saving two kittens part and saving akeno and shuri. There's nothing that turns me away from dxd fanfics more than that
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more chapter . please?. ..........................................................................................................................................................
espero que tomes a todas esa milf que solo estan de adornos , todas de los 72 pilares. ..................................................................
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r18. "venelana". secta milf. ...............................................................................................................................................................
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Hello there DarylArradaza. I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
I found it interesting that you use music as your power, I will wait for you to publish more chapters. ----------------------- consider as possible candidates of his harem: - grayfia. - "Ravel" Phoenix. - serafall. - yasaka. - Kuroka.
PLEASE UPDATE THIS THIS HAS SO MICH POTENTIAL AND IS ALREADY VERY GOOD. Why does everything good just stop so annoying.....................
5 stars because I want to know what happens next!!!? Where's my chapters????!!!! 😤😤😤.
Hello author are you continuing this or dropping?💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
Mc at 6 years is already stronger than a satan, unless he finds a way to add character development this novel will become a generic dxd skirt chasing harem cliche
Hello is this still going on?🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴
chapters . please?. ...............................................................................................................................................
😊🤗😚🤗🤗🤗😚🤗😊🙂😊😋😊🤣😁😊😃🤣😋😎😉😋😎😂🤣😆😂🤣😙😊😂😎😄😍😚😍😋😚😃🤣😉🤣😃😉😂🤣😙😊😋😗🤗😍😍😋😘😋😍😎😊☺️😊😋😉😊😉😊😊😉😂😀😂😋😆😎😗😃😄🤣😎😉🤣😃😆
Just another dxd fanfic with a generic and overused plotline. The most common being the saving two kittens part and saving akeno and shuri. There's nothing that turns me away from dxd fanfics more than that
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
more chapter . please?. ..........................................................................................................................................................
espero que tomes a todas esa milf que solo estan de adornos , todas de los 72 pilares. ..................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ more more more more more more more more more more v more moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremorev
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ r18. "venelana". secta milf. ...............................................................................................................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ milf. .................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Hello there DarylArradaza. I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
I found it interesting that you use music as your power, I will wait for you to publish more chapters. ----------------------- consider as possible candidates of his harem: - grayfia. - "Ravel" Phoenix. - serafall. - yasaka. - Kuroka.
PLEASE UPDATE THIS THIS HAS SO MICH POTENTIAL AND IS ALREADY VERY GOOD. Why does everything good just stop so annoying.....................