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Funny and well written. I laughed so much. The protagonist is shameless but funny and his fruitless tries to get the two girls are hilarious. Instead of instant harem and senseless biggering we have girls with opinions and a story. Instead of faceslapping we have jokes and a real story. Instead of endlessly facing the same enemy again and again the real enemy just ends dead. This is a real good book. Really, really good!
If you like autocorrecting in your head while reading then you'll love this novel. In a single paragraph a persons gender can flip 3 or 4 times. Don't know if it is solely the translators fault or if it had a proofreader, either way someone is either lazy or a cretin.
Why this one feel like translated with MTL? Sigh.... ....... ....... ............ ..... ..... ...... ,......... .... ....... .... ... ..... ....... .....
I love this story, I temporarily dropped it around chapter 670 ish as the grammar kinda declined but reading the ending has made me love this story. It kinda falls into the pit of having a rushed ending feel but unlike others it really leaves me satisfied.
Started off ok, but the longer the book progressed, the more racist and nationalist it became, wouldn't recommend.
A good premise overall with it being different from the random cliches you may read everyday. The Pros: 1. The power system is easy to understand. 2. His cheat or system like thing are explained properly over the course of the story. 3. The humor is okay (can be weird sometimes especially if you don't understand it since there are no notes by the author) 4. Decent character development. The cons: 1. I'd just get the major one out fo the window first with it basically being pro China. (No not some name like huaxia but literally China since it's based in real world) This is okay at the start with light praises but boils down to down right racist later on and in any major events you'll read 'China' or 'Chinese' alot in the chapters. (There is literally a sentence which says the MC ate the Chinese military rations, he's not in a mixed military border but is just eating food provided during a school competition and the competition is just based for a prefecture and not the entire country) 2. Many times there's absolutely zero continuity between chapters with random events just changing going in the next chapter. 3. There is not much development of side characters at all. I mean the author talked about MCs first team in a way that you'd think they'll stay relevant to the story even if only a little. But they only show their names once or twice that too is just names and they disappear in their entirety. Another example would be the other guy in the second team who only has the bear minimal involvement despite talking about how important teams and stuff are. 4. The author tries to bring humor to serious scenes in the story and it downright destroys the entire momentum of it. 5. The fight scenes are basically trash. If I were to describe it they feel like they were written by a child who just had a higher vocabulary so he didn't use sound effects to write them but just put in description of those sound effects. Because of the trash rating system of webnovel I can't really rate it properly so I just randomly put stars to come somewhere close to where I would like it. And for the comments describing the translation as bad, they're simply trying to say that there are no author notes so they can't understand some of the events taking place (region specific humor or phrases). The work itself is entirely readable. All I can say is if you're fine with the racism then this would be a good read and about 4 stars but because of just the huge amounts of it, I'll only be giving it 2.
It's too good man, you guys should read this. I only have one request for the author. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. MOARRRRRRR
[img=faceslap] Translation Quality 1/5...the translator has a lot of problems with the genders of the characters most of the time, now he is confusing the galaxy stage with the galaxy stage (guessing Starfall stage) 1-Stardust Stage 2-Nebula Stage 3-Galaxy Stage 4-Starfall Stage 5-Starry Stage
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i'm glad this amazing work of art didn't get dropped ,I've been waiting for the update since 2020. two years of waiting and its still worth the wait, thank you. although the translation is a bit of problems (the he/she part) its an amazing read till now. Again Thank You[img=recommend]
well aside from Chinese propaganda , the book is alright. it's not great but also not the worst . [img=coins][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Dear Translator, Thank you so much for updating this novel. I kept this in my library of favourites hoping one day you would come back to it. I've been feeling sick and this has really made my day.
Have read until chapter 419 The concept of the story is not bad. The MC is OP, but not overly OP. Some anoying ticks of the MC, ofcourse. The world background is sometimes a bit unclear and/ or contradicting if i remember correctly. Have been binge reading so the details are a bit fuzzy. The translation is not bad, but either the author or the translator has/had a limited vocabolary or did not know how and where to use some words, such as frantically. It is used everywhere in every situation insted of quicly, hurriedly, anxiously etc. this applies for the first 300 chapters. The translation after chapter 300, which just reacently started again is much worse. Names are sometimes translated/ used differently in 3 following paragrapghs, without capital letters for the first name/ surname etc. The pronouns He/She is not used incorrectly and just plastered wherever. I strongly believe that this must be machine translated without editing as if you actually read the chapters after translation, you would correct the words according to the setting of the story, or I at least would hope they had enough pride in their work to do so. The way the dialogs are written are also a bit weird and "placed" weirdly, aswell as sometimes the same persons dialog is splitt up weirdly '....."'..... ..." which makes reading much harder and less enjoyable. Although i know it is a translated novel site which I chose myself and it is up to me to choose to spend money on it or not, I still feel a bit scamed when they use machine translation, or translate it on that kind of lvl.
The novel translation is back! what a good news! I hope this well stay until the chapter end! Please help support this novel so that it well stay being translated.
by the time I wrote this, this book hasn't been updated for 6 months while the chapter previously was 11 months ago. Probably drop due to low support.
I really liked the story and while most might not like the inclusion of Chinese phrases I think it brings more life and culture into the story. I have read many different translations of this story and I think only this translation does this story justice. It's very funny as well as vibrant . I hope to see further translations into the future. Thanks Sincerely, From an Avid Fan that will wait for your return
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Just don't stop, I need more chapters! Don't just disappear, this kind of character is now getting to the level where his strength will suddenly escalate due to more resources!
Kinda cookie cutter but still a good binge novel.but its dropped at 300 out of 1000+ so like most wn a disappointment ......................
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel and don't forget to give a review: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍
I wish Qidian still told us who the translators are so we could boycott them after dropping novels like this. Its a shame this novel was dropped, I stopped reading for a few months to let the chapters build up, come back and waddaya know.
bruh it's already dropped. don't waste your time or currency. again and again now everything's dropped. if privilege chps are gone so is the novel.
This is an enjoyable read. MC isn't always smart but people never are. The world is interesting and I'm curious where the story will take me. The updates leave me wondering though if this story has been dropped but then the last update had a large batch of chapters so maybe that's how this one is gonna be. long waits and large batches... assuming it's not dropped.
it is good. very numerous and interesting cultivation system. love the story and the mc. the only issue is that it is dropped. I wish someone would pick it up again so many bad ones are being translated super fast while good ones gets dropped.
The author have a sick mind about love between brother and sister...........-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Funny and well written. I laughed so much. The protagonist is shameless but funny and his fruitless tries to get the two girls are hilarious. Instead of instant harem and senseless biggering we have girls with opinions and a story. Instead of faceslapping we have jokes and a real story. Instead of endlessly facing the same enemy again and again the real enemy just ends dead. This is a real good book. Really, really good!
If you like autocorrecting in your head while reading then you'll love this novel. In a single paragraph a persons gender can flip 3 or 4 times. Don't know if it is solely the translators fault or if it had a proofreader, either way someone is either lazy or a cretin.
Why this one feel like translated with MTL? Sigh.... ....... ....... ............ ..... ..... ...... ,......... .... ....... .... ... ..... ....... .....
I love this story, I temporarily dropped it around chapter 670 ish as the grammar kinda declined but reading the ending has made me love this story. It kinda falls into the pit of having a rushed ending feel but unlike others it really leaves me satisfied.
Started off ok, but the longer the book progressed, the more racist and nationalist it became, wouldn't recommend.
A good premise overall with it being different from the random cliches you may read everyday. The Pros: 1. The power system is easy to understand. 2. His cheat or system like thing are explained properly over the course of the story. 3. The humor is okay (can be weird sometimes especially if you don't understand it since there are no notes by the author) 4. Decent character development. The cons: 1. I'd just get the major one out fo the window first with it basically being pro China. (No not some name like huaxia but literally China since it's based in real world) This is okay at the start with light praises but boils down to down right racist later on and in any major events you'll read 'China' or 'Chinese' alot in the chapters. (There is literally a sentence which says the MC ate the Chinese military rations, he's not in a mixed military border but is just eating food provided during a school competition and the competition is just based for a prefecture and not the entire country) 2. Many times there's absolutely zero continuity between chapters with random events just changing going in the next chapter. 3. There is not much development of side characters at all. I mean the author talked about MCs first team in a way that you'd think they'll stay relevant to the story even if only a little. But they only show their names once or twice that too is just names and they disappear in their entirety. Another example would be the other guy in the second team who only has the bear minimal involvement despite talking about how important teams and stuff are. 4. The author tries to bring humor to serious scenes in the story and it downright destroys the entire momentum of it. 5. The fight scenes are basically trash. If I were to describe it they feel like they were written by a child who just had a higher vocabulary so he didn't use sound effects to write them but just put in description of those sound effects. Because of the trash rating system of webnovel I can't really rate it properly so I just randomly put stars to come somewhere close to where I would like it. And for the comments describing the translation as bad, they're simply trying to say that there are no author notes so they can't understand some of the events taking place (region specific humor or phrases). The work itself is entirely readable. All I can say is if you're fine with the racism then this would be a good read and about 4 stars but because of just the huge amounts of it, I'll only be giving it 2.
It's too good man, you guys should read this. I only have one request for the author. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. MOARRRRRRR
[img=faceslap] Translation Quality 1/5...the translator has a lot of problems with the genders of the characters most of the time, now he is confusing the galaxy stage with the galaxy stage (guessing Starfall stage) 1-Stardust Stage 2-Nebula Stage 3-Galaxy Stage 4-Starfall Stage 5-Starry Stage
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ i'm glad this amazing work of art didn't get dropped ,I've been waiting for the update since 2020. two years of waiting and its still worth the wait, thank you. although the translation is a bit of problems (the he/she part) its an amazing read till now. Again Thank You[img=recommend]
well aside from Chinese propaganda , the book is alright. it's not great but also not the worst . [img=coins][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Dear Translator, Thank you so much for updating this novel. I kept this in my library of favourites hoping one day you would come back to it. I've been feeling sick and this has really made my day.
Have read until chapter 419 The concept of the story is not bad. The MC is OP, but not overly OP. Some anoying ticks of the MC, ofcourse. The world background is sometimes a bit unclear and/ or contradicting if i remember correctly. Have been binge reading so the details are a bit fuzzy. The translation is not bad, but either the author or the translator has/had a limited vocabolary or did not know how and where to use some words, such as frantically. It is used everywhere in every situation insted of quicly, hurriedly, anxiously etc. this applies for the first 300 chapters. The translation after chapter 300, which just reacently started again is much worse. Names are sometimes translated/ used differently in 3 following paragrapghs, without capital letters for the first name/ surname etc. The pronouns He/She is not used incorrectly and just plastered wherever. I strongly believe that this must be machine translated without editing as if you actually read the chapters after translation, you would correct the words according to the setting of the story, or I at least would hope they had enough pride in their work to do so. The way the dialogs are written are also a bit weird and "placed" weirdly, aswell as sometimes the same persons dialog is splitt up weirdly '....."'..... ..." which makes reading much harder and less enjoyable. Although i know it is a translated novel site which I chose myself and it is up to me to choose to spend money on it or not, I still feel a bit scamed when they use machine translation, or translate it on that kind of lvl.
The novel translation is back! what a good news! I hope this well stay until the chapter end! Please help support this novel so that it well stay being translated.
by the time I wrote this, this book hasn't been updated for 6 months while the chapter previously was 11 months ago. Probably drop due to low support.
I really liked the story and while most might not like the inclusion of Chinese phrases I think it brings more life and culture into the story. I have read many different translations of this story and I think only this translation does this story justice. It's very funny as well as vibrant . I hope to see further translations into the future. Thanks Sincerely, From an Avid Fan that will wait for your return
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Just don't stop, I need more chapters! Don't just disappear, this kind of character is now getting to the level where his strength will suddenly escalate due to more resources!
Kinda cookie cutter but still a good binge novel.but its dropped at 300 out of 1000+ so like most wn a disappointment ......................
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel and don't forget to give a review: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍
I wish Qidian still told us who the translators are so we could boycott them after dropping novels like this. Its a shame this novel was dropped, I stopped reading for a few months to let the chapters build up, come back and waddaya know.
bruh it's already dropped. don't waste your time or currency. again and again now everything's dropped. if privilege chps are gone so is the novel.
This is an enjoyable read. MC isn't always smart but people never are. The world is interesting and I'm curious where the story will take me. The updates leave me wondering though if this story has been dropped but then the last update had a large batch of chapters so maybe that's how this one is gonna be. long waits and large batches... assuming it's not dropped.
it is good. very numerous and interesting cultivation system. love the story and the mc. the only issue is that it is dropped. I wish someone would pick it up again so many bad ones are being translated super fast while good ones gets dropped.
The author have a sick mind about love between brother and sister...........-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Did Mc find his parents ?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]