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love the book seems very interesting as to where i am and just one small little complaint please upload faster? but keep up the good quality seems very interesting
Really okay. I liked it. Early on so it is hard to tell where it will go? I do like how you can see how much care is being put into this story. Really good. Keep it up.
This novel of mine I intend to be as perfect as possible. If you support my work I appreciate it. I will take criticism but atleast read the story first before that. I hope you enjoy reading my novel if not I hope you find something better. Like Library of Heaven's Path are Desolate Era. I'm writing this for fun. If in the future webnovel would like a contract with me. That would be nice. For now I hope you enjoy my work. Not a professional writer just a fair warning.
AuTHoR..update faster..first chp is dope..already hate the princess..bash her and kill her....anyway it cool..keep MC OP.but unilike other stories,,make him hide and use it secretly...like a hiding dragon? like he appears to be a cripple but has a secret identity as an OP MF??keep MC OP...add some romance and fluff...just build it...dont make MC a perverted idiot or make his lovers shallow...if harem keep it small
ce roman a un énorme potentiel ne laisser pas tomber cette fan fic svp ce serait dommage ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
love the book seems very interesting as to where i am and just one small little complaint please upload faster? but keep up the good quality seems very interesting
Really okay. I liked it. Early on so it is hard to tell where it will go? I do like how you can see how much care is being put into this story. Really good. Keep it up.
This novel of mine I intend to be as perfect as possible. If you support my work I appreciate it. I will take criticism but atleast read the story first before that. I hope you enjoy reading my novel if not I hope you find something better. Like Library of Heaven's Path are Desolate Era. I'm writing this for fun. If in the future webnovel would like a contract with me. That would be nice. For now I hope you enjoy my work. Not a professional writer just a fair warning.
AuTHoR..update faster..first chp is dope..already hate the princess..bash her and kill her....anyway it cool..keep MC OP.but unilike other stories,,make him hide and use it secretly...like a hiding dragon? like he appears to be a cripple but has a secret identity as an OP MF??keep MC OP...add some romance and fluff...just build it...dont make MC a perverted idiot or make his lovers shallow...if harem keep it small
ce roman a un énorme potentiel ne laisser pas tomber cette fan fic svp ce serait dommage ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.