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Abandono..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Anko isso, anko aquilo, o mundo gira em torno de anko. Será que os autores estão com falta de criatividade para encontrar outras kunoichis? Af, toda fic é a mesma coisa, Anko daqui, Anko dali, Anko de lá. Igual linhagem senju e uchiha. Patético e sem criatividade
buena novela y por fin podemos ponerla a descansar, nada de suspendida, sino abandonada algún día deseo poder leer el final que se merece jsjs
The idea is so interesting that I didn’t have to read it to know it’s going to be good
The protagonist chosen for the isekai reincarnation, is not one that has been done before, making the story plot more interesting, unlike the truck load of Sasuke or Naruto reincarnations, two bad the story was abandoned.
Where is the continuation???Where is the continuation??? Where is the continuation???Where is the continuation??? Where is the continuation???Where is the continuation???
so I enjoyed this novel quite abit would be my favorite but one thing makes me unable to make it that and that's the author. the author is active but no drop message or break message. like I would like at least a word for the inactivity of the story.
Great Fanfic keep it up just waiting for new updates SpamSpamSpamSpamSpamSpamSpamSpam
the only f**king reason i dont rate 5 stars is bcs this gem just getting dropped (no update for 2 month) and yeah i hate this but hjasjfahfafdkafk huft no hardfeeling love u author
TERLALU BIASA. MC BIASA BIASA SAJA. ALUR CERITA BIASA BIASA SAJA. TIDAK ADA YANG MENARIK DARI KARAKTER MC. INTINYA MEMBOSANKAN TIDAK ADA GAIRAH DAN MONOTON
Russian language: я жду новых глав и мне очень нравиться!!! Ps; У меня начинается ломка...
I actually did not expect much from this novel initially so even thoudh the title kept popping up in search results , I ignored it. BUT boy, I was wrong . I will simply say that its a hidden gem and one of the best naruto fan fic I have read(a must read ) . @ author please don't drop it
Okay here's my view after chapter 113 1. The mc or mizuki isn't op and is at most a very skilled chunin at this point. 2. But.....author keeps flexing him as to he super op in the future which gets annoying after a while, also his foreshadowing thing is annoying in my opinion only though. 3. The advancement of the mc is actually quite realistic as without much talent he has to make do with his future knowledge and hard work. 4. His use of Kagura's mind eye toned down version is only shown in the chunin exam when i believe he would have had a great deal of use for it in kusa arc and again in the bandit scenario and onwards, author hope you didn't forget about the jutsu and also i believe he needs more action with the summoning jutsu. SO ALL IN ALL I WOULD GIVE IN A SOLID 8/10.
Good writing and the mc is not op from the start he has to work hard and develop his skills and loses some fights. Really like the relationship between the mc and anko. There is no harem as of yet but the mc is still young and the harem must be fed hehe.
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I love this Naruto fan fiction and with it interesting approach for the main character. But most importantly stay awesome author 👍👍👍 Please don’t drop🙏🥺
I like it, I never seen a Mizuki rebirth fabric, kind of different from all of the fabrics that are out there, the story progresses nicely and the grammar is alright. I will be waiting for more chapters.
Essa é uma Fanfic com grande potencial para melhorar, se esforce e boa sorte Autor-San!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It's an ok story. Grammatical and spelling errors here and there. The author made a unique twist with the story with the MC being isekai'ed into someone who doesn't hail from the Senju/Uchiha clan for once so props to you. Also, I noticed the author has an unhealthy love for the word "whilst", granted they may be British but their writing doesn't match British English.
Its not horrible, just incredibly boring. Honestly, I'd have to say this is the most boring Naruto story I can remember reading. Every chapter starts pretty much the same, with the MC sleeping in (and having to rely on a 5 year old to wake him up) then goes to class has the same conversation, then observes his classmates. Only after that does the author tack on a couple of new things. The interaction between characters is pretty bland, and there isn't anything note worthy about the MC, he's just average. Boring.
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welcome back can't wait for more chapters 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
One of the best Naruto Fanfics out there ,If not the best when its finished. An Epic book by all means, Every element is well-thought-out and integrates each other perfectly. The storyline is amazing so far(100 characters), The MC isn't the brightest bulb in the box, He doesn't have dojutsu, Kekkie Genkai, or the 11th biju, just someone smart(most of the time) who knows what to do. The writing quality is top-notch, a little to no mistake in grammar or vocabulary, An excellent combination between dialogue and narrative, and very good transition between slow and fast paced.The characters are real(at least most of them), and not single dimensional. The Author could have done better but I like the simplicity thu. The Author atm has technical problems, He hasn't posted in a while. not sure If he's gonna drop it or not, hopefully not. The world is the same as the original anime world, no real added content so far. I hope the Author tries to reflect his heart into the novel to show his personality, instead of making mistakes on purpose which distract the readers and disturb the sequences.
GOT ME HOOKED: HEY WHERE IS MY PASTA? I WANT MY DINNER: IN A MOMENT SIR PASTA. GOT ME HOOKED : MY NAME NOT PASTA, I WANT PASTA OK? HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
pienso que la habilidad de las llamas blancas es genial y la da al mc un toque misterioso espero que pueda tener otras habilidades en el futuro más op
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🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒ceritanya cukup menarik, ya itu aja
I came here for Harem not gonna lie. Damm I hooked even though Harem part is left behind and the fighting scenes are really notables. Really love this fanfic. Now I am sticking to plot and story building. Both of them are brilliant . The most strongest point for this novel is MC in my opinion. MC is really likable
Shameless Author here to endorse myself! I am a first time writer so the novel is probably gonna be a little bit shaky in some parts. I based the novel on the thought that if a weeb was reincarnated as some random shinobi, what would they do? So, being the dumbass that I am I decided to write a novel about it. Hope you all enjoy the ride!
Abandono..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Anko isso, anko aquilo, o mundo gira em torno de anko. Será que os autores estão com falta de criatividade para encontrar outras kunoichis? Af, toda fic é a mesma coisa, Anko daqui, Anko dali, Anko de lá. Igual linhagem senju e uchiha. Patético e sem criatividade
buena novela y por fin podemos ponerla a descansar, nada de suspendida, sino abandonada algún día deseo poder leer el final que se merece jsjs
The idea is so interesting that I didn’t have to read it to know it’s going to be good
The protagonist chosen for the isekai reincarnation, is not one that has been done before, making the story plot more interesting, unlike the truck load of Sasuke or Naruto reincarnations, two bad the story was abandoned.
Where is the continuation???Where is the continuation??? Where is the continuation???Where is the continuation??? Where is the continuation???Where is the continuation???
so I enjoyed this novel quite abit would be my favorite but one thing makes me unable to make it that and that's the author. the author is active but no drop message or break message. like I would like at least a word for the inactivity of the story.
Great Fanfic keep it up just waiting for new updates SpamSpamSpamSpamSpamSpamSpamSpam
the only f**king reason i dont rate 5 stars is bcs this gem just getting dropped (no update for 2 month) and yeah i hate this but hjasjfahfafdkafk huft no hardfeeling love u author
TERLALU BIASA. MC BIASA BIASA SAJA. ALUR CERITA BIASA BIASA SAJA. TIDAK ADA YANG MENARIK DARI KARAKTER MC. INTINYA MEMBOSANKAN TIDAK ADA GAIRAH DAN MONOTON
Russian language: я жду новых глав и мне очень нравиться!!! Ps; У меня начинается ломка...
I actually did not expect much from this novel initially so even thoudh the title kept popping up in search results , I ignored it. BUT boy, I was wrong . I will simply say that its a hidden gem and one of the best naruto fan fic I have read(a must read ) . @ author please don't drop it
Okay here's my view after chapter 113 1. The mc or mizuki isn't op and is at most a very skilled chunin at this point. 2. But.....author keeps flexing him as to he super op in the future which gets annoying after a while, also his foreshadowing thing is annoying in my opinion only though. 3. The advancement of the mc is actually quite realistic as without much talent he has to make do with his future knowledge and hard work. 4. His use of Kagura's mind eye toned down version is only shown in the chunin exam when i believe he would have had a great deal of use for it in kusa arc and again in the bandit scenario and onwards, author hope you didn't forget about the jutsu and also i believe he needs more action with the summoning jutsu. SO ALL IN ALL I WOULD GIVE IN A SOLID 8/10.
Good writing and the mc is not op from the start he has to work hard and develop his skills and loses some fights. Really like the relationship between the mc and anko. There is no harem as of yet but the mc is still young and the harem must be fed hehe.
.x.x.x.xx.x.x.x.z.z.z.z.z.z...x.xz.x.x.z.z.x.x.xx.z.x.z.x..z.x..................xx .z..z.z.z.zz.z.z..z.z.zx....x..........z.z..x.zz..x.z.z.z.z.z.z.z..z.z.z..z..z.z.z.
I love this Naruto fan fiction and with it interesting approach for the main character. But most importantly stay awesome author 👍👍👍 Please don’t drop🙏🥺
I like it, I never seen a Mizuki rebirth fabric, kind of different from all of the fabrics that are out there, the story progresses nicely and the grammar is alright. I will be waiting for more chapters.
Essa é uma Fanfic com grande potencial para melhorar, se esforce e boa sorte Autor-San!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It's an ok story. Grammatical and spelling errors here and there. The author made a unique twist with the story with the MC being isekai'ed into someone who doesn't hail from the Senju/Uchiha clan for once so props to you. Also, I noticed the author has an unhealthy love for the word "whilst", granted they may be British but their writing doesn't match British English.
Its not horrible, just incredibly boring. Honestly, I'd have to say this is the most boring Naruto story I can remember reading. Every chapter starts pretty much the same, with the MC sleeping in (and having to rely on a 5 year old to wake him up) then goes to class has the same conversation, then observes his classmates. Only after that does the author tack on a couple of new things. The interaction between characters is pretty bland, and there isn't anything note worthy about the MC, he's just average. Boring.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ welcome back can't wait for more chapters 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
One of the best Naruto Fanfics out there ,If not the best when its finished. An Epic book by all means, Every element is well-thought-out and integrates each other perfectly. The storyline is amazing so far(100 characters), The MC isn't the brightest bulb in the box, He doesn't have dojutsu, Kekkie Genkai, or the 11th biju, just someone smart(most of the time) who knows what to do. The writing quality is top-notch, a little to no mistake in grammar or vocabulary, An excellent combination between dialogue and narrative, and very good transition between slow and fast paced.The characters are real(at least most of them), and not single dimensional. The Author could have done better but I like the simplicity thu. The Author atm has technical problems, He hasn't posted in a while. not sure If he's gonna drop it or not, hopefully not. The world is the same as the original anime world, no real added content so far. I hope the Author tries to reflect his heart into the novel to show his personality, instead of making mistakes on purpose which distract the readers and disturb the sequences.
GOT ME HOOKED: HEY WHERE IS MY PASTA? I WANT MY DINNER: IN A MOMENT SIR PASTA. GOT ME HOOKED : MY NAME NOT PASTA, I WANT PASTA OK? HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
pienso que la habilidad de las llamas blancas es genial y la da al mc un toque misterioso espero que pueda tener otras habilidades en el futuro más op
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ 🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒🐒ceritanya cukup menarik, ya itu aja
I came here for Harem not gonna lie. Damm I hooked even though Harem part is left behind and the fighting scenes are really notables. Really love this fanfic. Now I am sticking to plot and story building. Both of them are brilliant . The most strongest point for this novel is MC in my opinion. MC is really likable
Shameless Author here to endorse myself! I am a first time writer so the novel is probably gonna be a little bit shaky in some parts. I based the novel on the thought that if a weeb was reincarnated as some random shinobi, what would they do? So, being the dumbass that I am I decided to write a novel about it. Hope you all enjoy the ride!