Magic;World

LV 3

Daniel_Martinez_8972

It's seems interesting has a fairly good beginning.im hopeing the olo boy or whatever his name is( to lasy to go back to correct the spelling of his name!) Will jump into the pool to survive.looking forward to new chapters.i have only the slightest of complaints.the spaceing between paragraphs.its to much combine some of them.

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LV 2

Madsaber

I'm at 51 and I'm liking it despite it being quite slow sometimes... But some ideas you present there which I like. I hope you keep it up Author san

LV 15

DragonRiderOfHell

This is one of if not the best novel I have read in a long time. So I just wanted to say anyone reading this review should stop and just read the novel. Any way author-san keep on writing and giving us really really great chapters

LV 3

SainXer0666

Mc is kind dumb...slow development..so annoying..I don't even know if he will become OP or a loser..very very weak mc..lack of action more on talking more bluffing kind a suck..I hope it will improve in future..

LV 4

DizzyIdea

Hello everyone...if you have by chance stumbled upon this story then give it a try because who knows... that you might actually enjoy reading it. -The second thing is...I am not good with giving names...so don’t mind me if the characters get weird names or just popular names... -The third thing is actually about the writing style because some readers might find it bad...so 🐻 with it. -Another thing is commenting how you feel reading the story and if you find flaws... you can comment and I’ll try me best to correct it. And it will also help me improve my writing which will make my future story writing even good. #Actually my first novel that made past chapter ten in Webnovel and I’m thinking of making it even good with your help and opinions. But here comes the important notice! Boom! Boom! Boom! *Stick with it and after finished reading it, don’t forget to review it...because I want for my book to get rating very soon. M;W