Mythical Paramecia Fruit "Olympian" [Dropped]

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DarthVegito

The MC is a full blown retard who tells people the future and says some bs excuse lol then he gets “strong” and goes to a random ship with Celestial Dragons and he just does nothing and becomes a slave.... yeah don’t bother reading lol the MC is a complete beta

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MALAKITITI

I don't like this so I'll rate 1 star 😁 he's pretty much stupid and his personality is so childish . He keeps acting like a clown farting here farting there and he thinks it's funny. And he even looks so proud that he keeps telling future information of what will happen in the one piece world. So I literally wasted my time here

LV 5

Flat_Moon

It's only been 4 chapters at the time of this review but it only took 4 chapters to know that this is amazing. I noticed that the novel has OP MC tag which I understand for some that it's immediate disappoint as they mostly lack a certain charm. Well from the 4 chapters I can tell that the MC(Nova) Is vaguely powerful. At the moment he's strong for a kid. What makes him so strong from the get-go is his stable thinking it's very much his strongest ability. He's the quiet yet funny protagonist that has his own unique charm that separates him from the copy and paste OP MC MC(Nova) in all sense feels real. His comedic reaction and execution for every scenario very much fits with crazy work that is one piece. The writing is great and story developments well planned. The only set back I have for this novel is that even though the MC (Nova) Is quite the moment he begins to talk he spills on things for the future. I would normally stop immediately discard novels where MC tell characters as It at most times it becomes a mess. However, the novel is just too well constructed and the quite MC is just too good to pass up. The author has mentioned that he has planned everything so fingers crossed for the future plot. Please don't drop.

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holson_Charles

Do i even need to say something here.. this is just trash... don't waste your time... well i warned you.. ....

LV 10

KonekoLover

Besides taking Robin and Monet into his own crew later in the story, the Mc's crew is composed of Original Characters, and the best part not all of them are human. There is comedy, action, and some romance. There is a male in the crew so it's not a crew thats composed of his harem. The Mc isn't overpowered in the beginning. It's a weak to strong type of thing. The author has nailed Garps personality perfectly so I'm guessing that all of the other characters will be just like their anime versions. The author so far isn't adding any female to the harem. Little spoiler... for instance Hancock will end up with Luffy from the latest chapter that I just read. If that spoiler makes you not read this novel then it doesn't matter since you woulda left after you got to that part if all you cared about is the harem. The Mc has a unique fruit that so far hasn't shown it's TRUE potential yet.

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GGMissFortune

Contrived garbage nonsense start Contrived garbage nonsense start Contrived garbage nonsense start Contrived garbage nonsense start Contrived garbage nonsense start Contrived garbage nonsense start Contrived garbage nonsense start

LV 11

Tartarus

Good but the grammar and word error can be fixed to be better. The story are interesting. Character make a good laugh and keep the story interesting. The devil fruit are still a mistery. Keep up the good work.

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reading1dao1god

very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel. very good novel.

LV 5

God_of_Perverts

I'm loving this story so far. I really hope this story continues. The whole silent act and farts is funny. Idk how I feel with the Mc giving out future knowledge.

LV 5

GrandpaDoering

Funny, Comedic, Humorous!!? It's official this is my new favorite. Welp time to pump this bad boy with stones (~_~)// Review should be more than 140 characters

LV 5

Nameless_Godless

It's pretty average I guess. The author has a habit of over using jokes and bits. Like the fart joke, snail bit and the worse offender the lucky pervert bit for the starfish Fishman on his crew literally the lucky pervert bit happens like three times PER chapter that's atleast 63 times already. Another problem is the mc feels like he has made not progress from the start of the story till now the first 50 chapters are supposed to be were the mc grows fastest to keep people interested and through that time people will start to like the characters so that they will stick around after the growth speed slows down. Another problem is his fruit he never actively tries to learn about it and the name is false too it seems he has a limit of three Gods who's "Sparks" he can use not only that but his powers gives away sparks to his crew which in my opinion is THEE worse thing you can do while trying to create oc characters and change other characters it completely cheapens not only the Mc's uniqueness but also cheapens the characters around him cause you will no longer know if the characters achieved something or it was caused by relying on the mc's power. Also milks when she was introduced was a mess of a character and while better now she and Monet's relationship bit is being overused and feels like the only reason they exist is too fight. All in All try the story for yourself I wouldn't recommend it but I won't actively say you shouldn't read it either

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Daoist566717

i love it, its hilarous.there are so mutch fan fic that are way worst than it and are better rated i dont understand. keep it up im a fan ;o

LV 6

Pedro_Padre

The story is grand. Amazing, Still, it's taking a long time for the MC to find out what he can do with his abilities. Speaking of his abilities, what can he do with them? Will he have abilities of all Twelve Olympians? or will it be Thirteen because Hestia is still kind-of considered an Olympian? (Please be this option) If it's Twelve Olympians, who will you pick for the Twelveth or Twelfth (however you want to say it as)? The dick himself Dionysus, or the Sweet Angel of the Hearth: Hestia? Or will he have a single ability or domain from each of the Twelve or thirteen Olympians? If so, which ones as all the Olympians have multiple domains and multiple abilities from those domains: Zeus - Sky, Thunder, Lighting, Law, Order, Justice. Hera - Marriage, Women, Childbirth, Family. Poseidon - Seas, Water, Storms, Horses, Hurricanes, Earthquakes. Athena - Wisdom, Handicraft, Warfare. Artemis - Wilderness, Childbirth, Archery, Hunt, Virginity, Protection, Plague, Moon. Aphrodite - Love, Pleasure, Procreation, Beauty, Desire, Passion, Fertility. Demeter - Harvest, Nature, Agriculture, Fertility, the Seasons. Apollo - Archery, Plague, Philosophy, Prophecy, Light, the Sun, Truth, Inspiration, Poetry, Music, Arts, Medicine, Healing. Ares - War, Violence, Bloodshed, Manly Virtues (Even if this is questionable) Hephaestus - Forge, Craftsmanship, Fire, Volcanoes, Invention. Hermes - Travel, Communication, Travel, Thieves, Games, Commerce, Eloquence, Diplomacy. Dionysus (the dick) - Wine, Fertility, Ecstasy, Grape Vine, Festivity, Madness, Resurrection. (The Best) Hestia - Hearth, Fire Right Ordering of Domesticity, Family. Or will he be able to collect a group of people and assign them to be Olympian Gods, giving each domains of each of the Olympians making his future crew Olympians. (this is probably the least favorite option here but still not unwelcome) If he can assign people with abilities and he becomes Zeus king of the Olympians and Greek Gods, then would his first mate be Jupiter, leader of the Roman Gods? If so, then can't he collect 23 to 25 members instead of 11 to 12 members? Yup.........I went overboard with this..

LV 6

belkairos

I was pleasently surprised with this, usually i don't laugh that much with One Piece fanfics and here i was laughing like i watch the show, this is a great fic. Congrats on the author

LV 5

LifelessMan

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Zero_Zonk

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