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great chapter and story. please update more.great chapter and story. please update more.great chapter and story. please update more.great chapter and story. please update more.
Really great chapter. And really great story. The main character is awesome. The world building is good. And the updates are consistent. I binged the entire story. Please update more.
Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more. Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more.
If there is going to be romance add the tag...other than that great story so far😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
It needs more chapters! It needs more chapters! It needs more chapters! Very interesting fanfic of the Harry Potter universe! I just hope he doesn’t go dark
Compared to most of ****ty fan fics this one is way too good.please release more chapters.iam desperately waiting for next chapter.i have good expectations on this novel
So far it is very interesting what you are doing with his last name and I want to see how his personality will develop with the fact that 75% of the school fears or hates him and 25% thinks he is an idol or family of a god and I want See how you develop your relationships with others.
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So far it has my interest. To keep my interest don't make mc typical extreme pro-muggle-born and muggle lover. There are plenty of stories like these. What caught my interestest at the first place is mc origin being (gaunt) so make something out of it! Make him a dark wizard but not crazy like Voldemort. Maybe have blood supremacy factor somehow connecting with him while he is in Slytherin.
I read the first chapter and was already interested..... suggestion: just dont make this some angsty, tragic dark ****......keep light..maybe a bit dark...add some romance..but dont make the lovers cheat or choose someone taken..its stupid....add some fluff too....make MC Op...and a one man army type.... do tell if the novels going to be like whats mentioned above or not... just dont make this some angst and tragic ****...
no wonder he dropped 80% same woth canon and the 20% talking about a beta Mc ... ..................................................
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great chapter and story. please update more.great chapter and story. please update more.great chapter and story. please update more.great chapter and story. please update more.
Really great chapter. And really great story. The main character is awesome. The world building is good. And the updates are consistent. I binged the entire story. Please update more.
Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more. Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more.Cool chapter. Great story. Please update more.
If there is going to be romance add the tag...other than that great story so far😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
It needs more chapters! It needs more chapters! It needs more chapters! Very interesting fanfic of the Harry Potter universe! I just hope he doesn’t go dark
Compared to most of ****ty fan fics this one is way too good.please release more chapters.iam desperately waiting for next chapter.i have good expectations on this novel
So far it is very interesting what you are doing with his last name and I want to see how his personality will develop with the fact that 75% of the school fears or hates him and 25% thinks he is an idol or family of a god and I want See how you develop your relationships with others.
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍🐍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
So far it has my interest. To keep my interest don't make mc typical extreme pro-muggle-born and muggle lover. There are plenty of stories like these. What caught my interestest at the first place is mc origin being (gaunt) so make something out of it! Make him a dark wizard but not crazy like Voldemort. Maybe have blood supremacy factor somehow connecting with him while he is in Slytherin.
I read the first chapter and was already interested..... suggestion: just dont make this some angsty, tragic dark ****......keep light..maybe a bit dark...add some romance..but dont make the lovers cheat or choose someone taken..its stupid....add some fluff too....make MC Op...and a one man army type.... do tell if the novels going to be like whats mentioned above or not... just dont make this some angst and tragic ****...
no wonder he dropped 80% same woth canon and the 20% talking about a beta Mc ... ..................................................