Shatter: The System

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Disclaimer: I do not own plot or characters Tales of Demons and Gods Universe.
Waking up with a headache sucks.
Waking up with a headache in another world even more.
Waking up with a headache in a fiction world with a system…not so much.
Getting a message from GOD that the original protagonist is an idiot, and will doom the world, sucks like an adult c'tchullu.
And getting your ego petted by being told you're the only hope...feels nice.
But getting a defective system…And starting goodies…and being stranded god knows where…yeah, I'm fπ÷¶√ aren't I?
Tags: TDG, No harem(important), neutral mc, from weak to strong, system, male Mc, OC, SI

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The shameless author here with his 5-star rating. Just wanted to make a place where readers could say what they want from the story and where I could comfortably get notifications and reply. Now, about the story. First I must say that I'm writing this just for fun when I'm fed up with stories that have unmatchable plot holes. Second, I'm planning this story as I write it, meaning there will, without a doubt, be some parts that I'm unhappy about but too lazy to fix. Third, I have a fragile ego, so please don't incinerate it. Constructive criticism is welcomed thought, and offers on how to improve the story, what powers to get, what treasures not to miss is welcomed also. Finally, I'm asking you to not be an asshole and write "bad story" X100 due to one thing that didn't go in the story as you wanted(I'm looking at you, thirsty-chan) P.s I haven't watched One Piece, Bleach, Danmachi, and didn't read AST and forgot everything about MGA, so is you want any powers from them, please describe them ;)

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Idiot.....OP MC,,,,lone one man army style MC...cruel to those that come after him MC....romance isnt love at first sight of BS chinese novel type ****,,,,,[hopefully will be like this and it will be build]........what more could you ask for....its dope.....why idiot....well took time to find this ****...should be in FF suggestion: keep MC stupid OP...build romance and keep it happy and fluff and do build it...dont separate lovers.......faster updates would be appreciated...........world travel to other Chinese novels would also be appreciated,,,,,,,,,,,,,,GL and goodshow

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I will give you a five star for not wasting my time...thanks for saying up front its not a harem..well off to the next story! :) .................................

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