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The Land of Chaos

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Throughout the countless years, many people have attempted rule the great lands of chaos. Among the many people that have attempted to rise and claim the throne and rule the land of chaos , only 5 people were ever truly able gain a strong foothold in this land filled with terrifying horrors and mystifying treasures.

This is the tale and journey of a man who, not only held and mysterious and unknown past, but also a great kindness that only wished to help the people around him. Using his vast wisdom he taught countless legends and became a man that was thought of as a true saint.

(I’m a very inexperienced writer and am writing this novel to practice. Any criticism and guidance would be greatly appreciated. Oh, and just a note, I’m writing this on an i-pad so I apologise for any mistakes in grammar or punctuation. I will read over each of my chapters multiple times for mistakes after writing them, but I can’t guarantee that there will be no mistakes, I would appreciate it greatly if you could point them out. But, I hope you enjoy my novel and thank you!)

Just a final note, the first few chapters will be quite short as I am going to talk about a different ruler through the Land of Chaos’ history just to set a background, so I apologise if you find it annoying.

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Just a shameless writer here... umm... i don’t really have anything to say I just need to fill the 140 word requirement... Ah! I should say that if anyone wants me to change something in my writing to make it more readable please say, it helps. BYEBYE l!

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