บท 19: Remake in progress

I've come back and realised the sheer stupidity of my novel for the direction it's going towards. I'll be remaking the novel and fix it so there's a more serious tone and while less smutty, will still have it. Naturally i'll be doing more exploration of the powers in the tomes and remain more exclusive to them rather than just adding random stuff for no reason. The biggest major change would be the relation between the MC and Alice, Luka at the protagonist isn't a variable that I can't take out of the equation with his angelic and hero heritage. He is important to the continuation of the story and progress of the actual world itself, with Ilias heavily favoring Luka. In this remake I intend to undo my hormonal stupidity and randomness and apply more solidity and stay within the boundries of the Monster Girl Quest world.