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this is one of the best books i've read in all the e-book apps. the story is really well thought out to the point of how many slaves come to baymard and how to divide them in various sectors for efficiency and effectiveness. love this book. I'll make sure to read it till the end no matter how long it takes. also hats off to the author, you did extremely well with this book. hope to see many other books by you in the future😇😇
Idk if this actually contains any spoilers but, just to be safe, I've marked this as spoiler. This story was awesome. Emphasis on "was", for more than one reason. First, naturally, because it's already ended. Second, because despite being awesome from the beginning, the author rushed the ending, maybe only a little better than what they did in The Promised Neverland anime. Now, according to the author, people were allegedly getting annoyed with how long the story had been going on. But I honestly felt that there was so much more story that could have come out of this. But Lumydee compressed about a volume or two worth of story into like 2 chapters or something… I really hope that his other series don't have a rushed ending to them. And maybe, if the gods will it, there can be a sequel to King of Tech which does not have a rushed ending… Because, the thing with me is, I'm always happy with more of a good thing. So, naturally, I find it extra annoying when a good thing is cut short…
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Vamos lá, vai em português mesmo ...... no inicio eu até gostei e estava mais para ver as tecnologias do que o processo de inicio até a obtenção do produto, os cara já tinha máquinas avançadas em pouco tempo, eu relevei isso porque queria ver como ele faria ..... agora tem coisa que não relevo, os inimigos do MC são lixo no mínimo, detestei todos sem qualquer exceção e não brinco, todos são extremamente burros, o mais próximo que achei decente foi aquele cara que queria ser rei em Terique, ele pelo menos estranhou se o MC tinha armas mais avançadas, o resto é um bando de imbecis que nem sei como esta no poder, os caras não estranham da onde tudo veio? Nenhum acha estranho ele ter tantos aliados? Todo mundo protegendo ele? Os plebeus pensariam assim, os nobres NÃO. O MC é vergonhoso, no mínimo, ele é escravo do sistema que é outra merda, ele não é tão inteligente quanto se pensa, 260 de QI para seguir sempre a emoção ...... por exemplo ..... para que leis neste mundo onde estupradores vagam e aproveitadores vivem? Ele toma decisões questionáveis e todo mundo subestima ele demais cara ..... todos pensam em soluções simplesmente impossíveis, o cara lá de Morgan acha que sequestraram um estudioso de lá para o construir Baymard, então PORQUE RAIOS O PAIS DELE NÃO É ASSIM? Já que eles são mais fortes e todo o besteirol? não faz sentido essa conclusão ...... o reino das bruxas nem tem sustento, a fundação é nula e nem sei como tal reino prospera, as mulheres oprimem os homens e nem questionam tal comportamento???? Os homens também esperam a morte sem tentar lutar ..... A escala do mundo é pior ainda, só que isso seria possível relevar, caso a população não fosse tão grande ..... cara a capital de Arcadina tem 10 milhões de pessoas, na idade média ...... sim, na idade média .. .... amigo, isso não existe, Tem capital de país que não chega a metade disso hahaha, e olha que nem é a maior capital do mundo, ta brincando comigo? Autor, vou ser sincero aqui ...... eu acho que você deve fazer um remake desta história, com tudo que você aprendeu ao escrever ela ..... chuto que vai ficar melhor com você revisando e melhorando no que errou. Abraços
Story was good. It was wish fulfillment level stuff, but it was the good kind of wish fulfillment. But that ending… Man, that ending. Marginally better than The Promised Neverland anime and RTW. My guy nonetheless speedran the thing. Just ate up the whole interstellar arc and gave us like a few paragraphs worth of aliens at best. This will always be my only issue with this series. The ending came way too quickly and completely out of nowhere!
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This book took me through my lonely days and nights, had strict parents so was restricted to seeing lots of things in the world but this book was like a mirror to the outside world and I am happy I followed it through all the way. I was 16 when I stared this and it has inspired me to write mine I have a few stories and lovely fans thank you so much for your inspiration and I really loved the referencing of characters to the real world😅will forever be my favourite ❤️❤️Thank you. Good bye landon🥹🙏🏼
well, I should say it's a good book, with people who wanted to read sci-fi+fantasy genre
Novel is good and Story development is also good but it feels like I am reading a Thesis. Try to add more emotions for Characters and Character Developments. Add little bit more Feelings. I skip lot of Chapters since I know about the inventions and it is not Relevant. But you have no other options other than writing it. This is just my opinion. But most of the people don't find this issue. May be it is because I read too many Novels. Most of the Time I drop novels before 500 Chapters if it is Boring or Repetitive
I am not one for writing reviews but this book deserves it. From the onset, it's a great story. Loved it all the way to the end. Only problem is that the last thirsty chapters were rushed to conclusion but I can understand the author wanting to let it go after all the investments out in.
I wanted to stard reading this story seriously but I ama binge reader & don’t like it when the story yet to finish. so can anyone give me a hint when/which chapter will this story end? how many chapter are left?[img=Speechless][img=Why]
What makes kingdom building so fun for me its the challenges and how scientific knowledge is used to solve those challenges but this novel there are no challenges so far am on chapter 138 and everything is going smoothly like I don't get that feeling like what will happen next . so far this novel is just not fun am continuing reading with a hope this will change
The story is going great so far. To be honest, you might have to work a bit on some mistakes that can be seen with the translations frequently. Especially, the spelling mistakes. I wonder if it's autocorrect or a simple typo, but please work on it. Otherwise, the story is cool and engaging. I've been reading this work for 1 and a half years, and it's a great one overall. I wish this story ends on a happy, fantastic and mind-blowing note. <3
Hey i wanted to ask will you update amusment park novel or is it abonded? if so why cause it was preatty good. so yeah please update it soon
I was thoroughly enjoying this book but as of 15 May 2024, it’s been about 2 weeks since the last update. I’m a little worried that the author has either given up on the book or has stopped updating the story for some reason. I hope the author gets back to this soon as I’ve been enjoying this a lot.
This novel kingdom building time is too fast. The author use too much explanation when not needed but too little when needed. Plus too many wrong information. Like Muslim vs byzantine empire in chapter 379 . 200 Muslim ship's won against 500 byzantine ships . But the author said that byzantine won by a huge mergin. Plus author doesn't know about real world technology. People have automatic door but not a camera? Author also doesn't know how king's work.
PERFECT for me! ..............................................................................................................................................................
This has always been of my favs, the daily lives of the people, the way the world progresses, the people's reaction to stuff is always such a delight to read. I just want to thank you author for writing this one and hope you continue this as long as you can
Love the story. It takes a little time and couple of chapters to get used to the story but it's worth it. The world building is particularly awesome.
I think this book is really good that it deserves its own manga and anime adaption. When will you update on freewn again?
A beautiful world that feels lived in and the author gives so many characters their own lives and struggles. The concept is amazing and uses it to keep the direction of the story going with different challenges the protagonist must face. This series is dear to me.
The novel feels like it is rushed at the beginning. MC gets an iron ore mine and automatically pumping out steam engines, as if it only takes iron. All characters are too 1 dimensional. RTW and TOS are much better alternatives to read.
I honestly like reading it but the repetition in the writing is annoying. After 1100 chapters, you can no longer ignore it when the author sais, "one should know...'info dump'...",or "yes,bla bla bla", and the worst of all 6 different paragrpahs after that explaining the same thing with different words. like we get it.You also don't need 4 chapters to explains how a fleet is moving to land with the same exact words used abuot every other fleet and army thats about to fight you don't need 4 chapters for that. Also the "play time is over" comment about obviously people 'fighting' using '30%'of their power then next chapter after that comment, boom 2 paragraphs describing how the 'good guys' absolutely dumpestered the enemy...Then we have the usual grammatical errors still, and ofcourse the plot armour which is, 'fine'. 'Solid' 7/10...maybe
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A very fun and lighthearted read. Greatly looking forward to the future phases of development of Baymard as more AT is unlocked.
Lovely book.But sometimes it's slow, most of the story is about production and development of economy. Anyway the author is fantastic
I love your novel, I hope you continue to the end of what you have planned for this novel
Let's go with the good first: = the story is great - it's about introducing technology to medieval world that have some level of fantasy = not that technical - most of the time author just explain 1 aspect then continue the story = a bit like slice of life - not too many inside problem, most of the time mc just try to solve outside his kingdom problem, the problem inside the kingdom usually solve by introducing more technology Now the bad stuff: = editor - this novel seriously need a good editor, too many misspelled or wrong choice of word, there also grammar problem but not major in my problem, even mc name sometimes misspelled, this is really big problem that want me to stop reading the novel = ending of an arc - some of the arc just end abruptly, there is no aftermath details
It's not an ultimate story, but it's fun in its own way. Has this work been dropped or is it on hiatus? Why it seems so slow and paused the updates. Well will Lucy and Landon have a son or daughter?
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I renounce everything that contradicts with islamic law .............................................................................................
good plot, but there are so many things we dont get explained and he just randomly gets things from the system that we dont know of. and when there is a problem for the MC like build a car, and he just dose it even when he dosent have the necessary tools. and he says he dosent have superpowers yet he can teleport and delete memories (not superpowers but like it) but i like the plot so im gonna continue reading
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ this is one of the best books i've read in all the e-book apps. the story is really well thought out to the point of how many slaves come to baymard and how to divide them in various sectors for efficiency and effectiveness. love this book. I'll make sure to read it till the end no matter how long it takes. also hats off to the author, you did extremely well with this book. hope to see many other books by you in the future😇😇
Idk if this actually contains any spoilers but, just to be safe, I've marked this as spoiler. This story was awesome. Emphasis on "was", for more than one reason. First, naturally, because it's already ended. Second, because despite being awesome from the beginning, the author rushed the ending, maybe only a little better than what they did in The Promised Neverland anime. Now, according to the author, people were allegedly getting annoyed with how long the story had been going on. But I honestly felt that there was so much more story that could have come out of this. But Lumydee compressed about a volume or two worth of story into like 2 chapters or something… I really hope that his other series don't have a rushed ending to them. And maybe, if the gods will it, there can be a sequel to King of Tech which does not have a rushed ending… Because, the thing with me is, I'm always happy with more of a good thing. So, naturally, I find it extra annoying when a good thing is cut short…
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Vamos lá, vai em português mesmo ...... no inicio eu até gostei e estava mais para ver as tecnologias do que o processo de inicio até a obtenção do produto, os cara já tinha máquinas avançadas em pouco tempo, eu relevei isso porque queria ver como ele faria ..... agora tem coisa que não relevo, os inimigos do MC são lixo no mínimo, detestei todos sem qualquer exceção e não brinco, todos são extremamente burros, o mais próximo que achei decente foi aquele cara que queria ser rei em Terique, ele pelo menos estranhou se o MC tinha armas mais avançadas, o resto é um bando de imbecis que nem sei como esta no poder, os caras não estranham da onde tudo veio? Nenhum acha estranho ele ter tantos aliados? Todo mundo protegendo ele? Os plebeus pensariam assim, os nobres NÃO. O MC é vergonhoso, no mínimo, ele é escravo do sistema que é outra merda, ele não é tão inteligente quanto se pensa, 260 de QI para seguir sempre a emoção ...... por exemplo ..... para que leis neste mundo onde estupradores vagam e aproveitadores vivem? Ele toma decisões questionáveis e todo mundo subestima ele demais cara ..... todos pensam em soluções simplesmente impossíveis, o cara lá de Morgan acha que sequestraram um estudioso de lá para o construir Baymard, então PORQUE RAIOS O PAIS DELE NÃO É ASSIM? Já que eles são mais fortes e todo o besteirol? não faz sentido essa conclusão ...... o reino das bruxas nem tem sustento, a fundação é nula e nem sei como tal reino prospera, as mulheres oprimem os homens e nem questionam tal comportamento???? Os homens também esperam a morte sem tentar lutar ..... A escala do mundo é pior ainda, só que isso seria possível relevar, caso a população não fosse tão grande ..... cara a capital de Arcadina tem 10 milhões de pessoas, na idade média ...... sim, na idade média .. .... amigo, isso não existe, Tem capital de país que não chega a metade disso hahaha, e olha que nem é a maior capital do mundo, ta brincando comigo? Autor, vou ser sincero aqui ...... eu acho que você deve fazer um remake desta história, com tudo que você aprendeu ao escrever ela ..... chuto que vai ficar melhor com você revisando e melhorando no que errou. Abraços
Story was good. It was wish fulfillment level stuff, but it was the good kind of wish fulfillment. But that ending… Man, that ending. Marginally better than The Promised Neverland anime and RTW. My guy nonetheless speedran the thing. Just ate up the whole interstellar arc and gave us like a few paragraphs worth of aliens at best. This will always be my only issue with this series. The ending came way too quickly and completely out of nowhere!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This book took me through my lonely days and nights, had strict parents so was restricted to seeing lots of things in the world but this book was like a mirror to the outside world and I am happy I followed it through all the way. I was 16 when I stared this and it has inspired me to write mine I have a few stories and lovely fans thank you so much for your inspiration and I really loved the referencing of characters to the real world😅will forever be my favourite ❤️❤️Thank you. Good bye landon🥹🙏🏼
well, I should say it's a good book, with people who wanted to read sci-fi+fantasy genre
Novel is good and Story development is also good but it feels like I am reading a Thesis. Try to add more emotions for Characters and Character Developments. Add little bit more Feelings. I skip lot of Chapters since I know about the inventions and it is not Relevant. But you have no other options other than writing it. This is just my opinion. But most of the people don't find this issue. May be it is because I read too many Novels. Most of the Time I drop novels before 500 Chapters if it is Boring or Repetitive
I am not one for writing reviews but this book deserves it. From the onset, it's a great story. Loved it all the way to the end. Only problem is that the last thirsty chapters were rushed to conclusion but I can understand the author wanting to let it go after all the investments out in.
I wanted to stard reading this story seriously but I ama binge reader & don’t like it when the story yet to finish. so can anyone give me a hint when/which chapter will this story end? how many chapter are left?[img=Speechless][img=Why]
What makes kingdom building so fun for me its the challenges and how scientific knowledge is used to solve those challenges but this novel there are no challenges so far am on chapter 138 and everything is going smoothly like I don't get that feeling like what will happen next . so far this novel is just not fun am continuing reading with a hope this will change
The story is going great so far. To be honest, you might have to work a bit on some mistakes that can be seen with the translations frequently. Especially, the spelling mistakes. I wonder if it's autocorrect or a simple typo, but please work on it. Otherwise, the story is cool and engaging. I've been reading this work for 1 and a half years, and it's a great one overall. I wish this story ends on a happy, fantastic and mind-blowing note. <3
Hey i wanted to ask will you update amusment park novel or is it abonded? if so why cause it was preatty good. so yeah please update it soon
I was thoroughly enjoying this book but as of 15 May 2024, it’s been about 2 weeks since the last update. I’m a little worried that the author has either given up on the book or has stopped updating the story for some reason. I hope the author gets back to this soon as I’ve been enjoying this a lot.
This novel kingdom building time is too fast. The author use too much explanation when not needed but too little when needed. Plus too many wrong information. Like Muslim vs byzantine empire in chapter 379 . 200 Muslim ship's won against 500 byzantine ships . But the author said that byzantine won by a huge mergin. Plus author doesn't know about real world technology. People have automatic door but not a camera? Author also doesn't know how king's work.
PERFECT for me! ..............................................................................................................................................................
This has always been of my favs, the daily lives of the people, the way the world progresses, the people's reaction to stuff is always such a delight to read. I just want to thank you author for writing this one and hope you continue this as long as you can
Love the story. It takes a little time and couple of chapters to get used to the story but it's worth it. The world building is particularly awesome.
I think this book is really good that it deserves its own manga and anime adaption. When will you update on freewn again?
A beautiful world that feels lived in and the author gives so many characters their own lives and struggles. The concept is amazing and uses it to keep the direction of the story going with different challenges the protagonist must face. This series is dear to me.
The novel feels like it is rushed at the beginning. MC gets an iron ore mine and automatically pumping out steam engines, as if it only takes iron. All characters are too 1 dimensional. RTW and TOS are much better alternatives to read.
I honestly like reading it but the repetition in the writing is annoying. After 1100 chapters, you can no longer ignore it when the author sais, "one should know...'info dump'...",or "yes,bla bla bla", and the worst of all 6 different paragrpahs after that explaining the same thing with different words. like we get it.You also don't need 4 chapters to explains how a fleet is moving to land with the same exact words used abuot every other fleet and army thats about to fight you don't need 4 chapters for that. Also the "play time is over" comment about obviously people 'fighting' using '30%'of their power then next chapter after that comment, boom 2 paragraphs describing how the 'good guys' absolutely dumpestered the enemy...Then we have the usual grammatical errors still, and ofcourse the plot armour which is, 'fine'. 'Solid' 7/10...maybe
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ A very fun and lighthearted read. Greatly looking forward to the future phases of development of Baymard as more AT is unlocked.
Lovely book.But sometimes it's slow, most of the story is about production and development of economy. Anyway the author is fantastic
I love your novel, I hope you continue to the end of what you have planned for this novel
Let's go with the good first: = the story is great - it's about introducing technology to medieval world that have some level of fantasy = not that technical - most of the time author just explain 1 aspect then continue the story = a bit like slice of life - not too many inside problem, most of the time mc just try to solve outside his kingdom problem, the problem inside the kingdom usually solve by introducing more technology Now the bad stuff: = editor - this novel seriously need a good editor, too many misspelled or wrong choice of word, there also grammar problem but not major in my problem, even mc name sometimes misspelled, this is really big problem that want me to stop reading the novel = ending of an arc - some of the arc just end abruptly, there is no aftermath details
It's not an ultimate story, but it's fun in its own way. Has this work been dropped or is it on hiatus? Why it seems so slow and paused the updates. Well will Lucy and Landon have a son or daughter?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I renounce everything that contradicts with islamic law .............................................................................................
good plot, but there are so many things we dont get explained and he just randomly gets things from the system that we dont know of. and when there is a problem for the MC like build a car, and he just dose it even when he dosent have the necessary tools. and he says he dosent have superpowers yet he can teleport and delete memories (not superpowers but like it) but i like the plot so im gonna continue reading
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